Frieren Collects Magic in Marvel

It's okay, the AI tastes a bit, and some settings are a bit vague or wrong, but it's acceptable. Well, after reading so much dog history, I think it's okay. Well, but it's true that as some comments said, there are still some OOC aspects. As a new author, it's actually pretty good. Well, I hope to use less AI. After all, it's so bland. There are too few bland daily articles, and if I occasionally read them, I would feel uncomfortable. They are tasteless, and it is a pity to discard them. It may also be the difference in writing style, because I have also read similar articles that were not written with AI. In short, they are not bad. I hope the author will continue to work hard. At least, well, I read 26 chapters, and I feel that it is okay. It is the kind that can be added to the bookshelf. As an old bookworm who has been reading for so long, my evaluation of this book is that at least there are no big breaking points, and it is not particularly AI-flavored. It may be because I have lowered my requirements, that is, the character of the protagonist, and there are some sentences in the um part. Well, in addition, this book has a shortcoming. At least at this stage, it is not suitable for opening paragraph comments. There will be some bad remarks. In short, I hope the author will stick to it. After all, there are too few such articles. Well, come on, it is a blessing to the new author. Ah, by the way, please reply to the author. After looking back a little bit, the combat power was somewhat weakened, maybe because I didn't look back. In short, there are still some things like that. I hope the author can change it. I still think it's a bit weird. Please don't use it too obviously. I really can't accept it.

Overall it's okay, it has its highlights and shortcomings. Personally, I am more interested in plot setting than writing style. If you are not used to reading the first few chapters, you can just quit. There will be more later. First of all, it's true that there are very few stories about collaborations between Fulian and Marvel. That's why I read it, it's relatively novel. The writing style seems okay, not childish. The shortcomings are also obvious, they are nothing more than combat power issues and writing problems. I don't use AI very much, so I won't push it too much. I personally think that Fulian, as a great magician who has lived for a thousand years, cannot only use general attack magic in battle no matter how clumsy she is. Moreover, when fighting monsters, it always gives me the feeling that "Fulillian has to be weakened in order to balance the combat power system." But this may be because I am too extreme, but it is still within my acceptable range so far. Then there is the most important writing problem, too much action description. There are almost no expressions in the whole story, and all the characters are expressed with precise movements. Does the author have any obsession with line drawing? Moreover, the occurrence rate of some words is too high, which makes it easy to get bored after reading it for a long time. For example, "she said", "two seconds passed" and "paused for a few seconds". Especially this two seconds. When I saw it later, I wondered if the author had any obsession with this two seconds. It appeared so frequently that I almost thought the characters in it were some kind of PPT. They would be stuck for two seconds when saying a sentence, and two seconds when an action was stuck. Later, when I saw this two seconds, I wanted to laugh. Because I read very quickly and rarely chew on words, the overall reading experience is not bad. As long as there are no big surprises later, I will probably continue to follow it. Finally, I wish the author good luck in his studies🤗🤗🤗If the writing style is changed later, I will probably give a follow-up review😇

After reading it, give me a quick refresher. The two chefs were so ecstatic that they accidentally got mesmerized and realized it was already early in the morning. They even forgot to do any tasks (oh sh*t) I think the overall evaluation is very good. I personally like the relaxation of Fulian's anime. It is plain but not boring. It is very comfortable to read. The same is true for this article. The characterization of Fulian is great. Her expressionless and calm look has come to my mind. I can't describe the specific feeling. Anyway, it is very comfortable to read. I like this style. However, Fulian's combat power seems to have been weakened a bit...? It may still be revealed. I can't forget the part where I made a mirror clone in the maze. It was very destructive and so cool. Just another quick reminder (eh↘hey↗) I want to see Fulilian fight Thanos (scratches her butt)

There are some details that make Fulilian look OOC. First, even when her shoulder was cut by a wind blade, Fulilian could still talk to the person who cut her without changing her expression. This shows that she is a warrior with a high tolerance for this kind of pain. She probably will not die just because of a minor injury. It hurts to frown; secondly, Fulian is not a caring person, she can't even take care of herself. The role of mother-in-law is played by Philan. Although Fulian would occasionally show her motherly side when Philan was young, after Philan grew up, she almost It's all Feilun who takes care of Fulian; thirdly, Fulian has very rich combat experience. She is an excellent warrior, but it is true that her magic is usually general attack magic. The description of the battle is okay. I look forward to the old thing making large attacks with her hands in the future. When using magic; fourthly, Fulian has a typical elf-style procrastination. She can put off one thing for a hundred and eighty years before dealing with it. This may have something to do with the indifference of the elves. Although she will take the initiative to care about her teammates later, it is still difficult to change the nature of the elves. Overall, it's okay. The writing using AI is not bad. I hope that in the future, the author can gradually break away from AI and use his own writing style to write wonderful stories.

Although it was written in AI, the quality is okay

It's very beautiful, and Fulian is also very cute in it. I don't know if the author has updated more, but I still want to read 😢😢😢😢

Looks good, but I feel like I've been ripped off

There are just a few updates!

It's nice to watch, a very novel linkage, and I don't think the characters are very OOC. Author, you must continue to update.

Who is Florian? What to do??