The Noble F4's Most Hated Childhood Friend: Go Ahead, Keep It Up

Excellent: 1. The article has its own design, the plot is relatively unique, and the desire for expression as a novice author can be seen 2. The protagonist's character is that of a villainous young master, and he is very upright. (There is a small point to compare which one. The protagonist's attitude towards his brother is a bit cowardly, but sometimes he is very tough? This place is not villainous enough) 3. I personally like this introduction and have the desire to read more. Disadvantages: 1. There are many mistakes in the character names. The expressions of some sentences are very strange and there are grammatical problems. This is indeed a relatively low-level error, but I believe the author will make improvements in the future (it will be very painful for people who care about usage, so it is not recommended for this kind of people to watch) 2. The rhythm of the article is not very good, which is a common problem among novice writers, so I can understand it. 3. The characters' emotions are very strange, especially Gu's strange love for the protagonist, which is a bit unbearable (because the names are always wrong, which makes the character's emotional transition even more complicated and confusing) Make some suggestions 1. You still need some outline. Arranging the ups and downs of emotions according to the outline will help you master the rhythm of the article. 2. If you really don't have the energy to check the article, you can let AI check the sentences (don't worry about being scolded by AI for writing, this is a relatively common practice)

Except for Ye Jinghe, F4 is pretty good😋. As for Shen, let's wait until he grows up a little. In fact, I still have a little crush on the protagonist and his brother. I don't know if it's real🤔, it feels very delicious😋, but I've only read Chapter 26, so I don't know what the plot will be like later. .

The plot is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and wrong sentences. Keep up the good work

The author did a good job, but the names of some places were wrong. But this article is really good. Come on, great author! [Love][Laugh]

It feels pretty good-looking. There are too many errors in the sentences of this article. Either the symbols are not correct, or the sentences are repeated... I hope the author can change it when he has time. I have only found a lot of mistakes after reading it for a short time. I give it 5 stars. I hope the author can correct these problems. It is still very good-looking and the characters are also very interesting to me. However, if you don't care about this, don't read it.

It's so beautiful, I really like Ji Yu's character design [lick screen], whether it's with Gu Yanxi or Fu Yansi, I have a great time 🥰, I love you so much [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author [love] [love] [love]

More from the author. Love to read👀

I really like this book, it's very interesting