When the Terminal Diagnosis Came, He Was with His One True Love

I hope the author can see it🎉🎉🎉 This story is generally sour and drawn out, with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first: the heart-wrenching and bitter atmosphere of the story is well written, the author knows exactly what style he wants to write in, and the emotional description is very careful, making it easy for people to empathize. Compared with many articles written by newcomers, this daily story is not boring and keeps people reading. Let's talk about areas that can be improved: First, the story framework is not mature enough, the rhythm is not well arranged, and some plots may not feel realistic if you think about it carefully. When writing later, you can sort out the plot, improve the settings, and make the story logic smoother. Second, the protagonist still has room to polish. Because this character's image is a bit thin and the character level is not rich enough, some more complex traits can be added to make the character more vivid and three-dimensional. Third, all the characters speak in similar tones and catchphrases, making it difficult to tell who is who. You can make some adjustments, either reducing such habitual expressions, or leaving them to only one of the characters. Each person's speaking style will be different, and the character will be more brilliant. I hope the author will polish it more and write better works in the future😘

A person who doesn't have much ability himself should not think that he is dragging his body with illness and hiding all kinds of things to do some things of little value. If he doesn't care about you, your death will be like throwing away a piece of clothing. If he cares about you at all, won't your self-righteous protection make him restless for the rest of his life? Only by taking care of yourself first and making others worry less can you truly help others.

Sure enough, this kind of sadism is right... I cried to death at night... Author, please update... Then the ending should be BE, right... This kind of sadistic novel is still good to read... And then, is it my fate to fall in love with serialized novels 😢 😢 😢

It makes me cry hahahaha. Because I have never felt love, I will panic when I am loved, but if I am used to being loved, I will not care. I am similar to Xiao Shu in some ways. I long to be loved, but I will not get love, and I will only lose myself. But I believe that he is worthy of love. Although we keep talking about bebe, I really hope that he has a good ending and that it belongs to him. There is no need for the painful repentance after the fart, nor the kind of miracle reappearance to make up for it. It is simple, sleep well, have a good dream, do what you like, stop worrying about others, think about yourself, it's okay to be stupid, and be good to yourself. Xiao Shu ❤️ 😢 I am more emotional, personal opinion. I'm so emotional tonight, I want to he woo woo woo in the last sentence~

The author wrote something that touched my heart!! I really like this kind of book, but there are very few people who write this book, because many people think it is crazy, but I really like this type of book 😢 😢 Continue to abuse! Give me severe torture!! 😢

It's so well written that my heart aches. I hope they can have a hen.

I'm so excited to watch it. I want to know whether the ending is he or be.

As a person who has experienced many battles and read countless bloody abuse articles and chasing his wife in the crematorium, I have never seen such a good torture. Didn't it make me burst into tears? A character with a low sense of merit is the most enjoyable to torture, okay? I saw a comment in the comment area saying that it felt so good. I don't have much ability. It's just that I'm moved by myself. It's useless to hide it. It's really because you're not lucky enough to get this kind of character. It's so cool, right? The only mistake I made was that I didn't notice that this article was a serialized article. As a result, I saw the most exciting part, but it was gone! Update it quickly. Although I expected it to be over in a short time, please update it quickly. I look forward to Be, so that this wave of cruelty can be as intense as possible 😄

I'm at my wits' end. I cried so much that I'm talking about this kind of little sun, little Li Yang. Where can I find it? I beg you, can you give it to me? I really want it. Let me go. What kind of sin did Little Sun Li suffer in his last life? He was treated like this in this life. Whoa? Was he someone in his last life? He saved Little Sun Li's 100 lives. He deserves to be treated like this by Little Sun Li. He is so gentle, so kind, and can cook. Wow, oh, oh, isn't this Little Yang? He also blocks damage for the attack. No, why did someone Bai Yueguang catch him off guard? Why can't Little Taiyang be caught off guard too? It's torturing both the body and the mind, and I have to write about how I was almost raped, little Taiyang, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, oh, they are so incompatible with each other. Little Yang, you really ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo[o to... Can you give Little Yang a good result, and don't ask for anything else or give him a happy be or something, let Little Yang reincarnate quickly and forget about this golden xx, or let Little Yang lead a good family again, and let him quickly forget this annoying Gong, he is not worthy of such a good person as Little Yang, and there are a lot of things to say, I still hope I hope, or maybe Little Yang doesn't like attacking anymore, Little Yang will definitely go to heaven. When Little Yang's adoptive parents see this, I feel like they all want to take out a 1,000,000-meter sword to beat up a certain person. If they don't want to, I don't mind taking a 1,000,000,000,0000-meter sword 😄😄😄

The dog blood torture is very tasty. It reminds me of an old friend, so I ate it as a meal. It's not bad.