Western Fantasy: The Unlucky Soul Forced to Save the World

Not bad, the first 1 to 6 chapters are basically all foreshadowing but very warm, but you can skip it if you feel bored. The author really doesn't understand politics at all. Politics will not end because you leave, and the count cannot use his eldest son to marry a baron. If it is decided in public, such as a duel, or a certain condition. The earl takes his own reputation into consideration and will not violate it because of a mere baron.

In Chapter 31, the protagonist officially embarks on a journey and leaves the novice village. The pace is a bit slow, but the writing is really good. From a baby to a teenager, it is written a lot without making people feel verbose, and the twisted sense of immorality of pseudo-orthopedics is also well written. How should I put it overall? It seems like I am reading something very serious. To be honest, I have seen too many entertainment things. I am not used to seeing something so serious all of a sudden, but it is really good-looking. The role of sister is always not very attractive to me in other novels. The sister in this book My sister's writing is really good. The feelings I have cultivated since I was a child are as strong as ever. I am also looking forward to the follow-up heroine. After all, the author can write such an attractive story about an attribute like my sister that is not to my liking. Then other elements that I like more will definitely give me a higher reading experience.

In fact, it has nothing to do with fantasy. It is more like the parallel Middle Ages. There are currently no dragons, epics, or subspecies. There are only gods with no sense of existence, and magic that even nobles like the male protagonist are basically unable to touch. It is like a purely existing attribute that has no great intersection and integration with people's lives. The world is a travel stage created for the male protagonist. No matter where he goes, there is no clear explanation and embodiment of diverse forces and cross-racial communication. The advantage is the atmosphere, which is more like a short story after the rain, with a touch of glass-like happiness. If you like this kind of atmosphere, you can give it a try.

After reading some, I'm ready to go. Of course, it's not that this book is not good, otherwise I wouldn't give it five stars. Let's not look at the core first, but first look at the appearance, that is, the writing style. I think the passing grade is completely enough, and I even think that I have actually written something of my own. However, if I want to be better, it lacks some fine sentences or some very interesting descriptions, so overall it is a quite satisfactory writing style (of course I have only read a few chapters. To be honest, this chapter is I'm actually a bit embarrassed to comment, but I'm used to it, so I'm sorry.) In terms of core, I think it may be written well in the future, because the theme of learning to accept the face of misfortune is very clear, and the whole book can be written around this. With good writing style, it is no problem to write seriously as a final book, so I think it will be a book with a beginning and an end, but I am not very patient with novels, so I ran away, come on.

The writing style is very comfortable, at least I can read it very well now. As for why I say now, it is because the author with better writing skills is more likely to suffer from literary youth disease. Although according to normal logic, no one should have trouble with money, but magic realism. . . I hope the author will not do this kind of thing in the future.

The viewing experience is comfortable. The first volume is from the sister's point of view. The protagonist's presence is not high. The adventure is not boring at the beginning. The protagonist's personality is not very distinctive. He is the kind of perfect saint-type male protagonist. However, the early plot is a bit depressing, I hope the subsequent story will be more exciting.

I like my sister very much! I hope there will be more scenes later on I have no objection to the author's use of AI. Can you please modify it? The first time I went to the blacksmith shop, I still rode a horse. Later, I changed to making a carriage. I just mentioned that the third lady of the chamber of commerce gave him an armor. Later, I built it myself.

Yes, my writing skills are improving all the time and I am full of emotions. The rhythm is quite well controlled. From the past life to the baby to leaving home, the writing is smooth and natural.

The rhythm is comfortable, the daily writing is okay, and the relationship between siblings is interesting [I understand], but the use of AI seems to be a bit too much, and I still recommend the author to revise the text more.

It has a strong Japanese-Western fantasy flavor, which reminds me of the plots of ancient TV dramas, inexplicably becoming stronger, inexplicably forming bonds, and inexplicably believing.