The Outcast: Threads Unraveled

Ye Qing's character is too distinct, but there is no relationship line with Wang Ye, and this talent is really powerful. The Thousand Silk Hand is a medicine, the Moon Leading Hand is poison, and he also developed the Thousand Silk Hand, Thousand Silk Hands, which is really powerful. The abilities are all silk threads. Different threads feel like they are derivatives of the Thousand Silk Hands, and she is not a perfect heroine. She has her own personality and shortcomings, which is quite good. I feel that the heroine will grow into a field control assistant.

There is no time travel, no system, and not much description of appearance. It feels like the characters in Under One Person. I really like it. I have been reading the book for a week, and this update has enough words to read! ! ! I really like Ye Qing's character. He is full of life, talent, and hard work. His Thousand Silk Hand skills are really good. They are all derivatives of Silk Thread, so they are not obtrusive!

Give it four stars first to show your encouragement. The idea is good, and the heroine design is okay, but the writing is a bit naive, and the dialogue is like a template, too regular, without continuity, and too dull. There are also some changes in perspective, which are too rigid. These can be practiced slowly, so please help the author. There is also character design, because it is a fan, I suggest that the author can write while reading the original work. I read in the first few chapters, how should I put it, in the description of the character in the original work, Zhang Chulan has written a little bit, the baby does not count, the other people... Emmm I didn't see it, especially Wang Ye I have only read about ten chapters now, and the only thing I remember is the part where the heroine's brother, Ye Zhao, makes a phone call, which describes Ye Zhao's character. It feels like the author is writing a novel. Internet novels are not writing. There is no need to be so serious, but they should not be too lively. For example, 14 chapters, right? The part about being afraid of bugs and the part about being afraid of snakes are too close together. I know the author wanted to complement the heroine's character, but if it was too tight, it would be boring, and it would look artificial and superfluous. Come on, author, I'll keep an eye on you. The heroine is pretty good.

The story lines are well integrated. She is a very decisive heroine. I really like this character. She is very talented and works very hard. Moreover, the heroine's skills are very special. She has auxiliary treatment and attacks all in one. However, the emotional line feels that both of them are a little bit unclear. I look forward to the update [please update]

Nice! The logic is clear and the writing is good. The male and female protagonists are truly two strong men. The other is always the strength of the other and they complement each other.

The plot direction is very good, but the characters feel very little emotional, like puppets on strings. However, sometimes the characters' emotions are well written and vivid.

This tacit cooperation!

Personally I feel very good-looking

After reading a lot of fandom updates, I stopped updating them. I hope that women can add more frontal combat skills, and don't go further down the support path.

It's pretty good-looking, but has it been polished with AI?