After Becoming the White Moonlight Female Lead, She Bewitched Everyone

I'm a bit confused. The opening scene is about the male and female leads meeting at a banquet, so how did it change from a meeting at the male lead's company to a chance encounter with the female lead at the airport (she's just returned from abroad) and then back to the banquet? It's all so disjointed.

I haven't been watching for very long, but I guess the male lead in female-oriented novels still has the most satisfying life. In his past life, the female lead was murdered, and then Su Daji (a character from a popular Chinese novel) appeared to seduce the male lead and take revenge on the original female lead. Meanwhile, the male lead goes into hiding. Consider this my follow-up review; the author gave a slight spoiler, which is acceptable.

I quite like this kind of plot, but it's written too haphazardly. One chapter is about what happens after the party ends, and the next chapter suddenly starts detailing the party again. It's all a mess, making it hard to get into the story. The content is novel and exciting, but it's too disorganized.

The system dialogue is too verbose; this is a walkthrough, not a tutorial! There's too much dialogue; a single chapter has two pages of dialogue!

There are just a few comments.

There are too many system dialogues.

It's messy and chaotic. It feels like the author just wrote whatever came to mind, and the scenes and plot don't connect at all.

Author, please read it again! It's so confusing.