【“Psychologist” “Old Chinese Medicine Doctor” 【Multiple heroines, none of them brainless】
Shinkahara Seiji transmigrated into the Hokage world. His talent as a ninja was mediocre, and he had no Kekkei Genkai. All he inherited was an unremarkable little clinic.
Fortunately, he had brought with him the psychology knowledge from his previous life.
In a world where everyone excelled at killing, deception, and endurance, he alone knew how to heal troubled minds.
With the awakening of his Mind-Healing System, Shinkahara Seiji became the only psychologist in the ninja world.
From then on, Konoha had a strange new clinic.
The dignified lady of the Hyuga Clan blushed and said this would be the last time.
Kurenai Yuhi had only meant to give it a try, but after her treatment, she kept coming back of her own accord.
Tsunade said she didn't need it, but her body honestly pushed open the door to the consultation room.
From that day on, Konoha's ninjas began entering the Shinkahara Clinic one after another.
Years later, the Fourth Great Ninja War broke out.
When Shinkahara Seiji strode onto the battlefield and casually subdued a Tailed Beast, everyone was dumbfounded.
“Are you kidding me? Aren't you a doctor?!”
Has the potential to become a leader among Naruto fans.
There are currently two problems:
1. The protagonist is a little impatient when he is in the red game. The joke is "This wave is urgent." Although Tomato is fast-paced, it does not have to be handled this way. The core of fast-paced is to capture the readers' expectations and attention. The same goes for adding new female characters. The summary is that the emotional line can be written slower. After all, the core selling point of this book is to rely on psychological knowledge to conquer the female character's defense step by step. Writing it faster may be a small gain.
2. Chizuru, the original female character, has too much space in the early stage. She can be a tool to promote the plot, but it cannot make readers feel that she is very important in the heart of the protagonist, because readers' expectations of reading fan fiction are to see you conquer the original character. No matter how good your writing skills are, writing about a married man in a male channel, and also an anime fan, is definitely thankless. After all, many female anime characters The characters are pure, sacred and beautiful in the eyes of the readers, but those who break the rules will be scolded until the ancestors disappear for eighteen generations. Even if some readers have a hobby of being a thief, they are only a minority (and some of these people can only accept it as a seasoning to enrich the taste rather than as a staple food). Among fans, they are a minority among the minority, and it has been verified in the market.
Finally, the above are purely personal opinions and selfish desires. It is true that I hope the author will get better and better, and it is also true that I want to see more content that I want to see [full]
The writing is very detailed and great. The psychological grasp is very accurate, but liking to tease people is a bad habit and needs to be looked at. (Flirting, some people don't really like this, so I suggest the author to change it, and have two sets)
But it is still too easy at the moment. For a person whose world of martial arts is paramount (and turbulent), he may die at any time (to be precise, when life and death are not in his own hands).
The final difficulty often requires someone who can be trusted between life and death to break through. This is unique to this kind of world (except for pure love brains, of course, but this kind of cruel world does not support it.)
The writing is very good for me so far. I will follow up with updates. Already updated + advertising support. I hope to stick to it.
It's very interesting. The protagonist is not invincible from the beginning. It's logical and the content is good. Some of the Naruto stories I've read before are all about Konoha Village, or once they go to the Land of Fire, everyone surrenders. It's boring to watch. , I personally feel very good after reading this book. I hope I can continue to write it. Don't be a eunuch [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing], come on author
It's okay, it's pretty good, but it just feels like it's not good enough.
It's pretty cool, but it won't be updated anymore.
The subject matter is very novel and the speed is moderate. After reading four chapters so far, it is quite good. The writing style is also pretty good and the description is very careful. I don't think there are any general problems. As for the author's comment mentioned in the later comments, it is still by Arabala. I think it is slightly criticized. You should go and see it for yourself to understand it, rather than follow what others say.
Finally, I hope the author will work hard and follow me!
Full marks, you boy. I highly recommend watching it. The pace is good.
It's still pretty good-looking, but there's too little written about it. It's not quite a succubus at the moment, but it might get better in the future.
It's beautiful. Although I can't say what's particularly eye-catching, it's easy to get addicted to it [Thinking]
The plot is still great, but the author is a bit confused, Yuri has long red hair [face covering]
Not bad, worth watching when you are bored
Why was the update discontinued? I quite liked the previous interaction between Hinata and the protagonist.
Has the potential to become a leader among Naruto fans. There are currently two problems: 1. The protagonist is a little impatient when he is in the red game. The joke is "This wave is urgent." Although Tomato is fast-paced, it does not have to be handled this way. The core of fast-paced is to capture the readers' expectations and attention. The same goes for adding new female characters. The summary is that the emotional line can be written slower. After all, the core selling point of this book is to rely on psychological knowledge to conquer the female character's defense step by step. Writing it faster may be a small gain. 2. Chizuru, the original female character, has too much space in the early stage. She can be a tool to promote the plot, but it cannot make readers feel that she is very important in the heart of the protagonist, because readers' expectations of reading fan fiction are to see you conquer the original character. No matter how good your writing skills are, writing about a married man in a male channel, and also an anime fan, is definitely thankless. After all, many female anime characters The characters are pure, sacred and beautiful in the eyes of the readers, but those who break the rules will be scolded until the ancestors disappear for eighteen generations. Even if some readers have a hobby of being a thief, they are only a minority (and some of these people can only accept it as a seasoning to enrich the taste rather than as a staple food). Among fans, they are a minority among the minority, and it has been verified in the market. Finally, the above are purely personal opinions and selfish desires. It is true that I hope the author will get better and better, and it is also true that I want to see more content that I want to see [full]
The writing is very detailed and great. The psychological grasp is very accurate, but liking to tease people is a bad habit and needs to be looked at. (Flirting, some people don't really like this, so I suggest the author to change it, and have two sets) But it is still too easy at the moment. For a person whose world of martial arts is paramount (and turbulent), he may die at any time (to be precise, when life and death are not in his own hands). The final difficulty often requires someone who can be trusted between life and death to break through. This is unique to this kind of world (except for pure love brains, of course, but this kind of cruel world does not support it.) The writing is very good for me so far. I will follow up with updates. Already updated + advertising support. I hope to stick to it.
It's very interesting. The protagonist is not invincible from the beginning. It's logical and the content is good. Some of the Naruto stories I've read before are all about Konoha Village, or once they go to the Land of Fire, everyone surrenders. It's boring to watch. , I personally feel very good after reading this book. I hope I can continue to write it. Don't be a eunuch [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing], come on author
It's okay, it's pretty good, but it just feels like it's not good enough. It's pretty cool, but it won't be updated anymore.
The subject matter is very novel and the speed is moderate. After reading four chapters so far, it is quite good. The writing style is also pretty good and the description is very careful. I don't think there are any general problems. As for the author's comment mentioned in the later comments, it is still by Arabala. I think it is slightly criticized. You should go and see it for yourself to understand it, rather than follow what others say. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and follow me!
Full marks, you boy. I highly recommend watching it. The pace is good.
It's still pretty good-looking, but there's too little written about it. It's not quite a succubus at the moment, but it might get better in the future.
It's beautiful. Although I can't say what's particularly eye-catching, it's easy to get addicted to it [Thinking] The plot is still great, but the author is a bit confused, Yuri has long red hair [face covering]
Not bad, worth watching when you are bored
Why was the update discontinued? I quite liked the previous interaction between Hinata and the protagonist.