I'm in the Myriad Heavens, but I'm with the Black Hand Gang

The black tiger rips out the heart, the black tiger flies over the vulture, the black tiger preys on the trapped lamb, one tiger kills two sheep, the tiger eats pudding with its claws, the tiger lands on the eagle's back, the crow flies on the plane, the angry crow takes off, the flying eagle spreads its wings, the flying eagle strikes the shadow, the falcon spreads its wings, the falcon lands on the ground , the lion prays to the sky, the cheetah gallops, the hungry wolf advances, the jackal hunts the rabbit, the sleeping bear wakes up, the bear paws, the orangutan breaks the branch, the rabbit punches, the mule kicks, the elephant kicks, the flying elephant steps on the mouse, the kangaroo jumps, the antelope leaps, the gazelle Leap, Ponytail Goshawk, Ponytail Swatter, Whale's Tail Wag, Angry Octopus, Small Fish Swimming, Lobster Claw, Cobra, Snake Step, Scorpion Paw, Turtle Punch, Sloth Kick, Rat Walking in the Ditch, Rat Walking astray Palace, mice steal cheese, sharks eat bait, buffalo fights mice, marmots throw weasels, herring kills, monkeys perform kung fu, stubborn monkeys magical kung fu, mantis fist, mantis god kung fu, cunning rabbit attacks, Mount Tai presses the top, two dragons play with pearls, lotus floats , Mountain Splitting Palm, Giant Ax to Cut Down Trees, Sickle to Sweep the Ground, Sickle to Goug the Ground, Melon Fist, Thunder Fist, Earthquake Fist, Asteroid Belt, Meteor Hit the Mountain, Super Planet Burning, Meteor Destruction, Spiral Scroll, Sweeping Kick, Hurricane Kick, Tiger Fighting Pose, Double Wind Pierced Ears, Eagle Claw Kung Fu, Flying Dragon in the Sky, Dragon Gripping Hands, Long Arms in the Sky, Flamenco Dance Steps, Flying Hammer, Cat Landing, Cat Shaking Water, Cat Turning, Flying Crane Catching Shrimps, Head Smashing Walnuts, Electric Eyes, Oysters shell, phoenix flying to the moon, tyrannosaurus flying, pterosaurs snatching cattle, volcano erupting, volcano burning farm, tornado destroying parking lot, caught jumping, spider eating fly, running rhinoceros, wheel hamster, wind blowing in the ears, me Become a lame goose, donkey kick, shadow run, shadow strangle, fangs of night, ghost impact, dark mist, shadow punch, black claw, night falcon dive, shadow lock, sty river collision, flying monkey clever treasure box

The writing is very good. The fact that Valon is not a modern time traveler but an original time traveler sets the tone within the world view and is not too outrageous. The American humor in the dialogue between the characters in Jackie Chan's Adventures is just right.

It's really good and very, very worth watching. There are no annoying clichéd plots, and there are no deliberate "slobbers" to portray the image. It is very reasonable and fits the character. I like it very much. It's gold. Oh! "Elders Never Lie" is also written by the author. They are very good, very good [Like][Like][Like]

Objectively speaking, the content of the book is quite good. From the perspective of fan fiction, there is no character breakdown. However, the process does not develop quickly enough. There are too many descriptions of inner thoughts and shocks. There are only two updates per day, resulting in a slow development of the story. Every time you enter a new world, you have to waste a lot of pen and ink to write about other people's reactions. It is not very friendly for follow-up, but it will be smoother when you read it after one or two hundred chapters. It's far north. Why can I write two pages of a conversation when I enter the office, half aura and half psychological description? The soul egg must be detailed and proper. The previous books actually had this problem, but when I read it, it was 200 chapters long and it wasn't so obvious. Now that I see the story development speed is really ridiculously slow, I suggest you keep reading.

Five-star food, the author writes about Boss Walong's temperament, and his behavior is very well-organized, which is very enjoyable. I almost want to be Boss Walong's younger brother [face covering]. Boss Walong, Ah Fen, Zhou, and La Su have a high degree of trust in each other. Even if he confessed the secret that he had obtained the memory of another world and could travel to another world, the brothers still chose to follow him unconditionally. The writing was very good and was not estranged or inconsistent at all. The rhythm is very comfortable and the laughs are dense, so I give it five stars.

(Chew Chew Chew) Very good, very perfect. It is a very good fanfic of Walon in The Adventures of Jackie Chan. This Walon is the real boss [Like]. The level is a large cup. If it were not for the slow update of two chapters a day, this would be a super large cup. In short, it is highly recommended to watch (Chew Chew Chew) 😋

It's so beautiful, the characters are all very realistic, and the writing is very powerful. But the author has too few updates, so I finished it in one go. There are too few updates, and it's easy for everyone to read the book if they can't get enough of it. It's also difficult to give a rating. It is recommended to update three or four times a day.

Very good. The biggest highlight is that the trio has taken on the function of making complaints very well and perfectly fits the character design. Furthermore, even though Valon inherited memories, his character design was relatively intact (compared to others of the same type). He also wrote out the attractive aspects of the protagonists in other works. It was obvious in the first dungeon that Kazuma was not written as a tool and a stepping stone, which is very rare. However, it is recommended not to write about quick travel later. Quick travel is really a tool, including the protagonist. The advantage of controlling this kind of character design will be lost.

Very good. Keep it up. This book is the best one I have read among Jackie Chan's adventures.

The writing is quite good, but there are too many sensational parts.