Honkai: Star Rail: Selling Pokemon, and Everyone's Swooning Over Them

It's well-written. Although the rescue-and-injury plot is a bit cliché, you can still convey your message through the text. Here's a suggestion: don't focus on developing the protagonist's character. Write a good story first, then worry about other things. The story is the essence of a novel and the key to keeping readers engaged.

One flower, one leaf, one Bodhi tree 👽 Reincarnation is all a delusion 👿 I bring Bodhi to the ground 😫 Taking this half-life of misty rain 🥶 Shaving my head to become a monk in a robe 🤯 Only asking Buddha to save her 🤪 Letting go of attachments and worries 🤓 Sitting peacefully under the Bodhi tree 🥳 I believe in this cycle of life and death 😂 And I also wish to believe in Buddha's compassion 😎…

It's great! I love how they chose to imbue items with value and meaning, especially for characters like Bellberg who can't afford to spend credits. I initially thought Sambo might buy his first Pokémon, but Hook got his by using the item that marked the beginning of his dream. This setup is heartwarming and humane; it feels like building bonds rather than just trading. 😘😘😘

It's alright, not bad.

It seems pretty good. As long as it doesn't fall apart later on, this book should easily get over 80 points. Having read so many books, I have a lot of experience.

I only have one thing to say: I praise the author's system design. Great! 🤭

It's not bad, but the pace feels a bit fast. 🧐 The transitions in the plot were a bit awkward 🍉