Spiritual Qi Revival: Obtaining a Breathing Technique from the Start

It seems okay so far, with almost no poisonous points. Those comments about giving Guo Jia exercises and so on are the logic that a normal person should have. He has the thoughts and strength that a pioneer should have when he has just started spiritual energy. His human touch is also okay, and his strength is also in the first echelon. According to current standards. By the mid-small stage, you can almost become a nation, but you just won't take this path. There is no need to make it clear in the text that the protagonist wants to become a saint and become an ancestor. It is also a bit sensitive to write it. If you continue to write it like this and add a few more highlights, it will be fine with a rating of 8.5. I was so stupid, I thought it would become a classic, but it turned out to be the same old story. The most unbearable thing is that my goddaughter is here, and it is completely useless. Not to mention the trade talent, no matter how high it is, it is not as good as the protagonist. Moreover, there is a little Taoist nun who likes the protagonist. The protagonist also knows that I can have one by myself. I can only say that it relieves boredom.

It seems okay for the time being. As for some people who say that the protagonist giving all his skills and information to the country is a bit poisonous, it depends on the individual. At least for now, the protagonist just wants to protect himself at first. Before the world changes, someone stronger will come forward, so that no one will covet what he gets, because he will be safe if he gives it all to the country. But things changed too quickly later on, with the seizure of spiritual weapons and the second burst of spiritual energy. Judging from the current content, the danger of coveting by forces in the past was very small. However, animal mutation and the emergence of monsters taking possession of the body are now new dangers. It seems wise for the protagonist and the country to share information now. After all, there will only be more and more enemies in the future.

So far it looks good, keep writing. If the writing is not good later, the rating will be changed.

This is a great book. It's a great book. I don't understand, the plot behind it is extremely perfunctory

Okay, I've looked at the previous few pictures so far. The handling of getting the opportunity in the early stage is pretty good, inviting people to join in and share the meat. It depends on how you write it later.

Author, let me give you an opinion. It depends on what you think. The next step should be to quickly improve the protagonist's realm. How to improve? Where do the resources come from? So at this time, it is necessary to rely on nuclear bombs to deter, and directly use resources to develop quickly. To put it bluntly, when there is no wisdom, it will be more difficult to do it. Because if you fight, it will definitely explode at that time. But when you have wisdom, you can negotiate and threaten. To put it bluntly, as long as you can't carry a nuclear bomb, any carbon-based organism can be negotiated.

To be honest, who doesn't have any idea of ​​​​contributing to the country and the people? After all, we live under the red flag. No matter how many complaints we are born in China, we are unable to do something. If we have the ability, don't we want to do something for us Chinese people.

The writing is quite good so far. The protagonist's outlook is basically positive, and the choices he makes are basically those of normal people. Don't be misled by some incorrect comments.

It's good, at least the main character isn't a dog licker. The first opportunity was handled quite well.

I read it all night Overall, it's very innovative and fascinating. I hope I can continue writing it.