Mushoku Tensei: Sword of Silver Light

How should I put it? The writing is good, but there is a lot of rhetoric. I like the character creation so far, but I prefer Lily and Wucp, but it seems that the author is currently planning to pursue romance? Let's wait and see. If the author decides which way to go, he will write an introduction or a summary. All in all, it is still good and worth reading.

The writing was a bit immature in the early stages, but it gets better and better later on; the protagonist is gradually growing and becoming stronger, and the way he becomes stronger is reasonable and not obtrusive, and he will even develop his own abilities, unlike some that just use them without developing them at all. The protagonist's outlook on life is also very normal. I especially appreciate what she said: I will only do the right thing. It's so exciting. Haji, you are a guy with great talent and a great future [please take a closer look]

If you can't stand it, you must persevere. I read it for about a day and got to the latest chapter. The author's writing style has been growing, and it can be seen that the author has worked very hard. In terms of the work, I feel that the psychological growth of the protagonist is still very good, but I still feel that something is missing. However, I think it is still good. I hope the author will give the cp of the heroine to Boss Long. I still want to see Boss Long and the protagonist interact. When I see Boss Long, it will be strange. Maybe the author did not think it through. But based on the performance of the original Dragon Boss, I still think it's okay? Anyway, I feel very comfortable watching it

I have finished reading the first volume so far. It is well written, the plot design is reasonable, and the characters are well created. However, there are too many rhetorical embellishments. It is not bad when used in the environmental background. However, the specific events and psychological descriptions are not necessary. They seem redundant and cannot find the focus. Moreover, some places are reused, such as the cheetah, the maggots of the tarsal bones, and the part about the dream world (in case... In case). It always gives me a feeling of ""I have read this sentence"". Overall, it is still a good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

After seeing Chapter 20, I have a suggestion. The use of punctuation marks should be consistent: use quotation marks when they are needed in a conversation, and not when they are not. I remember that colons cannot replace quotation marks. Make it a habit. Based on my experience of reading light novels: write more dialogue, more action, appropriate demeanor and appearance, and less rhetoric. The main perspective is usually integrated into the main text, and the auxiliary perspective is usually in quotation marks. (Not absolute, personal experience). Also use less long and difficult sentences. This is it for now, I will change the book review later depending on the situation.

The first-person perspective switches back and forth, and you need to read slowly to figure out who the perspective is switching to. Personally, I prefer this type without system. I feel like I could add a "fan work" to the tag. When I first started reading it, I thought it was just a jobless world view, so I was shocked when I saw the name Rudy.

Although there is nothing particularly eye-catching, and there are no extras, which cannot satisfy a bloodthirsty audience like me, but at least the story is well told, there are no big loopholes in the logic, and there are no extremely poisonous points. I give it a five-star support.

The book is very good, and it is considered one of the rare masterpieces among non-professionals. However, there are a lot of typos, and if you don't understand the original work, it may seem a bit difficult. Come on, author! [Learned]

The early writing of this book was too immature, and it was obvious that this was the first time I wrote it. AI was obviously used in the later stage, but according to my investigation, the plot was written by the author himself. It is said that the author later regretted using AI. If you don't mind it, you can usually listen to it instead of watching it. The author himself has a very good attitude. Basically, if you leave a comment, he will reply √[Salute]

It's very good among jobless fics, with no traces of AI. The writing is a little immature at the beginning, but it improves later on. Ignoring the malicious ratings, overall it's pretty good. At least it's not uncomfortable to watch. I'm looking forward to the protagonist and Boss Long becoming a couple, and preferably living forever😊