From the Start, I Married Qiao Yi, and My Luck Couldn’t Be Better

It's time to generate electricity. This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong A for Dong Zhuo. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge What Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the character description is very good!

It's a good farm story, but there aren't many battles. At present, the protagonist's development is still laid out in the early stages, and we can look forward to the follow-up. However, I feel that the direct description of the characters is not detailed enough. For example, the heroine Joey Mei, maybe because after reading it in one go, I feel that there are not many warm scenes between the protagonist and the heroine. It should be because the protagonist is too busy in the early stages of laying the groundwork. There are also three helpers that the protagonist takes in, but they are also mentioned in one sentence, and there are even very few descriptions. Since it is written in daily articles, it is also necessary to describe what life is like on the farm. Overall, it still looks good.

To be honest, it's okay. Although it's a little bit toxic in some places, the overall plot is pretty smooth. I would like to give some suggestions to the author: 1. The pace of the main plot should be a little faster, and don't over-write the details of the farm elves. For example, just solve the problems between some races in one stroke. 2. Don't describe elves with too much humanistic descriptions. 3. The interaction between characters is more three-dimensional, for example, the relationship between the protagonist and Joey Mei is more descriptive. 4. Simplify the description of some farm elves that have little relationship with the protagonist. After all, it would be a bit cumbersome to write too much. The last point is that the author can optimize the system panel (too many words are written like water) All in all, the novel has quite a bit of potential, and the bottom line should be 7.5 Points upwards at the end of the writing.

I've finished watching it, it's great. Although the plot is a bit immature at the beginning, for example, the invasion of the farm by the wild elves is very abrupt, and there are some inappropriate words, but there is nothing poisonous later on. I hope to write more about the interaction with the elves. Later, I can also rely on Damu and Joey's family to collect the dying elf eggs, and have more elf butlers. After all, the protagonist's farm has problems. It is better to use fewer people, and the elves are more reliable. Just send all the people to the store as much as possible.

Tomato is one of the few elf farming stories that I can read, but the early plot jumps too fast, and many details that should be ignored are skipped. By the way, if there are too many holes dug in front of you, don't forget to fill them. Have you forgotten those three hardworking workers? How are the flowers you bought to attract Xie Mi growing? The sheep in the pasture are directly transferred from the pasture to the breeding house and then directly to the elf sales. Don't forget the essence of the pasture itself. The trees and fruits are self-sufficient. What about other outputs, milk, wool, electricity generation, other edible elf products, spider silk, insect silk, and medicinal materials. The ranch level increases too quickly.

It's very interesting. I have been following it for a long time before preparing to comment. The author's scores have always been very stable. It is very interesting and worth recommending.

The writing is good, although it is a bit toxic, but it is very good for a new author. There is a lot of Pokémon written, not too many battles, and it has the style of a farm novel.

I would like to make a suggestion, add a slogan or something after the sound made by each elf to enclose the translation!

You can see, it belongs to the refreshing cabbage type.

The quality is very high! ! It's just that the author updates it too slowly, so it's suitable to be read after a while.