A Whole School of Unhinged Clan Members from the Start

Progress: 81 The novel setting is eye-catching. All the teachers and students in the school travel to a different world together, and the heroine draws the only patriarch card. The clan leader is the only resurrection point, and death means permanent death. After clan members die, they can change their identity cards, and infinite resurrection is a bit like the fourth natural disaster. The setting is really cool, but the plot is a bit unclear. The pace is very slow, and after watching so much, I can extract very few key points, which is a bit watery. The feeling of itching in front of your feet should always feel good, but the reality is that it is a bit unclear. The heroine went to the forbidden area for the first time, and the task required clearing the ancient tomb. Two tribesmen, and a trio composed of a real and fake daughter. In the end, only one outsider survived, the real and fake daughter, one died and the other was injured. I wrote a lot of words, but I just don't know what the meaning is. The first appearance of the heroine and her clan members was a bit shocking, but the shock of being revealed in front of people was not enough, and it didn't scratch the itch. There are also two tribesmen, a teacher and a clear-minded college student. Their impressions are just that, there is no particularly vivid memory point. The same goes for other tribesmen. They didn't form a clear memory point, so they just watched it flow away like running water. Not as good as the three real and fake rich young masters. The supporting roles are only a little more distinctive than them, but it's useless. After two of them die, only one real rich young master is left. I feel like there are a lot of group chats, but I forget them once I've seen them, and they're not very enjoyable. I thought about it for a while, and I probably wanted to see the part where the patriarch and his clan members appeared in front of others. The other two hope to create a few tribesmen with distinctive personalities, such as who used to be the principal and is now the general manager, as well as old naughty elders, and professional poisonous tribe members. Third, I hope that every time I go to the Forbidden Land, it will be more exciting and more exciting, including the unknown creatures in the tomb and the thrilling background stories. Once this aspect is written, it is also a highlight.

Currently updated to chapter 57, it's super cool! ! ! One thing I like very much is that the author clearly states the gender of the protagonist at the beginning, because although there are many articles on female channels, the content he writes is gender-neutral. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, female channels have male and female protagonists, but male channels only have male protagonists. Yes, anyway, the male videos I watch are like this, and the female videos are uncomfortable to watch like this. The gender in the introduction is not obvious, and it is difficult to describe gender in the first few chapters, such as he, she, these words, they all refer to young people and so on. This kind of male and female, it is really uncomfortable! Then the gender is mentioned at the beginning. It may be because Zhang Qiling in the original work is a male and this one is a female, but I really like this! We really need this kind of game that clearly determines the gender of the protagonist at the beginning! Really like this! Then let's talk about the content of the main text. Although I have read similar books before, this one still made me feel like I was shining in the past. The content is also very novel and interesting. Who can compete without that kind of old book? In fact, when the real and fake Qianjin came out, I frowned a little because I had seen similar national sports stories before. Finally, it no longer follows the same old routine, and many of the foreshadowings are very interesting. The shortcoming is that the character of the protagonist may not be so clear, and I feel that it is not as impressive as the few small pieces. I hope there can be more content about the protagonist [blowing kiss]. Finally, there are too few chapters [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. It is the first time I encounter a novel that I like so much but it is such a small baby novel [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. Oh my god, please update more [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The novelty of the subject matter is very attractive, and it is obvious that the author has certain writing skills, but the content is relatively watery. I understand that the author wants to write a group portrait, but the main and branch plots are very slow in so many chapters, making the readers unable to grasp the key points. It feels that at the current speed, at least thousands of chapters will be written to complete it. I hope the author can consider appropriately streamlining and promoting the progress of the main line. For example, there is really no need to write so many words about the inner story. One chapter is full of two male characters making jokes and fighting for the patriarch's favor + the real and fake daughter support each other, worship the patriarch and always obey the instructions + barrage bragging. There is a break in the tomb and a small amount of descriptions of tombs and monsters. Chapter fifty only fights two monsters. The real and fake daughter are given so much ink to shape but in the end they betray and die inexplicably. So far, it has not played the role it should have with so many words. The subject matter is really attractive. I sincerely hope that the author can make progress. May the author work hard and wish the fire a bright future.

Current progress: Chapter 123 The idea is really novel, and the setting of 7,000 teachers and students playing the role of the Zhang family really struck a chord with me. When the clan leader dies, everyone is buried with him, so everyone supports the clan leader, and because he will be assimilated, it is really cool to use the clan leader as an anchor to let others see this kind of twisted love! And no one has ever seen all kinds of "living creatures" in the world view of Tomb Raiders. The Zhang family defeated them all at once. It was really cool. The plot of building the Zhang family from scratch, spreading the Zhang family's abilities to the outside world bit by bit, and quietly changing the whole world has a feeling of being a saint in front of others, and I like it very much! There is a lot of foreshadowing in the story. The author writes it very carefully and the content is very comprehensive. It can be seen that he has put great care into it. But the overall pace is slow, and some plots that I think should be exciting and exciting are not really enjoyable. Even though there was a barrage to describe how shocked and overwhelmed everyone was, the excitement was never quite there. I don't know if it was because the pace was too slow or because of the narrative. They want to teach ordinary people in this world to know how to protect themselves when they encounter weird things that go against common sense in the future. It makes me feel a little bit like a nanny, but not a lot. I just feel that the supporting characters are not very powerful and their abilities are not up to par. The Zhang family has to protect them, and they don't get anything in return, so I feel a little bit uncomfortable. And the forbidden area is obviously a place where people will die, but I didn't feel any sense of urgency when I read it. People in this world rarely see any practical responses to this kind of disaster. They all seem to be watching the excitement and watching the barrage. The danger seems far away from them, and it is difficult for me to take part in it. It always feels like I am watching something that has nothing to do with this world. Although the official has been in contact with some Zhang family members, the number of chapters may be too few and it did not make me feel that they are very urgent. Overall, the idea is outstanding, the framework is attractive, and it has full potential. I look forward to adjusting the narrative rhythm in the future and arranging more highlight moments for the Zhang family. With such a good foundation, the subsequent writing will definitely be more exciting, and I will continue to pursue it! Big cheers for the author!

