Overlord: The God of Magic Is Humanity's Savior

I've read eight chapters and found three problems. First, since you don't know what good career to choose, why don't you make a wish to gain knowledge in this area? What's the use of getting so much equipment? It's not a world-class item, nor an artifact level, just a legendary level (level 70-80). In just a few months, the number of wishes you make once a day is all spent on equipment. You just want a clue or location that leads to world-class items. Second, since you made a wish and summoned a level 82 NPC, why don't you just ride a dragon and control the kingdom to do things for you? If you don't want to do whatever you want, you can just control the king if you are afraid of exposing the information. Who can find out? Isn't it better than starting from scratch? And your NPC I was checked out when I entered the city gate and was forced to reveal my strength. I was stunned. I came in and looked at the God of plug-in magic (who knows all magic and can use any magic he knows every day). You are definitely not pretending to be a pig to eat tigers. It is a cool article of iron and iron. It is awkward no matter how you look at it. Three, not to mention the magic genius profession in Chapter 7. Things in Chapter 8 were written in advance until Chapter 7. This was discovered only after others gave negative reviews. You shouldn't have made this mistake. Didn't you check it after publishing it? Okay, although I have listed three issues, there are not many articles about Overlord, and even less based on the original setting. I can see that the author has a good understanding of the setting. Even though the plot is cool, it still feels a bit awkward. If you have plug-ins, you won't be able to use them, and it's hard to change the first few chapters. You can write that the protagonist's plug-ins are getting easier and easier to use. This can be considered a kind of growth. Five stars are not for your work, but for you as a person. There are too few Overlord fan authors. I hope readers and friends can ask more questions if they have any questions, and also give some five stars to encourage the authors. Otherwise, there will be no one to write what everyone will read. Authors should also read more comments to find out where their own writing is not good and improve it. The third question is a mistake. I wrote the contents of Chapter 7 in advance to Chapter 6.

It looks pretty good so far. It just feels like the timeline is a bit too late, and the hang-up is too small, making it difficult to deal with the Bone King camp. The original author clearly stated that the Bone King Guild's resources can maintain its advantage even when all NPCs betray it. Unless the Rotten Coffin Dragon King can use his Soul-Destroying Breath, the Bone King will be killed in one fell swoop, leaving the Bone King lineup leaderless. The part about their preparedness when encountering the country of destruction is too over-the-top and a bit poisonous to watch, so I'll wait and see for now.

Suddenly I discovered that you are the author of Old Bone King. It is different after 10 books. I have read all your previous works, but I haven't read them anymore. I have made great progress now.

I haven't read this book yet, I only read the introduction. I have thought about it, cheating does not distinguish between good and evil. A decent person can use friendship bonds or the system to cheat. In fact, the villain can also cheat because of obsession or the villain system. I remember that overlord seems to have a satirical meaning of friendship bonds and the like. Overlord can be said to be a world where the villain gets a cheat. This novel is a world where the protagonist gets a stronger cheat. Is there a world where the Bone King gets a stronger cheat than the protagonist? It seems impossible to deny this possibility.

Although I haven't read it yet, I have read your previous novel Bone King. It's really well written, but it falls apart later on. I hope I can stick with it and update more. Also, I am a cp party member and hope I can cp with Lana. Now this word count is a bit too few, no one will read it, you have to be more explosive and work harder, bastard! Don't stop running away, I'm going. Hey, I'll wait until you finish updating 500,000 words before I read it. I'll stock up first, otherwise I won't be happy with it.

Quick update, not enough. This will be the best Bone King fanfic you have ever written.

I feel like it's updated, but it's not enough [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates]

It's quite good-looking, one of the few written seriously, and the writing is online, without AI.

It can be seen that it is pretty good. Unfortunately, time is too tight. It is too difficult to upgrade to the bone king in a few months.

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that the male protagonist is too abstinent. It would be nice if more could be written about the relationship between men and women.