A Naruto story that keeps the official couples together and adds new plotlines. Come and give it a try!
After returning from the Land of Waves mission, Konoha has gained a training fanatic.
He does missions during the day, gets worked to the bone by Guy in the afternoon, and spars with Iruka at night. Once he gets home, he still has his shadow clones train.
Naruto’s life begins to change.
A genius long overlooked by Konohagakure emerges in spectacular fashion.
Now, let’s continue following this ninja, the number-one unpredictable knucklehead, and see where he goes.
Surprisingly, it's pretty good. The introduction could be revised, remember to mark it as original voice, and some of the characters are a bit OOC but not serious in their swearing. I hope they can be restrained. It's very reasonable and interesting to read along the way. Hmm... I hope it can be respected for people who don't have many scenes in the original work (referring to Kankuro's attitude towards Taimari, this guy is a younger brother who is afraid of his sister [facepalm])
Because it's a new book and needs support, I'm giving it five stars in advance. So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and I'm very interested in reading it. I hope it maintains the standard... I'll add more if I find it annoying, but from what I've seen so far, it shouldn't be enough to warrant a negative review.
Not bad, not many Naruto articles willing to comment
Surprisingly, it's pretty good. The introduction could be revised, remember to mark it as original voice, and some of the characters are a bit OOC but not serious in their swearing. I hope they can be restrained. It's very reasonable and interesting to read along the way. Hmm... I hope it can be respected for people who don't have many scenes in the original work (referring to Kankuro's attitude towards Taimari, this guy is a younger brother who is afraid of his sister [facepalm]) Because it's a new book and needs support, I'm giving it five stars in advance. So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and I'm very interested in reading it. I hope it maintains the standard... I'll add more if I find it annoying, but from what I've seen so far, it shouldn't be enough to warrant a negative review.
Not bad, not many Naruto articles willing to comment
It's still pretty good so far (see Chapter 30
Very interesting and funny