Thriller Game: I’m Really Not a Big Shot

The plot is good; the author clearly put a lot of effort into it. The protagonist doesn't have any special abilities and might seem too inexperienced in the early stages, but he gradually develops the air of a seasoned pro, which suits my taste perfectly. It brings back memories of reading horror novels in school.

It's pretty good, and there aren't any major flaws. If I had to say something, it's that the protagonist is a bit too kind in the early stages. There are really few protagonists like that nowadays, but I quite like it ( ╹▽╹ ). Also, author, please write more words! (￣￣)

Absolutely fantastic! The main character is loyal and righteous, initially very innocent and adorable, and pays the price for his naiveté. However, after changing, while becoming more wary of others, he maintains his true self, rather than turning into a dark, insane Jiahao or a chuunibyou (middle school syndrome) figure. This character arc surpasses many main characters who start with this game.

This book is an infinite flow type, featuring ghost escape and dungeon exploration. It's not an invincible protagonist story; it's more plot-driven. I carefully crafted each scenario, but as a new author, my writing style might not be the best yet. However, I think it should still be readable. I'm writing this out of love for the book.

As a new author, any content that might offend you is purely coincidental. Please be kind and listen to my advice. I will consider your suggestions, as I may not have thought things through as I write. I will try my best to write what you want to see.

The plot is decent, although you can find some similarities to other works. The horror atmosphere needs improvement, especially since the eerie and rule-based combat becomes so straightforward that you can just brute force your way through with good equipment. From the third dungeon onwards, it becomes more about leveling up by fighting monsters, and the horror factor is basically gone.

Good, keep it up! Improve your writing; don't follow the same formulaic templates as everyone else. There's no need to make him seem like a cold, invincible emperor. The protagonist is human too, with emotions and desires. The ensemble cast is well-developed; a little less romance would be fine.

It's visually appealing, and I really like the premise. It has a certain amount of horror without leaving you completely powerless. You can gradually grow stronger by acquiring items and progressing through the game. Plus, that's realistic. Otherwise, if you can't fight off the ghosts no matter what you do and still have to keep running dungeons, wouldn't people want to die?

I've reached the third chapter so far and the author's design is quite good, the characters are well-developed, and it's worth following. It would be better if the titles and tables of contents clearly stated the names of the ongoing chapters. 🤔 Many people like to save up an entire chapter and read it all at once, otherwise, it's easy to abandon the story while waiting for the right moment to finish. I just looked closely and realized the subheadings were a bit unclear.

It's alright, at least a 7 out of 10. I've read five chapters and there aren't any major flaws. The author has been updating five times a day for over a month since the book started 🤦 You can't expect to get that much update frequency with a recommendation; you'll only get basic promotion.