Honkai: Star Rail: Selling Pokemon, and Everyone's Swooning Over Them

It's well written. Although the scene of rescuing an injured person is too cliche, you can still see what you want to express through the words. I would like to give you a suggestion. You don't need to deliberately describe the character of the protagonist. Write the story and then talk about other things. The story is the essence of the novel and the key to retaining readers. As long as the protagonist doesn't make principled mistakes, everyone can actually tolerate it. There is no need to portray the protagonist as a perfect person. Writing a good story is the most important thing. Don't deliberately set up a plot just to establish the character.

One flower, one leaf, one Bodhi👽Reincarnation is all a mystery👿I bring Bodhi to the ground😫Take the mist and rain of this half life🥶Shave your hair and become a monk🤯Just ask me, the Buddha to save her🤪Let go of obsessions and worries 🤓Seating under the bodhi tree🥳I believe in the reincarnation of life and death😂I also want to believe in the mercy of our Buddha😎How can you understand🤣the feeling of lovesickness and illness😇the perception of love and separation😍under the bodhi tree Enlightenment 😓 I am willing to let go of everything for you 😏 Let me spend this life 😲 The red petals of the other shore flower are scattered everywhere 😒 Who cares that he is crying 😤 Kneeling in front of the Buddha for thousands of years, I feel pity for seeing the Buddha 💀 I really want to see her again 😩 I crossed the River of Forgetfulness 😜 and walked to the other side 😭 You ask her if she is willing to look back 😠 Ridiculously frank 😲 I gave her a step and if she didn't cross, I would do it

It looks good. I like to choose a setting that attaches value to items for places like Belloberg that cannot get credit points. Originally, I expected that Sambo would spend money to buy the first Pokémon, but it turned out that Hook won the first one with the item that was the starting point of his dream. This kind of setting is warm and humane, and it feels like it is building a bond rather than a transaction. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Not bad, not bad

I feel pretty good. As long as it doesn't collapse later, this book can score over 80 points. I have gained a lot of experience after reading so many books.

The only thing I can say about the author is to praise the author's system settings. Not bad [laughing]

Not bad, but the pace feels a bit fast [exploration] The plot development transition is a bit awkward [eating melon]