The Apocalypse Erupts: It Begins with Swordsmanship Instinct

Better than most apocalyptic stories I've read. The writing doesn't look like it was written by AI, the words and sentences are good, and the idea is good. The early stage also showed the despair when the doomsday breaks out very well. The characterization of the protagonist group is also very good, they all have their own characteristics, each one is very useful, and they are not the kind of people who will only hold them back. Moreover, there are also mouth substitutes (who complained about everything we readers wanted to complain about) which slightly eased the apocalyptic atmosphere, and the overall integration was very good. The protagonist also has a very good personality. He is a person with upright views. Of course, he is not a bad person. In the early stage, when he had the power, he would help the people around him to the best of his ability. However, as the apocalypse spread, he gradually realized that some people were destined to be eliminated by the doomsday, and this era could not tolerate them (the protagonist was not a virgin in the early stage). The transformation of the protagonist's personality was very well portrayed. So I give it a five-star review, it's worth a look, but there are too few more [Like] AI article, not much to say. Brothers, stop talking about me [crying] I'm sorry for everyone, tricking everyone into killing them [crying] [crying] [crying]

I'm just a stranger, I personally think the writing is quite good, I support it with five stars. The first volume was written in 26 chapters. The plot is full of ups and downs, and the whole text is never laggy. The protagonist is not a reborn person. He is suddenly in the end of the world and experiences various things that push him to quickly adapt to this cruel world. The protagonist's growth line is clear and the transition is smooth. His perseverance and will to live towards death deeply moved me. I must watch the advertisement to support the author. Now I catch up to the latest news in one go. Unexpectedly, the IQs of all the staff are still online. The changes in the top management of the safe zone are also unconventional. There is no unexpected new official taking office. The three things that are inexplicable are targeted at the protagonist. This is something I did not expect. Moreover, the creation of the new character was also very successful. In just a few sentences, a proud, resolute and bold image emerged on the page, which made me open the advertisement again. There is too much written, which is a bit like a pretense, and that's all. I'm going to watch a commercial. It's really hairless

It's okay, but the AI ​​smell is too strong. The genius is so smart. In the later stage, human beings will become extinct [face covering], and there is basically no rest, and they are always fighting. .

It's good to watch, and the protagonist is not a lone wolf. He is half a great man, has leadership skills, is passionate, and is willing to give opportunities to people who make small mistakes. I quite like it. Irritated players who like to kill the sky and destroy the air should be very uncomfortable to watch. I will give you some protection in advance. But this survivor is too human-like. He is either a super hero who dares to break through the blockade or a virgin who has to save others even though he cannot save himself. He does not have the complex character of a real person.

I have read most of the apocalyptic articles on the market. Let me briefly talk about my personal views. Well~, let's talk about the brilliant part first. The framework of the novel is very catchy. The zombie apocalypse is combined with the setting of sequential lottery, and the hard-core survival route is integrated. There is no cliché and cool writing routine of brainless crushing at the beginning. The first volume has a tight rhythm. It only takes 26 chapters to complete a complete plot. The plot is constantly ups and downs, and the crises are progressive. You can feel the author's intention to write group portraits and pay attention to plot logic. The survival atmosphere is acceptable, and the pressure of survival is always online. Compared with many homogeneous apocalyptic novels, it has a bit more tense realism. The opening chapter is easy to immerse people in. However, there are many problems in the book that hold it back. First of all, the character creation is a bit thin, and the character motivations are not delicate enough, making it difficult to create empathy; secondly, the balance of the sequential lottery system needs to be polished, some abilities appear slightly abrupt, and the rules are not spread out step by step. At the same time, the conflict design in some bridge sections is slightly deliberate, and the resolution of individual crises lacks foreshadowing, which reduces the sense of immersion in hard-core survival. The narrative rhythm is occasionally unbalanced, and the transition between tense plot and daily life is blunt. Although there are some minor problems, I personally think it is still worth reading. Considering that the author is a newbie, it is already well written like this. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

Except for a little bit of embarrassment in reading it when I can't find it, other aspects such as characterization and logic are better. At least the writing style of the tomato novels I have read is relatively high. I read the comments and said that AI was used, but I didn't feel it. Maybe the author used it better. Moreover, although this article is not brainless, it is also a steady and refreshing kind (here I I don't know how to describe it), some people say that this protagonist is a bit of a virgin, but I think this protagonist is based on his own ideas. After all, he was an ordinary college student before the disaster, and he cannot be so ruthless. And I guess the five-star rating for the savior route is because the rating of this book is too low. I think the perception is better than most 9-point poisonous books on Tomato. I hope more people will see it.

Awesome, I really enjoyed reading it. With my personality, I would have scolded the protagonist when I saw him leaving those who were holding him back, but I didn't want to scold this book. The plot is too tight, with one wave rising after another. It's awesome. I must give it five stars.

The plot of the first volume is compact and not procrastinating. However, after only thirty or forty chapters, there are already three female protagonists who are attracted to each other and have different personalities. I hope it is not a harem story (I personally prefer no female protagonists, because not many Tomatoes can write good emotional dramas) Chapter 57 was so amazing, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist fought tooth and nail to kill Level 4 just to save Lin Tan. Then he passed out after the fight. Lin resisted him and said "You owe me once." It was really hard to stand up. If the protagonist hadn't run far away to save her, I could still hold on due to my high poison resistance.

It's quite good-looking, and it's considered to be in the first echelon of apocalyptic literature. The plot is compact and the stages are clear. Each character has his or her own highlights. It depicts the despair and gloom of the end of the world, as well as the struggles and arcs of the characters. The process from the collapse of the old order to the establishment of the new order is also very real. There are no brainless idiots (who would die soon if they were). The protagonist is capable but not arrogant, has the pressure and confusion to face responsibilities, and has the courage to protect his companions. The supporting characters also have their own merits. The group portrait is very good. As for whether there are multiple female protagonists, in the apocalypse there is a captain who is strong and does not abandon his teammates and has saved many lives. It is normal to have dependence and affection. It is not necessary to regard the previous relationship between a man and a woman as love. You should pay attention to the friendship between teammates who support each other in the apocalypse. In short, it is a very beautiful and logical post-apocalyptic group portrait novel. I highly recommend [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It's so well written, I just finished the first volume. The protagonist is decisive and charming, the supporting characters also have distinct personalities, and Fat Brother also has a character development arc. The description of the battle is very graphic, and all the players have online IQs and work together to survive. The monster is too strong. In addition to having mutants, it can also learn, but it will ambush and trap it on the first day of the mutation. Fortunately, human mutants who are not the protagonist appear in the first volume. I am very curious about the subsequent plot development. I hope you will be rewarded for your popularity! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]