It's very interesting. Finally, there is a tomb robbing fanfic that doesn't follow Wu Xie and others. This book has nothing to do with Wu Xie and others. It is about more than 7,000 Zhang family members saving the world. It is very novel.

Shocking and delicious, but the pace is slow, I really like this! Originally, I didn't really like Zhang Qiling as a girl, but after reading this book, I remembered that Zhang Qiling was originally a code name, and it didn't have to be a male. This kind of group portrait in a forbidden area is exactly what I like! Okay, they are all cute!

This book is super good. The main character is Zhang Qiling, but he does not play the role of Zhang Qiling in Tomb Raiders Notes. He is a very independent individual. The author writes the part about the assimilation of all the teachers and students in the school after they obtained the identity of the Zhang family. There is no big problem. The shortcomings I think may be that the number of words is too few, and the team leader and others have too many psychological frames. It feels like more than 1,000 words out of 2,000 are devoted to description. I think we can describe the current construction status of the Zhang family more, and then discuss it with outsiders. All in all, super nice

I have now read and updated it to Chapter 73. At present, the subject matter of this book is particularly novel. The character description is very good and the character description is more three-dimensional. Especially in the part about assimilation and the importance of the clan leader, the reaction and thoughts after assimilation are written out, and the respect and crazy love for the clan leader are vividly displayed, which is particularly interesting. And finally it's not about real and fake daughters competing against each other, it's about working together to help each other. This is only right, this is only reasonable, no idiot would perform a celebratory act when life and death are at stake. Because I had read a story about a real and fake daughter's fortune, which made me a little stressed and scared me to death. Fortunately, I wasn't. However, I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is lower than that of the supporting role. I hope that more highlight moments and aura can be added to the protagonist. I saw more than 20 photos and various hints and reminders from the author, and then I realized that the protagonist was Zhang Qiling, because there was too little portrayal of her, and it was a bit unclear to distinguish the protagonist. If the author wants to write a group portrait, he must first clearly depict the center. But I still like this movie very much. Although the depictions of the protagonists are relatively rare, I can still find a few. For example, Teacher Shengjie said with emotion, "This is the responsibility that the patriarch bears in this new [Zhang Family]." So I still like this novel very much. Who are you, the blooming redbud! ! ! Now everyone in 321 began to chant: The patriarch is the compass of the family [love] and the beacon of the family [love]. He also takes on the responsibility of catching their hesitating hearts [love]. This is the responsibility that the patriarch bears in this new [Zhang family] [love] Heart] is like a group of mad dogs with a chain, and the rope is tied in Zhang Qiling's hands. She is loyal in front of her, but in the eyes of others - there is no doubt that it is a crazy beast [love] The Zhang family will save people because of the instructions of the patriarch; the Zhang family will protect Protecting others is naturally due to the patriarch's entrustment [love]. The Zhang family's love and respect for the patriarch is engraved in the bones and integrated into the blood. When there is no disguise mission, there is absolutely no possibility of joining another camp. Even mentioning it is disrespectful to the patriarch. And contempt [Love] The clan leader is the soul of the clan, a being who needs to be respected, protected, and taken care of, and controls the development direction of the entire clan [Love] The Zhang family is like moths, always flying around the bright light [Love] How can the clan leader disobey the clan leader? Even if you unintentionally take drastic actions to protect the clan leader, as long as the clan leader doesn't like it, the clan members can change it at any time [Love]

I think it's generally pretty good, and the character descriptions are OK, but a bit laggy. If possible, more can be done to describe the protagonists' experiences, but there may be less, so I feel that the description of the protagonists is not as profound as the supporting characters. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Shockingly delicious! Anyway, among the stolen fanfics I've read, this is the first one written from such a perspective and idea. It's so good! However, I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. The author could actually speed up the progress, and the perspective should not always be about the Zhang family. There is a lot of explanations about the feud between two women and a man. To be honest, I am not interested at all anyway, and I feel that it is unnecessary, because the focus is on the Zhang family and Zhang Qiling, and there are many people watching. This is what people are going for, so I hope the author can improve it a little bit (PS: If the author has written a good outline or has a well-conceived plot, don't make major changes, otherwise it will be easy to collapse later. The author just needs to stick to himself. Of course, I still hope to make changes if it does not affect the general direction of the plot.) Finally, I like this book very much! Please give the author a big boost and update!