Fusu Reborn: Sickly, Yet Everyone's Beloved

Thunder point: The author is a novice in history, and he is not diligent in checking the data. There are historical errors. More than one has been found so far. ① Fusu was 31 instead of 21 when he died ②Hu Hai is the 18th son. Fusu was roughly between 11 and 22 when Hu Hai was born. According to this timeline, Hu Hai has not yet been born (by the way, you don't really think that Ying Zheng only has two children) ③ Fusu is the eldest son. Yingzheng was about 18 years old when he was born. He had not yet started to take charge of his own affairs, so it is difficult for him to despise his children (the opening plot) ④According to the time in the article, Ying Zheng was roughly 21 years old and had not yet begun to take charge of the government. At this time, the Qin State was in a power blank period. ⑤ From the above time calculation, it can be concluded that this time was roughly 239 BC, and the six kingdoms were destroyed in 221 BC (taking the time of Qi's demise as the record). There is no old version. ⑥Li Si was appointed guest minister in 237 BC (at the latest), and was promoted from Tingwei to prime minister in 221 BC, so even if he wanted to be called Keqing or Tingwei at this time, he should not be prime minister. ⑦ According to the timeline, Zhao Gao has most likely just entered the Qin Palace at this time, and is about 20 years old, starting to make a name for himself (I have never recommended killing Zhao Gao too early, as long as Ying Zheng is alive for a day, Zhao Gao will be the most useful knife in the dark), and he will be around forty years old when he becomes the official of the CRRC. ⑧There was no statement from the emperor at that time, so he should be called your lord. ⑨The writing style is too flat, lacks details, (don't tell me this is a telegraph style) and lacks the ability to attract readers in the long term. ヽ(ー_ー )ノThat's it for now, I'll add it when I think about itヽ(ー_ー )ノ Recommended points are as follows ① The character is consistent, has a real sense of freshness, and is relatively consistent with the character described in history books ②The details are vivid. This refers to the action itself, not the description. The character's actions are lively and real. ③The plot has a tight rhythm and the arrangement is relatively appropriate. ④Character interaction is real and interesting ⑤I am partial to Fusu p(*^-^*)q ヽ(ー_ー )ノIn summaryヽ(ー_ー )ノ Four stars are given, one star for Fusu, one star for character interaction, and two stars to encourage the author (actually a bit too soft-hearted)

The current status of this book is like this: the clingy Fusu, the helpless Brother Zheng, the duplicitous Li Si, and General Wang Jian who suddenly went to catch bears in the mountains in person😋😋😋

Fusu is so cute, the clingy little Fusu, the helpless Brother Zheng, the duplicitous Li Si, General Wang Jian who suddenly goes to catch bears in the mountains himself, and Zhao Gao, whose plans are always ruined

It's very interesting, but there are too many dialogue forms, which can easily lead to confusion. It could be reduced appropriately, and more psychological descriptions of characters in bad situations would make the article richer! 😄

The letter girl is willing to use the rest of her life, wealth and happiness of Nas who insults me at will in exchange for the longevity and completion of this book by the author's wife. Please never give up this book, my wife. 💕💕💕

It's very interesting, especially what Baby Fusu said (>ω<) The chair pushed me and it bit me. This sentence is really cute and cute\(//∇//)\But I found that the author seems to have no psychological description. I hope he can add some psychological description.

Is Hu Hai born now? Fusu is only three years old, right? So how old is Hu Hai?

Cute Su Erye✌🏻, I love it so much

A rare original Fusu text, good-looking, little Fusu is super invincible, is the whole Fusu text weak?

Little Fusu is really cute [sending heartfelt wishes], thank you so much for the author!