The Magic of This World Is in Chinese

The world setting is very good, I like this one very much!!! Hmm... The protagonist is stupid and stupid like a fool (really looks like one!) I like the stupid protagonist but I don't really like the silly ones. Maybe I can change the protagonist's idiot-like style in this world (there are many places like Dihua, which is a plus point, right?)

The current reviewers say it is worth a read, and the reason for deducting points is that the current content is too little (). Generally speaking, it is recommended. If you don't like to read, you can also save it. The pace is slow, but there are enough exciting points. The beginning is relatively fresh enough to keep people interested. The writing is passable.

It's the first day to follow up on the review. The writing is average and the plot starts low but moves high. The more I read, the more comfortable I feel. The protagonist is a bit silly, but it gets better later on. The writing is very reasonable. You must be more patient to read it. It becomes more comfortable as you go to the back. The writing becomes more and more comfortable. All in all, keep reading. Estimated score: 7.5~8.5. This is my first estimate. I hope the author will not disappoint me.

Well written. I'm not very good at writing book reviews, but seeing that there is no review, this good book cannot be buried. Five-star praise, don't miss it if you pass by. At the same time, I also hope that the author's fortune will turn around and that the emperor's fortune will be in harmony with heaven.

Soul Piercer, I heard the author said it has a single female protagonist, which is great

I haven't read much of this kind of fantasy since I was in high school, especially articles about magic. I give it a five-star rating because of the strength of the author. The biggest problem at the moment is that the article is a little short, and sometimes it is a little painful to follow the article. At other times, whether it is from the plot, characters, logic, world view, and language narration, these are all good [OK] Oh right After looking at it, I feel that the comment section is mostly filled with boys. It is not recommended for girls to read the paragraph review, especially since it is easy to be dissuaded from the emotional lines. It feels like I accidentally wandered into the boys' dormitory for a night chat...

The idea is very good. Although the rhythm of the first volume and the first half of the second volume is not particularly good and the handling of the characters (especially the protagonist) is not particularly good, the polishing of the novel in the middle, late and final parts of the second volume is obviously improved, and the content is also very exciting. I hope the author can keep it up (preferably there is improvement ୧⍢⃝୨). Overall, the overall novel is still great and worth readingദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ

I don't understand much about the light ball. Wasn't it the one that brought the protagonist to another world? How to talk back to the protagonist. What is the position of the light ball? Do you want the soul from another world to come to the rescue and wait for the body to recover before kicking him away? I feel like my stance and motivations are not very clear. The world view and plot are remarkable, it would be nice if the characters could be more distinct. Now I feel like an ordinary person with some characteristics, not like a gifted novel character. You can write a little more freely. Come on author(^_^)v It gets better and better later on, the author will update soon (^_^o)

The beginning is quite catchy, give it a listen emmm The proportion of hydrology is too large. There is very little content in one chapter and the information density is low...

The writing is quite good, and I feel like there is something big hidden behind it. The military writing is very decent, not too boring, but it also promotes the plot and establishes the characters. You better hide a big one, if not, just drag it down and kill it! 🍉