The Lu Immortal Clan of Linchuan

The author's writing style and skills are quite good, and it is a rare masterpiece among Tomatoes. This is the most stable and realistic genre I have ever seen. Unlike other novels, the protagonist is said to be proficient in Gou Zijue, but in reality he is the son of destiny, engaging in all kinds of cheats and forcing resources. The protagonist of this novel is very stable. Except for the initial tortoise shell inheritance, his daily resources are accumulated bit by bit, there is no windfall, and it is close to reality. The pace is slow, but within my acceptable range. The following is my own humble opinion, for reference only. The reason for giving one less star is that the shaping of the group portraits is relatively lacking. The protagonist is calm, always seeking stability, and being selfless can be said to be a character trait. But the people in a family are all introverted and indifferent, so it is unreasonable to have few gentle people and family bugs. Unless you are cultivating a path like the Path of Unfeeling that can change a person's personality, or a magician path that requires precise calculations like the Western Fantasy Fulian. I hope to see the emergence of more diverse characters, such as the heroic sacrifice of selfish people in the end, and the cowardice and weakness of loyal people in the face of war. Looking forward to the author's future plot development.

It's okay, the outline is good, and the plot has also been well-worked. Although it seems a bit depressing, the family is not strong and it tolerates and gives in. It's more pleasing to the eye than the protagonist who wants to make enemies. Although it must have been polished with AI in the middle, some sentences in the article repeat the same meaning, and it is quite embarrassing. After AI polishing, I should review it manually. Although it is awkward, it is still understandable, but I shouldn't definitely persuade a lot of people to quit.

It's well written, and I can tell that I've put some effort into figuring out the plot, but there are a few minor issues that I'm not happy with. (1) Family members are written by the elder generation. When it comes to the protagonist generation, only the eldest brother and the protagonist are written. The rest of the brothers are not mentioned, as are the uncles. Family stories still need to be written, especially for characters who appear frequently. At least the relationship and seniority are clearly stated... (2) Regarding the settings of the protagonist's skills and turtle shell spiritual pattern! The author has never written about the special nature of Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power. If it is just pure spiritual power, he can simply write it as spiritual power. There is no specialness at all in adding a name... If Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power wants to be special, he can completely write that the spiritual power has the effect of suppressing and banning! And the tortoise shell spirit pattern, is it active or passive? Every time the author writes about the spirit patterns, he just unfolds them, and does not set up the use of the spirit patterns at all. If he is using the tortoise shell in his body to use the spirit patterns, then there should at least be a medium, right? Whether you actively use your eyes or your palms, you should at least make sure that the spiritual patterns are cast from the protagonist, and write down the method for mobilizing the spiritual patterns! Also, there are a total of 9 spirit patterns. If you want to be successful, at least the unlocking of the spirit patterns must have different effects and abilities, right? (3) There have been dozens of chapters about the counterattack of the hostile family. The Zhao family has caused trouble several times. The family does not organize a counterattack, but passively solves the trouble every time! If you don't fall out openly, you have to fight back secretly... The rest of the writing is okay. Whether it's the development of the protagonist or the shaping of some scenes, it's pretty good. The protagonist is not black and white. He has ideas, a bottom line, and a brain. I hope the author will be patient and continue writing! At present, the framework looks good, but the content still needs to be improved! Come on! Will continue to watch

This family-themed novel is very good to read. The writing style is unique and not a routine novel at all. The most important thing is that the author updates very quickly, and the reading experience is very good. The only fly in the ointment is that it lacks a big explosive point.

This book is written to my liking. , The speed at which the protagonist improves his cultivation seems to be acceptable, unlike other family-based immortality novels. It's not a family tradition at all. In fact, the protagonist is cheating alone and his cultivation level has improved by leaps and bounds. Then take the family up I really want to ask the author, will there be such a thing as a spiritual beast that protects the clan in the later period? , Such as the ape, I still have a little expectation

It looks like a lot of AI is used, and the pace is very slow. However, no obvious errors or omissions have been found in the story line, the number of updates is large (and very watery), and the character design is okay. I just wanted to change my taste, so I gave it four stars.

Tomato is a high-quality product, but its combat power is a bit lacking in the early stage. You need to use more tricks later.

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This family's fairy tale is different from the previous ones and has new ideas. I hope it can be continued until it is completed.

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