Xue Baochai's Schemes for Power: Lin Daiyu's One and Only

It's quite good, but it deviates a lot from the original novel. I don't understand what Baoyu really wants. Does he want to revive the Jia family? Or does he want to possess Daiyu? I feel like he's become a villain. But I think the theme is good; if you step outside of *Dream of the Red Chamber* to read this book, it's definitely worth it.

This is a derivative work, a fanfiction of Daiyu and Baochai. The theme is quite novel and interesting, but the flavor of *Dream of the Red Chamber* is rather weak. Some plot points feel abrupt and not very natural or smooth, which may reduce the reading experience.

New writing style, keep it up!