His ex-wife regrets it + The campus belle pursues her man
In middle age, Fang Zheng’s family goes bankrupt, his wife runs off with his brother, and the hospital tells him he only has a few years to live. His life hits rock bottom.
He takes a construction job carrying bricks to pay for treatment, only to have another leg crushed.
Leaning on crutches and carrying a knife, Fang Zheng goes to confront the crooked foreman, but runs into Mu Yao, who has come to inspect the site.
The powerful, formidable CEO wears a construction helmet, squints slightly in the sun, and sweat runs down her cool, beautiful face.
It’s her.
Fang Zheng swallows hard. Back in school, she was the campus belle he had bullied and hurt.
Now she has transformed into a high-powered CEO.
Beside her, he looks utterly shabby and pathetic.
“Fang Zheng?” She seems surprised.
As he tries to run, she snatches his crutch, and in his panic he buries his face in the cement.
His voice muffled, he says, “You’ve got the wrong person.”
But she takes his chin and slowly wipes the dirt from his face, gently caressing his cheek. “I’ll give you ten million yuan to be with me.”
“Never. Even if I die and jump from here, I’ll never be with you.”
Fang Zheng had no idea that those words, spoken in anger and humiliation, would truly make her die before him.
“Fang Zheng, you’re a block of stone. But I wish you could give me just a little love, even the tiniest bit...”
She closed her eyes forever in his arms, still humbly begging for his love with her dying breath.
Fang Zheng regretted it. If he’d known things would turn out this way, maybe he should have treated her better in the last days of his life.
He had treated her so badly. If only he could start over...
Fang Zheng opened his eyes and found himself back at eighteen...
It's quite good. The heroine's words and deeds are well described. She has a sense of dominance that is not oppressive but also very exciting. She is very charming and cute at the same time. I hope that the author will perform steadily in the future and the results will continue to rise.
(I am also an old reader who has read all the way to the end of the first Miss Eldest book. Can the author please reply to me~)
The plot involving Wang and Su was a bit off, but the rest was fine. I originally thought the male protagonist was pretentious and unlikable, but later I found him to be quite innocent. Think about it again, if you stick to Mu, it will be very cheap. The man's experience is really not worthy of Mu. Su just wanted to have sex but also wanted to get out of it. She had a sweet dream of eating and sleeping, but she found that she could not successfully capture the male protagonist. He became possessive and claimed that he only loved and chased her, but he deceived himself into believing it. The way he died in the end was very consistent with the setting of a mentally disturbed person.
Forgot to mention, it doesn't feel like AI. This is simply the most refreshing thing among Pomodoro writers. Must reward.
I'll wait and see for the time being. I originally read other comments saying that this is a rebirth story but I haven't been reborn yet so I thought it was weird. But after the test, it turned out to be okay. There is something fishy about the relationship between my ex-wife and my brother. I just saw my ex-wife coming to the hospital for the first time to find the protagonist. The suppressed emotions in this plot are very good. There is also the point where women are strong and men are weak. Many online articles have strong women and weak men. Either the men and women have obvious differences in their positions or family backgrounds, and they get along with each other. It is still an ordinary love story plot, or the female channel changes skin. In my opinion, the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It's also a relatively standard version of a strong woman and a weak man, and it's reasonable and not dramatic, which is pretty good.
So, is this book a single heroine or a dual heroine? Mu must be in love with the male protagonist, and Su I don't know how to treat her. I feel like she doesn't like Wang, but there are some contractual constraints (I think it's probably that Su divorced and married Wang, and Wang helped the male protagonist pay off the debt and redeem the house). But, the key is stuck at this step? It's so troubling, I should say that two kinds of people can't sleep under the same bed... At present, I feel that Su still loves the male protagonist, but the two of them keep quarreling and refuse to talk properly, which is a bit torturous. If there is a single female protagonist, then Su will definitely be regretful (now, think about it, Su doesn't want to Wanting a child is not only due to physical failure, right? It may also be due to childhood trauma) If there are two female protagonists, I think there is no other choice but to get married. After all, this is the only way to make things come true [Chigua] I hope the author can explain whether it is single or dual [laughing]
Who wrote it? It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. [Working on draft]
The author is a realist, and many of the plots are in line with objective reality. I feel that I can't write without going deep into society. Brother, you are so awesome.
It's quite good. If it's a single female protagonist, I hope it won't follow the same story as the previous book with a female supporting role. Come on.
Give it a good review, I'm really looking forward to the story after rebirth.
Actually, this book is generally good, but I believe most people are attracted by the cover and introduction. Then there is the matter of content. This is a book of rebirth. But normal books are written casually in the previous life and then reborn. But this book has dozens of chapters. It's good because the story characters and so on have already been introduced. The bad thing is that some of the content written before the rebirth was a bit silly or not in line with the public's taste, so some people didn't rate it or gave it a low score and stopped watching it. But I personally think it's pretty good, and I hope it gets better and better. [Like][Like][Like]
The plot before rebirth may dissuade many people. Putting aside the relationship between the characters, I think it is very realistic about the life reality of the male protagonist after his decline. Of course, this is one of the rare advantages. I think the author can write it more simply. After rebirth, he should focus on the male protagonist compensating the female protagonist (Mu Yao), and make the position of the Su Dynasty clearer. If you don't love it, you don't love it. Don't pull it. It was already painful enough in the beginning, and it would be too uncomfortable to engage in a love triangle. The emotional description is still very delicate.
