American Comics: The Black-Suited Spider-Man Never Fails!

Stopping at Chapter 4, the author reminded me of the defective patch of Spider-Sense in Chapter 1, just for the protagonist to be knocked unconscious and tortured by the butcher after saving the butcher in Chapter 4. I personally can't accept this plot. I hope the author's book will get better and better. Goodbye.

The novel has three golden chapters. The ending of the first chapter cannot be too bad. The character of the protagonist is starting to take shape. He should be a good person. He has the desire to read on. I have a suggestion for the author. The plot should not advance too fast. Too fast will not foreshadow the exciting points. Too slow will kill the passion for pursuing the book. Don't be too fast or too slow. Just grasp the rhythm and don't rush. Be steady and steady. You can listen to the readers' suggestions, but you must not listen to them all. You must have the context of the story in your heart.

A very good-looking Spider-Man story. The performance of not eating beef without gaining superpowers is really a plus. The character creation of the protagonist is also very good. I hope you will continue to work 👍 [Please update] It's not that people who give low scores have brain problems. If you want to read cool stories, look for other books. Don't be picky here. The protagonist was beaten and didn't fight back and was threatened to join the protagonist's group. That's called aggrieved. He fought back and broke the butcher's bones. In the end, he didn't join because of threats. What kind of aggrieved is this? I can't accept this kind of plot advancement.

I really like it. I feel that the pace is just right and the characters are well created. As long as the protagonist is always like this, and the invincible Long Aotian is not very good-looking, I hope the author can update it more, so I will keep this book for now (=^▽^=)

The subject matter is great, keep it up, but I feel like I've been discouraged even though I haven't read the first few chapters. I don't stand in God's perspective and take on the role of the protagonist, and I don't quite understand why the black robes were added. I have a good relationship with Huey, but what is the relationship between Huey and Butcher, let alone sneak attack on the protagonist and then threaten the protagonist's life. . . I don't understand, just hope it gets better and better 🧐

It's really good, and the characters are created very well. Much better than the bitter one next door

It's quite beautiful, and the subject matter is very novel 😳😳😳

It's okay, but is your black-robed universe over?

Give five stars to try to get the author to come back and update ing, 😭😭😭author, don't do this

It's okay. It's pretty. I'll give it 5 stars.