Thriller Game: I’m Really Not a Big Shot

The plot is okay, and the author must have tried his best to conceive it. The protagonist is not cheating. He may act too new in the early stage, but in the later stage, he has a vague sense of a big boss. It suits my taste. It feels like I was chasing horror novels in school. I hope I can control the intensity of the ghosts and not make it into a fantasy. It is not bad for a new author to write like this. I hope that ten updates a day will not be enough. I have caught up with the fifth dungeon. Currently, only the first dungeon is not that exciting, but compared to other works of the same type, it is considered average and has no poisonous points. Maybe the author thinks it is a novice copy and does not want to write too difficult? The subsequent copies are indeed more exciting than the last, especially the one in the Slaughterhouse. It's quite confusing to see that there are only a few thousand readers. I can only say that the author should work hard. Maybe the title or introduction of the book is really not attractive, and the plot and imagination are really useless.

It's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing toxic about it. If I really want to say it, the protagonist in the early stage was a bit too kind. There are really few such protagonists now, but I quite like it (╹▽╹) Also, the author gave me a lot of code (￣￣)

Very pretty. As for the protagonist, he is affectionate and righteous. In the beginning, he was very innocent and cute, and he paid the price for his innocence. However, after the change, he became more wary of others while still maintaining his true heart, instead of turning into a black man and becoming a Jiahao and Chuunibyou. The arc of such a character has surpassed that of many protagonists. As for the supporting characters, most of the characters in the dungeon are still in the stage of facial expression. After reading a few chapters, you can roughly understand whether this character will die or live. However, this is not considered a shortcoming, and the evaluation is stable [heartfelt]. In terms of important supporting roles, the current teammates are very lovable, especially Jiang Xiaomei, who is cute. In terms of writing, it's average to above average, and the look and feel is very good, and it's getting better and better. In terms of the most important copy, the fifth one is currently completed. Speaking separately, purely subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. (Based on five levels of evaluation: unqualified, qualified, good, good, and excellent) The first dungeon (passed): Newbie dungeon, the design is relatively linear, basically just run the process to find clues. When the supporting character does not go crazy and there is a save file, it is easy to pass the level. But the supporting character went crazy (). However, the reason why the supporting character caused trouble is also clearly written, which is good or bad. The second copy (excellent): The simple mechanism creates a bold ending. After reading the second copy, I knew that this book was suitable for me [send my heart] [send my heart]. Not much to say, my personal evaluation is very high. The third dungeon (qualified): It is obviously a dungeon used to create characters (both protagonists and supporting characters). It is also a linear design. The trap design is a bit tricky. More people died in the first few chapters than in the following chapters combined. There is no good trick design. Overall, it can be summarized as relying on props to fight hard. Maybe I am not very interested in this type of way to pass the level. But there are no obvious poisonous spots, and it can pass the test itself. The fourth copy (good): When Jiang Xiaomei appeared, she thought she was a cold goddess, but she turned out to be cute [laughs][laughs][laughs]. Needless to say, the design is relatively self-consistent, the evolution mechanism of ghosts is interesting, and the protagonist still has his true intentions after his transformation, he is not stingy in helping others, and he will double down on those who cheated him. He is a very healthy protagonist. The rhythm is also well controlled and feels comfortable. The fifth dungeon (good) has the potential to be great. The first half has a sense of mystery and atmosphere. The players' spontaneous investigation and discovery of information is also very enjoyable. It even made me feel like I was reading the excellent books of "Charlie IX" when I was young. In terms of the sense of oppression, Daozhong's continuous back and forth of files also reflects the danger of this dungeon. But in the second half, after a certain special node, the release of information was a bit out of control. It felt like I was busy rushing to finish the dungeon, so I sent an NPC to tell all the information. The weird and mysterious feeling created in the first half was gone, and it turned into a prop match again (the author Xiao Heizi also lost our protagonist's chicken brother, and was very angry). In the end, the protagonist's choice was well written, but it could not cover up the imbalance of the rhythm in the second half. The sixth copy, Wedding Dress, is barely qualified. To be honest, I felt drowsy when I saw the name Wedding Dress, and it took me a month to finish it. I don't know if it's because I lowered my expectations, but I don't think it's as outrageous as someone in the building said. And the crossover mechanism between reality and the past is quite interesting. Huangfu's full game of dragons is also very powerful, and there is really nothing he can do if he can't defeat players of this level. But having said that, because the ratings are purely subjective, when I saw the plot of the ancient times, I wanted to give it a direct failure because I got tired of watching it. But the focus of this dungeon seems to be to watch the flirting between the dog and the man (crossed out) and the interaction between the male and female protagonists. It's also quite sweet. In the end, it's still passable, but it's not high. I'm looking forward to the next dungeon. The seventh dungeon, Vanished It, is quite satisfactory. I personally rate it as good. The design of the dungeon itself is average, but at least it is not as boring as folklore. There is a large-scale interaction between players, and the mysteries of some of the protagonists' life experiences are revealed. I just don't know when the protagonist will be able to form a fighting system. Now the system is not complete, and he has to fight against prison players all day long. He is called the prison king.

