Pokemon: It All Started with Finding an Egg

I have read Chapter 62 so far, so let's give it five stars first. It can be seen that the author is serious about writing, and the writing is not bad. Let me give you some suggestions while reading the book. The first is that the cruelty of the Pokémon wild world and the harmonious atmosphere within the city seem to be conflicting or fragmented. Secondly, it is unclear whether Team Rocket wants to be portrayed as a pure villain or an image of both good and evil, but the plot of the Three Idiots is really abrupt. It might be better to bury a branch line to synchronize with the protagonist's itinerary. That's all 😂

It's rare to find a book that fits the anime, so I'll look forward to it. If you want to truly match the anime's combat power, the upper limit of the protagonist must be set. After all, the King of Heaven can defeat the second-level gods, but the champion cannot deal with the first-level gods. The gap between the first-level gods and the second-level gods is much greater than the gap between the champion and the king. There are also some fans who write about levels and have strengthened the trainers too much, such as the legendary level 90+ champion, which is over 80+ levels, etc. Almost everyone has been raised 10 levels starting from the gym leader. There are also some protagonists who upgrade like riding on a rocket. To put it bluntly, I can't reach the full level even in the amount of time I play the game [Chigua]

I saw the author writing this novel from Douyin. I hope to write out the original flavor of Pokémon, show everyone the author's views on Pokémon, and open up a different world of Pokémon!!!

It feels pretty good. Although I watch your videos every day, my writing style and details can be improved 🤔 Thank you.

It looks good, and the writing style is okay. At least I found it with great difficulty among hundreds of AI novels. It is a novel written by hand.

So far, it's okay from the perspective of pacing and description. The main content of Pokémon stories is to look at the Pokémon collected by the protagonist. Personally, I think they are all popular ones with good looks and nothing ugly.

Come on, come on, come on

Look, look, look

As a Pokemon protagonist with no system and no time travel, I think it's pretty good, the writing is also OK, the emotional scenes and memories are well inserted, and it's worthy of a review!

It's from Douyin, give it a try