Bone King from Heroic Spirit to God

I'll be the first to score! Although there were many scenes in my mind at the beginning, I couldn't write them very vividly due to the writing style, but later I started to feel it. Please support me! ! ! Author's preface: Because the protagonist is set to travel alone, there will be no full-level NPCs as assistants. The group's combat power is mainly to recruit indigenous people and improve them. As for the problem that the natives can never defeat the full-level NPC, it can be solved through the mutation effect of the world-class props and the Hall of Valor. Basically it is a process of struggle, not a flat push at the beginning. For readers who don't like it, I can only apologize. No need to argue, it's just what I wrote.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. One of my doubts after reading Chapter 27 is that when the protagonist created a world-class item, he didn't think that the item would backfire on him. Can the heroic spirits created by the protagonist and transformed by the protagonist also be able to backfire on the protagonist? I feel that the protagonist is only the user of the item, not the creator.

I like this novel, keep it up! Please don't stop updating, please [I'm about to cry]

A pretty good Bone King fanfic. The relationship between the protagonist and the plot characters is handled very well. The protagonist's combat power is not obvious. The character and goals of the protagonist are also very clear. I personally think it ranks among the top three Bone King fanfics I have seen on Tomato!

The content is very coherent

It's a very good Bone King fanfic. It ranks in the top two among all the Bone King fanfics I've read on Tomato. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Compared with other traditional Bone King fandoms, the dialogue is not stiff, and the Bone King's power is not hard-pressed. It is a relaxing harem and refreshing story. It seems that there is no poisonous point at present. It is recommended to join the pit.

What should I say about that? The writing is pretty good, but maybe it's my personal favorite style. As for women, it's a bit unsatisfactory. I still prefer Albedo and Shalltear. Alas... [Face covering]

I hope the author will continue writing.

The writing is good, the golden finger is reasonable, the various character settings are not broken, and the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are online.

Yes, I hope there won't be any eunuchs. There are many eunuchs from Bone King fans.

There is not a lot of plot in the original work, which is very good I have been following it, but I have to say that it feels like I have deviated from the main line for a long time. Hurry and close it slowly I have never seen a scene similar to the Noble Phantasm confrontation that I wanted to see. Recently there have been some emotional dramas.

The writing is very good, unlike other fan fictions where a new character is added without changing the original work at all.

This is the best King of the Immortal fanfic I have ever read. I like the plot and character settings very much, and it does not make people feel embarrassed. The language description is also okay, at least it is not the kind of novel that insists on a few embarrassing popular sentences that violate the rules. The plot is very exciting. There are a lot of original plots based on the background of the original work. It can be seen that the author is working hard, thinking and writing well, but I don't understand why the rating is not high. I am really happy to find this book (ps: I really like Cang Qiangwei) Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The beginning is not good with Bone King [Like]

This book has better data. I don't know why the author didn't write it. It's a pity.

It's not bad. I just like to watch Self-Reliance. I hope you can update more. It's too little.

Very good, very interesting. I should be able to open a Wanjie flow later [send my heart] [send my heart]

Come on, author, the writing is very good (ง•̀_•́)ง

Disguising and not disguising are both skills. You don't have other skills, right?

At least I can watch it, come on.

This book is pretty good, just...

I'm tired of writing about bones all the time, so it's good to write like this

Yes, a very good novel. Come on, author, I hope this book won't be a hit! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

Hey, author, can't you write more? Who can read this little bit?

Very well written, I like it very much

Come on, author, work hard

Don't turn Lao Gu's NPC into a heroic spirit [sneer smile] and make him a true Empty Nest Lao Gu

I feel like the book is pretty good, how can I rate it so lowly [rolls eyes]

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