This book is an unlimited flow type, with ghost escape and dungeon breakthrough. It's not a story about the protagonist being invincible, it's more plot-oriented. I carefully conceived each copy. But after all, I am a new author, so my writing style may not be very good, but I think it should still be readable. Powering for love, readers who like it hope to leave a book review to encourage me, thank you~ (Why give it five stars? Give your book a bad rating [smile]. Jpg) Read everyone's feedback. In the early outline of this book, the protagonist is growing up in the early stage, so it is not a cool article (the protagonist was once a player, but I still prefer plot in the early stage, so I did not cheat on the protagonist) Then there is the issue of the title of the book. The book test gave me the original title, so I can only use this title, or I can take another book test with 1 million words. The title of the book may lower everyone's expectations for the protagonist, but I did carefully conceive the plot. After all, I may have written a bit of a group portrait. Finally, readers, can you please stop giving negative reviews without any reason? I am inexplicable. If there is any reason for dissatisfaction, I will read it carefully and correct it. Please read the introduction carefully, okay?

It's a new author, so any discrepancies are purely coincidental. Please be lenient with your words and listen to your advice. I will refer to your suggestions. After all, I may not think carefully about what I write. I will try my best to write what you want to see.

The plot is still good, although there are some shadows of other works. The creation of a scary atmosphere needs to be further strengthened, especially the weirdness and rules that can be overcome by relying on equipment in the confrontation. From the third copy onwards, it has become a monster-killing upgrade, and the feeling of terror has basically disappeared. In addition, I still don't understand what the purpose of this online name is. Apart from using it in rankings and group chats, I feel like no one uses it in dungeons.

I have seen the third copy so far, and I feel that the author has done a good job in designing the copy, and the characters are relatively full and followable. It would be better if the title and table of contents include the name of the copy in progress [Thinking] Many people like to save a whole copy and read it in one go. Otherwise, it is easy to keep a book and abandon it. I just took a closer look and it turns out there is a subtitle, but the idea is not obvious.

It's not bad, at least it's above seven points. I've read five chapters and there's nothing sinister about it. It's been more than a month since the book started and the author updates it five times a day [face covering] You can't get this amount of updates recommended, it's just basic push streaming.

Very nice. But who is the heroine? Is it the woman in the dream or Jiang. If it's the former, then just don't engage in ambiguous scenes with Jiang. The latter will be treated as if I didn't say anything. Hope to stick to [single female protagonist]. Thanks 🙏🙏.

Five-star praise. I only read the first copy. The male protagonist dreamed of a woman, so I looked in the comment section out of curiosity and read it. The author said it was pure love, so I only read the one without a female protagonist. No matter how good the copy was, I didn't want to read it. The copy is good, Qin Mo is decisive like a leader, Lin Xuanxiang is super capable of being left-handed and able to hear other people's thoughts at the same time, Lin Wei is also calm and thoughtful, and can quickly find out problems.