Mushoku Tensei: The Kingdom's Necromancer Mage

It's good to read. I feel like the author is the reincarnation of Lao Deng. There's not a lot of nonsense. It's not like other novels that don't have a lot of explanations. The protagonist has a good personality and is kind but not a virgin. He's just a little lively. So far, I'm very satisfied. I feel like it's going to be popular. Recommended!! Make a wish again: There will be no original heroine. I hope that the heroine will be Izaruti, Nina, Benedict, and Aisha.

It's very interesting 👍. If the subject of the Necromancer is too weak, it won't be interesting. If it is too strong, it will become a mindless story that overwhelms the original characters and it will be boring to read. The author's book is just right, not too strong or mindless, nor too weak to see the protagonist being abused. Moreover, the female protagonists of this book are also rare in Tomato, because I also like 😍 Ariel, I won't say too much, and the author gives it a thumbs up 👍👍👍

This book is very comfortable to read, and it doesn't have any big problems. However, the special ability of the protagonist is not weak, the overall plot rhythm is also very comfortable, and the emotional drama of the heroine is not awkward. But there are also shortcomings, the most obvious are two: First, there are some logic and wording problems that new authors often make. Of course, this does not affect the overall reading experience and can only be regarded as a minor problem. What's more serious is that the pace of the early plot is indeed a bit slow and boring. For example, the early stage is boring until you become an advanced swordsman in Chapter 15. I can point out in detail that the period between 6 and 15 is boring. But after Chapter 15, the plot develops very comfortably and has explosive moments. Now I have written three complete short stories, and I like the Shillong chapter the best. Unfortunately, during that time, I can see that the author seems to be learning the use of psychological description, because compared with the lack of psychological description in the previous article and the appropriate psychological description later, the psychological description in the Shillong chapter is slightly abrupt and awkward. However, in the Wang Long chapter, you can see progress, from the original abruptness to the subsequent natural insertion, and of course there is room for improvement. The last point is that I personally suggest that the author should only write 3-4 female protagonists, because for now, Aisha and Bendy are pretty good in my eyes, but if more than 3 female protagonists are added in the future, I will be more worried that the author will fail in writing. 3 Is actually a good limit, vulgarly There are only three things that can be said. My personal suggestion is that Aisha, Bandi and a subsequent heroine are enough. If there are five or six heroines, I strongly do not recommend it. Of course, I only have my subjective opinion about the heroine. The specific situation depends on the author's decision and thoughts. As long as the writing is good, I will support it no matter how many heroines there are. Also, I originally planned to give it a four-star rating, but the author seems to be a newcomer and can see progress in the updates. In addition, there are few high-quality works by unprofessional fans, so I am more tolerant and will give it a five-star rating to see how you perform in the future.

It's well written. I really like the relationship between the protagonist and Pacus. In the original work, Pacus was an annoying and wretched kid. Later, he could struggle from being a prince and hostage of a foreign kingdom to become the master of a country. Although he failed in the end, his previous efforts made me look up to him. The main source of the tragedy of this prince's life is that Ludy did not know the details of the gods in the early stage. Everything he did according to the words of the gods had more or less negative effects on the future. This time, the protagonist corrects the character of Pacus. I hope the protagonist will also bring a happy ending later.

So far, I feel very comfortable watching it. The character of the protagonist is very to my liking. He is a kind and lawful protagonist. It's also a good thing to hang it up, it won't appear weak or sluggish, and there is room for continuous growth (this is very important, and watching the protagonist continue to grow and become stronger is also very important and refreshing). Then I can honestly say that I was actually attracted to the heroine Ariel in the introduction (although until now Ariel has not appeared so far, and I look forward to the interaction between Ariel and the protagonist in the future.) However, I think the plots of the two heroines who have appeared so far are very good. I love this sweet 😘 😘. The plot of fighting wits and courage with humans and gods is also good, which is a real bonus. Big cheers for the author 😘😘

It feels like some use of AI, but overall there is no AI flavor.

To be honest, this book is very comfortable among the jobless fanfics I have read on Tomato. The only drawback is that the protagonist currently lacks motivation to improve. I am personally very picky about fanfics, especially jobless fans. Even if I am not satisfied with the author who specializes in writing jobless fanfiction, I will directly scold it. My evaluation of this book is comfortable. The protagonist jobless is also one of the few fanfics that does not make a big deal about hard work. He also got along very well with his family in the early stage, but unfortunately there is still too little portrayal of the family (of course, since there is no follow-up, it is best to downplay the presence of the family as much as possible. After all, family is the opposite of adventure) and even focuses on the post-disaster reconstruction of the Fitoa Territory, but this also leads to a very slow pace in the first thirty chapters and lack of excitement. The protagonist's own growth is also put on hold by various affairs. The protagonist's relationship with Pacus is also well handled. It is not directly hostile like other fans, but it touches on the regrets of Pacus in the original work (not being taken seriously and longing to be taken seriously). To be honest, many fans often say that Luo Qixi is tolerant of all people. To be honest, judging from the tragedy of Pacus's life, In the early stage, Luo Qixi's mentality was actually that of a child. She was also very impatient with children, and her self-esteem was extremely low after she got married. She only improved after taking Lala back to her hometown to get married. I don't understand treating such a flawed character like a saint. This book has not yet crossed paths with the Three Primary Colors, and I hope there will be less crossing paths in the future. At present, it seems that the author has taken the advice and decided that the heroine is Aisha, Benny and Ariel. I think it is OK. After all, there are too many female protagonists and it is impossible to cover everything. Aisha is still young, and Benny's emotional line is good, but there are also shortcomings. For example, Aisha did not write her clever and sensible feeling with scheming. There is also the summoning spell. Although it is in the original work, it seems that it is not mentioned in the original Necronomicon, but magic is omnipotent.

This is a good book about no-jobs discovered by Xin. The stories described are more novel than those of other no-job fans who mostly follow Rudy. The characterization and description are also good. I hope the author will continue his work and never cut it.

Originally, I didn't plan to click on it because the heroine didn't have the three primary colors in the introduction😅. I was really short of books, so I clicked on it and took a look. It was unexpectedly very good. The protagonist's swordsman talent is considered a genius. He became an advanced swordsman at the age of 12. The undead magic has not seen a significant improvement in combat power. I guess the first heroine is Aisha. Personally, I feel that the plot starts to become exciting starting from the Kingdom of Shillong. The plot of Pacus is also handled well. The writing is good and I don't feel like I am a new author.

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