The character shaping ability is amazing, the heroine is completely out of character and full of vitality.
Many scenes have a strong visual appeal, and there is room for improvement in the plot's time and rhythm.
After looking at the length of the author's other works, the rebirth point of this work is too slow. It is recommended that the overall length of the article should not be too short, as it may seem anticlimactic or end in vain.
The author has excellent character creation skills and a well-designed plot. He is fully capable of writing a very classic and well-received masterpiece. Come on.
It's quite good. The heroine's words and deeds are well described. She has a sense of dominance that is not oppressive but also very exciting. She is very charming and cute at the same time. I hope that the author will perform steadily in the future and the results will continue to rise. (I am also an old reader who has read all the way to the end of the first Miss Eldest book. Can the author please reply to me~)
The plot involving Wang and Su was a bit off, but the rest was fine. I originally thought the male protagonist was pretentious and unlikable, but later I found him to be quite innocent. Think about it again, if you stick to Mu, it will be very cheap. The man's experience is really not worthy of Mu. Su just wanted to have sex but also wanted to get out of it. She had a sweet dream of eating and sleeping, but she found that she could not successfully capture the male protagonist. He became possessive and claimed that he only loved and chased her, but he deceived himself into believing it. The way he died in the end was very consistent with the setting of a mentally disturbed person. Forgot to mention, it doesn't feel like AI. This is simply the most refreshing thing among Pomodoro writers. Must reward.
I'll wait and see for the time being. I originally read other comments saying that this is a rebirth story but I haven't been reborn yet so I thought it was weird. But after the test, it turned out to be okay. There is something fishy about the relationship between my ex-wife and my brother. I just saw my ex-wife coming to the hospital for the first time to find the protagonist. The suppressed emotions in this plot are very good. There is also the point where women are strong and men are weak. Many online articles have strong women and weak men. Either the men and women have obvious differences in their positions or family backgrounds, and they get along with each other. It is still an ordinary love story plot, or the female channel changes skin. In my opinion, the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It's also a relatively standard version of a strong woman and a weak man, and it's reasonable and not dramatic, which is pretty good.
So, is this book a single heroine or a dual heroine? Mu must be in love with the male protagonist, and Su I don't know how to treat her. I feel like she doesn't like Wang, but there are some contractual constraints (I think it's probably that Su divorced and married Wang, and Wang helped the male protagonist pay off the debt and redeem the house). But, the key is stuck at this step? It's so troubling, I should say that two kinds of people can't sleep under the same bed... At present, I feel that Su still loves the male protagonist, but the two of them keep quarreling and refuse to talk properly, which is a bit torturous. If there is a single female protagonist, then Su will definitely be regretful (now, think about it, Su doesn't want to Wanting a child is not only due to physical failure, right? It may also be due to childhood trauma) If there are two female protagonists, I think there is no other choice but to get married. After all, this is the only way to make things come true [Chigua] I hope the author can explain whether it is single or dual [laughing]
Who wrote it? It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. [Working on draft]
The author is a realist, and many of the plots are in line with objective reality. I feel that I can't write without going deep into society. Brother, you are so awesome.
It's quite good. If it's a single female protagonist, I hope it won't follow the same story as the previous book with a female supporting role. Come on.
Give it a good review, I'm really looking forward to the story after rebirth. Actually, this book is generally good, but I believe most people are attracted by the cover and introduction. Then there is the matter of content. This is a book of rebirth. But normal books are written casually in the previous life and then reborn. But this book has dozens of chapters. It's good because the story characters and so on have already been introduced. The bad thing is that some of the content written before the rebirth was a bit silly or not in line with the public's taste, so some people didn't rate it or gave it a low score and stopped watching it. But I personally think it's pretty good, and I hope it gets better and better. [Like][Like][Like]
The plot before rebirth may dissuade many people. Putting aside the relationship between the characters, I think it is very realistic about the life reality of the male protagonist after his decline. Of course, this is one of the rare advantages. I think the author can write it more simply. After rebirth, he should focus on the male protagonist compensating the female protagonist (Mu Yao), and make the position of the Su Dynasty clearer. If you don't love it, you don't love it. Don't pull it. It was already painful enough in the beginning, and it would be too uncomfortable to engage in a love triangle. The emotional description is still very delicate.
The character shaping ability is amazing, the heroine is completely out of character and full of vitality. Many scenes have a strong visual appeal, and there is room for improvement in the plot's time and rhythm. After looking at the length of the author's other works, the rebirth point of this work is too slow. It is recommended that the overall length of the article should not be too short, as it may seem anticlimactic or end in vain. The author has excellent character creation skills and a well-designed plot. He is fully capable of writing a very classic and well-received masterpiece. Come on.