The Day I Brought My Girlfriend Home, My Sister Realized Something Was Wrong with Her
带女友回家那天，我姐发现她有问题
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 22k Words
- Genre
- –
- Subgenre
- –
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Personally, I feel like it's a well-written short suspense attempt. There are also shortcomings. Some of the content is not mature enough. I hope that the overall sense of suspense and atmosphere are in place. There is still room for polishing and improvement in the lines and characters. In addition, I feel that there are still a few reversal points in the text. Feng Wanqing feels that there is still room for improvement in the fullness of her characters, and she will try to avoid "coincidental clues" and "deliberately created accidents" in her subsequent writing. Overall, I think this is still a readable short story. The review can give a score of 3.8/5. 🤔🤔🤔