Quick Transmigration: I Deliberately Seduce the Heroine’s Beloved, and He Becomes Mine

Overall, it's pretty good. The male protagonist prefers the female protagonist, but it's a little wordy. At least ten chapters feel unnecessary. Looking forward to the next story, preferably it will end in chapter 40

Although I have only read the first world for the time being, the writing style is not ignorant. On the contrary, the author's writing is considered delicate. After all, this is a fast-travel novel, so I thought it would be a quick-in and quick-out kind of thing. There is not much content in the story, but the sufficient description of psychological activities and actions will make you feel involved and the emotional line will not be abrupt. The appropriate description of beauty is also very good, which makes me feel that such a charming beauty deserves to be pampered and loved. And reading this kind of article is so cool. If the male protagonist owns the whole world, then the whole world will only love the female protagonist. Secondly, I especially like that the author added some interactions between the female supporting character and the female protagonist, which finally made me feel like "Oh my God, the female protagonist also has an absolutely preferred friendship line", because other novels of this type have not included some such settings, and are purely the group favorite type of an all-boy team. I hope that the heroine will not only be uniquely favored in love, but also unique in friendship. I really like this kind of small, exclusive group, it's so cool. It's so cool to be the heroine, isn't it? I read this kind of writing just for the pleasure. Finished the latest chapter. There are too many supporting characters and the narrative seems too long. For example, the heroine's jealous roommate, I wonder if there will be an important scene later. The previous conflicts are written in such detail, each character's body and psychology are expressed. There is also Xiao Li from the debate club. The core of a long dialogue is to highlight the unconscious care and desire for exclusivity in the male protagonist's heart. As soon as the male lead came out, the roommates had a lot of dialogue again. In fact, these can be summarized in one sentence, and there is no need to go into detail. There are many NPCs on the scene. But if you write it carefully, the story and characters will be full, and the university will have the appearance of a university, not just a background for romance. Each has its own advantages, and its flaws do not overshadow its strengths. I quite enjoyed reading it. When reading the story slowly, each character has his or her own background. Less dialogue would be better.

Stop, stop, stop! There is nothing that needs to be demined at the moment. There is only one thing: does the author still remember that this is a fast-travel novel? I've written 50 chapters on one plane and haven't finished yet! [Laughing awkwardly]

I was attracted to the first plane. I like this kind of beginning and end. Every step from falling in love to getting married and having children is not perfunctory. Especially there is a side story. It is so happy to watch the side story. There are few fast travel stories that describe the side story. I hope there will be side stories in the later planes. I hope 1V1 [blowing kiss]

The extras are not good to watch, but the main story is very good. If you like to torture the original heroine, and the heroine is not aggrieved, the original heroine can only be considered as part of their play. There will not be any disgusting scenes where the male protagonist chooses the female protagonist between the female protagonist and the female partner, and then the female protagonist has to go through the strategy to make the male protagonist prefer the female protagonist bit by bit. I don't like watching the strategy.

Wow, it's quite interesting. It doesn't abuse women and doesn't have a bloody plot. For example, the author is currently writing this one. The male protagonist has a contractual relationship with Su Wan, but he doesn't have any love, he only loves the female protagonist! [Shy][Shy][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses]

So pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🥺Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River🤩So handsome🥰 It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life, it makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be dehydrated. The nemesis of depression😊is the alarm clock for vegetative people. 😨So handsome that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River😈It sounded so good🥰It is God, it is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😚I ran away, I jumped hard, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so good that I couldn't stop crying. ٩(๑′0`๑)۶

The character of Hanzi Cha is too long, I think it's about 60-65 chapters. The writing style is okay and I don't want to be irritated. The relationship between the male and female protagonists provides enough spiritual food and is very fragrant.

After watching the first world, I feel that I am noble, clean in body, and clean in heart. In fact, I feel that my reputation is also clean. Except for the male protagonist who was out of his mind once and found a fake couple under contract (never kissed, hugged, and never saw each other) to cause trouble for himself, I can accept it. The male protagonist only likes the female protagonist's baby, and the female protagonist takes precedence over everything else. It is very suitable for people with feudal ideas like me [KISS][KISS][KISS]

It's very interesting. I actually really like the first world. Although many people say it's very long, I think this one has a beginning and an end and is very complete. It's just that the extra story is a bit unnecessary, and life after marriage is a bit frustrating.