Something's Not Right with My Immortal Wife—She's a Transmigrator Too!

It's very well written. The reason it's getting such a low score is probably because it's still being serialized. I was initially drawn to this site by short videos. However, the dynamic of the male and female leads supporting each other and growing together really resonated with me. In male-oriented and female-oriented novels, the female characters are either treated as harem members, or the male characters are treated as tools. Both are a bit too extreme. I believe the world is a complete world, and everyone is an independent individual. Everyone has their own pursuits when they are together. We can't expect one side to serve the other. However, this kind of scenario, where both parties have distinct personalities and independent pursuits, and grow together, is too rare. I hope the author stays on track and doesn't stray from the main point!

So far, I think it's quite interesting. I really like the daily lives of the male and female protagonists. Both male and female protagonists are very powerful and support each other in different worlds. The female protagonist is a top genius in cultivating immortals🔝, and the male protagonist is a physical and legal practitioner. The two of them love each other, but some people have very dark psychology. They scream when they see the male protagonist being nice to the female protagonist. I really like the author. In the previous plot, the young couple made progress together and cultivated immortality together. Moreover, the male and female protagonists currently have no aggrieved plot. If they can't fight, they will get into trouble. They can bend and stretch. The female protagonist is the brain and the male protagonist is the fist. They complement each other. God knows that after I came over from the anime, I watched it for several hours at a time. I controlled the rhythm. The male and female protagonists and the plot are particularly good.

Could it be that men and women don't get tired of working together? The plot of this book is very novel, the male protagonist is very interesting, the female protagonist is also very smart, and the supporting characters also have the IQs they should have. I hope that the plot of the characters in the future will not collapse. I will keep following it 🤭 🤭 🤭

There is no logical flaw in this book. The protagonist and heroine have distinct personalities. The only shortcoming is that the male protagonist's IQ and reaction to troubles feel a bit lacking. Maybe it's to write that the male and female protagonists have complementary IQs and personalities. But the processing is a bit rough, and it looks a bit like the male protagonist's IQ is insufficient. Not a big problem. The most exciting thing about this is that the way the male protagonist and female protagonist deal with things and their development routes are not fixed plans and move forward linearly. It changes as the general environment changes. The author is thoughtful. Oh my god, I haven't watched it in so many days. Only a few pictures have been updated. The donkey was so lazy that he had to be whipped with a whip.

It's really well written. It's double-penetrated. The heroine's disability is not a vase. I feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings. It's a good book. If it doesn't fall apart, I think it's 9 points. I've read so many books and I don't want to read it until I've read a few chapters.

The idea of ​​this book is very good. My initial impression is that it should be written by hand. The author has good intentions and good writing skills. Well, according to what I have read, I should be able to write it for a long time. The only drawback is that the traffic is not very good and there are too few people reading it. The writing is very good and the idea is good. If the writing is not polished later, it may reach a score of 8.0 Or above. The author's character creation and conception are very good. I recommend this book as the most important one. It is very innovative and I really like reading it. The flow rate is slightly better, and it feels like it can break above 8 points. If you really don't have the motivation, you can try using AI writing to provide a specific outline. The writing is quite good, I just need to keep updating it and finish it normally. Basically, the data in the book is enough, which is pretty good.

It's nice to watch, and the subject matter is very novel. I haven't seen this kind of couple having sex together for a long time. [I also strongly recommend it] As long as there are not inexplicable multiple men and women coming to compete with the young couple in the follow-up, it will be perfect [full]

Overall, I'll give it four stars. The male protagonist must have been a programmer before he died. Why is his IQ so low after he passed through the world? The subject of double penetration is quite novel, and the content is well written. I read the comic first and then read the novel. There are so many plots at the end of the novel. I'm curious if the short drama will be skipped directly or something.

To be honest, I'd give it an 8 out of 10 at most. But the idea of ​​two time travelers becoming a married couple is quite interesting, and I hope the author can keep it up and make it even more interesting. A few suggestions: 1. With two main characters, there should be more clashes in their thoughts and personalities; they shouldn't be too in sync, or they'll seem like separate entities. It's normal for a young couple from Earth to have minor arguments. Actually, there wasn't much emotional buildup in the early stages. The story starts with the premise of free love, and then after only a few days in the game, they're suddenly fading into a relationship. Just because they're both from Earth, does that mean their relationship will be smooth sailing? There are far too many instances of backstabbing among fellow Earthlings. 2. The female lead's talent is way too overpowered. Wang Shouxuan's stolen talent was only enough for an ordinary Golden Core cultivator, easily defeated. How come she suddenly reaches the Divine Transformation stage upon returning to the female lead? With her so invincible, what kind of future opportunities will she have? Won't she just be running around and clearing daily quests? 3. The in-game timeline moves too fast. Although there are many different small maps and a lot of events, each map only lasts a few days in-game. Even a road trip in the cultivation world wouldn't be this fast. At this pace, it's hard to imagine the male and female protagonists having any deep feelings for the people or things they encounter on their journey. Keep up the good work, author! Raising a question is easy, but solving it is difficult. Hopefully, this book will get better and better. [Added to bookshelf]

Strange, I don't think the author's rating for this book should be so low. Is it only just started being rated? Based on my years of experience with novels, this book is at least above average in the fantasy genre, with many excellent aspects: 1. In terms of characters, the male and female protagonists are very vivid. Their growth process truly shows how they support each other. A lot of love is shown in the details, and their communication is natural and lovely. It's a gentle, flowing story that never gets boring. Many minor characters are also well-developed with just a few strokes of the pen (I think in terms of character development, it has already surpassed many fantasy novels. Many fantasy novels tend to make the male protagonist an appendage of the female protagonist or vice versa, but this book truly shows the equality between the male and female protagonists). 2. In terms of plot, the transitions between the characters' growth are very natural, with the causes and consequences clearly explained. The characters' introductions are also natural and not abrupt, and the setting is not obscure or difficult to understand. The author guides you through the story gradually, making it a very easy read. There are many other good points as well. I've caught up with it now. I personally found the part where the male and female leads collect spirit pets particularly appealing; those spirit pets are so cute! 💕 I knew my judgment was right! 😎 The interactions between the male and female leads are incredibly lifelike. Congratulations to the author on reaching an 8.3 Rating! I believe your rating has the potential to rise further. 💕 Keep it up! 💪 I hope you can get it to 9.0! 💕💕