After Being Passed Around, the Beautiful Cannon Fodder Is Completely Drained

It was shocking and delicious. I regretted opening this novel so early. I was really scratching my head while waiting for the update. The plot was great and very immersive. I read it in the middle of the night and my back felt so cold that I didn't even dare to go to the toilet by myself... Haha. This novel is really super delicious 😋The heartthrob np is a must-read, and the plot and characters are even more bonus points. Although he is a new author, his writing style is not new at all, which made my wrinkle-free brain that has been frozen for 10 days usher in the first place. This is a deep thought, hahaha. The author's updates won my heart even more. They are updated three times a day. I deserve your good looks. Although I am still a novice now, there will definitely be popularity. Come on, Goddess, she is really super invincible. Thunderbolt Explosion is awesome. Kras is so good-looking!!!!!!! After reading this novel, the emotional line is no longer broken, the NPC is no longer good, and the heartthrob no longer cares. I just want to guess who the murderer is in a hurry [fear][fear][fear][fear]

The current progress is to end the first world Advantages: 1. The supporting roles are very distinct, and they are very good until the middle and late stages. 2. Personally, I think the dungeon is quite novel and the first half is very interesting. 3. The writing style is also pretty good. Disadvantages: 1. In the second half, the protagonist's personality deviated seriously. Not only did he master the absolute information gap, but he also showed his prowess to deal with the villain in the end. 2. The protagonist seemed to be a little sincere in the end. In the end, because he was reluctant to leave Zuo (fiancé), he left a clone to accompany Zuo. 3. Many places are not rigorous. The protagonist cannot explain clearly if others ask, but since no one else asks, there is no need to explain. 4. Personally, I don't feel that the first world is particularly attractive. Fiancé Zuo is in love with the protagonist in the plot setting (maybe the protagonist really falls in love after passing through); in the first chapter, it was okay when he still looked like a human being, but later in the chapter, he was fighting with Ye and Xu and didn't understand anything. Maybe the protagonist was too sweet, and they all wanted to eat alone. At first, the kid thought he was a pervert, but he didn't expect that he was sent by the villain to test him, and he just wanted the protagonist's body. In short, although the deviation of the protagonist's character and the later plot development are a bit outrageous to me, it is still quite attractive. Well worth reading when you are short of books! Personally, I think the early and middle stages are quite interesting. If you don't like it in the later stage, you can get over it immediately and start a new world.

Xu Jiusi really scared me, and I went crazy. . . The emotional line is so cool. Our little 50-year-old is such a fan of thousands of people (fans of thousands of ghosts). The author is very awesome. He updates it four times a day and the output is very rich. The most important thing is that after-sales service is included. I enjoy the food so much. It feels so good. . . . . Goddess, I will always follow you. . . .

The setting written by the author is really good, but I stopped after reading Chapter 12 because there are obvious problems with the interaction between the host and the system. Every time I go to the line between the two of them, I have to think over and over why there is always a little discomfort and make people feel aggrieved. Later I summarized some problems and hope that the author can quickly optimize after reading my comments. Here are a few questions I raised 1. In a critical moment of life and death, the host has weighed the pros and cons, is willing to bear the consequences and issued instructions, but the system continues to hesitate, repeatedly emphasizes the risks, does not play a supporting role, and is very slow. 2. Both sides are filled with a lot of ineffective questions and answers. The host and the system often use a question-and-answer method repeatedly, which destroys the atmosphere of the plot and the rhythm is slow and not crisp enough. 3. The system often interferes with the host's judgment and outputs its own thoughts in one direction. It seems to care about the host, but it ignores the current critical environment and cannot distinguish the importance of things. It will simply prevent actions and rarely provide feasible alternatives. 4. Most actions require repeated urging from the host before the system reluctantly executes them. It is difficult for readers to feel the partnership between the system and the host. The whole conversation can easily make people feel frustrated and unable to appreciate the kindness of the system. If the author really can't write a system that is kind, protective, and considerate of the host, he can write it in a more mechanical way, and don't just try to cobble together the system. If it really doesn't work, it would be much better to change it like this. Original version: "Electricity!" This will hurt you! "Hurry up!" But—— revision; "Electricity!" [Confirm the plan, electric shock will cause harm to the body, please pay attention to the risks] "Execute." [Follow your orders, please pay attention to your status] This kind of answer avoids rigidity and eliminates the feeling of frustration caused by ineffective pulling. The answer "obey" allows the system to put the host at the top, and it is easier to reflect the system's preference and desire to protect the host. My writing is not very good, I just wrote in a direction that I feel is better. It depends on how the author writes it. I hope the author can change it according to his own ideas after reading it. After all, the overall theme is good, but the interaction between the two of them is quite flawed.

The emotional scene was very wonderful, and all the mistresses in the palace were very happy. However, in the ending, although the clones had the same memories and personalities, they appeared in the same time and space at the same time. In addition, the protagonist watched the interaction between his clone and his fiancé. It always felt like two people. It was very weird. It was better to leave the world and leave the residual soul/clone.

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I think the first world I watched was super amazing. The writing is really scary, and the plot is quite novel. It's not a cliché plot about a blind wife or several men, but it has an element of horror🩸, and the author's after-sales service for this plot is super good, yes, yes, you know what I'm talking about 😳

The emotional line is quite gripping, and the change in Lou Guanyue's attitude towards Wu Shi later is very interesting. Where did you go when you were so cold and dismissive at the beginning? In the end, I fell into it. The relationship between Zuo Buqing and Wu Shi is very sweet. Xiao Zuo cares about Wu Shi very much. He really treats Wu Shi wholeheartedly and is very gentle to Wu Shi. He is so refreshing and refined among several dark ghosts. And policeman Li Xu'an is also very upright and kind. The weird atmosphere is well described. No matter what, the protagonists are destined to be trapped in this apartment. Xu Jiusi who appears later is really a bit scary. Overall, it's pretty good, keep it up!

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The first world is nice to watch, but a little scary. I don't like the ending a bit. I don't think it's necessary to have a clone. You can pause the world. If you create a clone, it always makes me feel that Xiao Zuo is in love with someone else, that is, a stand-in (I hope the plot can be changed in the future). *Highlights 1- A pure heartthrob, basically everyone likes Xiao Wu. 2-No deputy CP 3-A lot of rice (meat) 4-Good writing style 5-Respectable update speed In the first world, Xiaolou, the jealous husband came and severely despised our Xiaozuo, the status of the mistress, and the behavior of the main palace (serve the table). Xiao Zuo, the incompetent husband, wants to protect us Xiao Wu, but the enemy is too strong and cannot be defeated by ordinary people. They are all monsters, goblins and so on. He can only talk about it, but in reality he cannot defeat any of them, but he really loves our Xiao Wu (on the table). From then on, it was like a god, Tai Liu, he cut himself into pieces and even ate himself, it was like a magic pill (served on the table). Jiang (the real person) is a bit evil, but he is harmed by his own kindness. He is not very impressed and does not say much (serves the table). The little policeman was so miserable. He was beaten all the time. He was also really brave. He actually dared to go with Xiao Zuo to face Jiang (the thief). But he had a strong professional ethics and was a people's policeman. *The rice the teacher wrote is so delicious, write more and eat more, haha.