My Hogwarts Is Kind of Messed Up

It's pretty good, but the protagonist feels a bit disconnected. He's a time traveler, but he's either being cheated or on the way to being cheated. In the beginning, the gangsters were more mature, but later in Hogwarts, he was just a smart kid. Also, Harley sometimes cheats on the protagonist for no reason, which is a highlight. She pushes the protagonist into a fight with a three-headed dog without saying a word. I don't think of the protagonist as a person or a friend too decisively 🤦 As for Malfoy's girly character, which is interesting, he is also a child who is well taken care of by his family. The above is my personal opinion. Considering that most of the previous chapters are daily life and have not yet fully reached the main line, it cannot be generalized. And Harry is not the only one who grows up in the original work. It depends on how the author promotes the main line. Come on✊

Draco is so cute, and the blonde tsundere is great. She is also very silly. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very good. The author handles the details very well. The male protagonist has a sense of gentleness, and sometimes he is dull and tends to be behind the scenes. There is no poison in the overall view. I hope the author can balance the ease of love and the excitement of the plot. Give me five stars and you will definitely be popular.

It's chapter 55 and there's no sorting yet. And I feel like the protagonist looks both strong and weak. He punches hard when facing ordinary people. He's very powerful in combat. He doesn't even take out his wand when facing wizards. He looks like he's being led around by someone. And for the entire 55 photos, the protagonist doesn't get any stronger or learn new abilities.

Malfoy's sexual transformation is very popular recently, and this one seems to be the only one in the whole tomato. The character design of Malfoy is pretty good, and Harry is just average, but it's not as bad as other comments in the comment area. The protagonist really likes to step into the trap, and it's not as fun as other fanfics. If you come here for the interaction between the male and female protagonists, you can read it.

It's pretty cool, and the characters change. The heroines should be Draco and Harry. I just feel that the protagonist's strength is a bit low. When will it be strengthened?

So far, it seems that the photosensitivity is very comfortable. There is a plot, a main line, and a clear story line. There is also a CP tendency, and you can do it according to your own preferences. Although I don't care about this, as long as the emotion is not abstract or dramatic. Then the content development is fascinating, and it feels like watching Japanese cartoons before. This story has been reconstructed by the author himself. It seems that there are many points that can be written at present. I look forward to the subsequent development of the story.

It's a pretty good HP fanfic. The character of Harley's character is a bit like Wednesday, and the character of Malfoy is a bit like the little wolf girl. It makes it look better if you put it in. [Start]

After reading 50 chapters, it can be seen that the author has ideas, but there is a high probability that the writing is not good. There are a few small problems in these 50 chapters. Let's read it first.

A very novel hp fanfic. I have read many fanfics and the gender change of the main character is so smooth. This one is the best. Finally, a quick update for everyone!

Miss Malfoy, we love your teeth!!! 😢😢😢🥰🥰🥰 I think we can add a link later: "Do you dare to swear that you have never loved me?" "I, Harry Potter, swear that I have never loved Draco Malfoy. If I tell a lie, I will suffer the Cruciatus Curse and die." "No, I want you to swear on me that if Harry Potter If you have loved Draco Malfoy, then Draco Malfoy will suffer the Cruciatus Curse and die in pain, you say. "