On her wedding day, Su Wanqing’s groom runs off. Around the corner, she bumps into a fluffy, handsome man and drags him straight to the registry office.
On their wedding night, she discovers he’s an absolute beast. The next day, she learns he’s the empire’s top commander.
Terrified, she runs away in the middle of the night, only for him to block her at the door, eyes red. “Wife, you weren’t treating me like this last night…”
“You said we’d take it slow,” she whispers, her thumb brushing the curve of his lips. “I’m listening. Take your time.”
His golden eyes, brimming with emotion, stare straight into hers, as if he can see right through her. Then he kisses her…
It's not my favorite style, but there's nothing wrong with the writing.