The Heartthrob Is Still Keeping Their Secret Identity Under Wraps Today

Well, the reasons why I gave this book four stars are as follows. Those who want to get into the trap can refer to it. I also hope that the author can read and adopt my opinions. But they are all innocuous questions. The first one is that the plot is relatively dull. I have read more than 10 chapters so far, and the overall feeling is that it is too bland. I really like to read the Ma Jiawen with this theme. In comparison, the plot of this book is not so compact, and there are too many trivial things described. Secondly, I personally think the emphasis on psychological description is a bit biased. I can also understand that the author probably wanted to write a less-than-perfect protagonist. However, I personally think that the perspective of the description is a bit broad, and it should focus on the psychological description of the protagonist himself and the analysis of others. Rather than the other way around. Keep supporting characters appropriately mysterious. This is also a cool point, as it will make readers feel that the protagonist has a sense of grasping the overall situation, and the supporting characters will also surprise readers when they shine. The third one is that the simplicity is not appropriate (I personally feel it is a little bit, but it does not particularly affect reading). This type of article is basically a category of cool writing. The multiple protagonists and the process of losing the horse are a plot that makes readers' adrenaline soar. As for the plot, it should be concise and appropriate. The daily trivial matters should be sketched out, and the main line description of the superpower should be highlighted. In summary, that's it, it's not a big problem. It won't affect reading very much. Babies can read a dozen chapters first to appreciate it. [Love][love]

. . After tying the score, I didn't say anything but just reminisced and said it was delicious😋. Xu Yi invented this gadget😋It's so cute😋 The transition of the plot is very smooth ~ I like it very much, and the character's personality is also super distinct. How come Xu Yi keeps releasing his charm. . . I like it very much. This is a petty thing, the male mother is here, what are you talking about! Xiaoyi, who is roommate with the three protagonists, turns out to be the dormitory chief. What did you say! This little guy not only had a high IQ but also created some superpower props, and also maxed out his force points? System: How to play 666 Yougui [the talent comes from the monster]. What did you say! It doesn't matter if you use the sickle to cut wheat. Your sickle can also kill monsters just like chopping vegetables, and it also has its own cleaning function. . So high-end. What did you say! You are also a computer whiz. . Like it more This Xie Yu and Jiang Xu opened their eyes and opened their eyes and opened Gui Gui's identity guessing process, and the results were correct. They also talked about the intuition system (bus). There is also Shi Jianxing. Under the messy colored hair is the heart of a golden retriever puppy. It's from Total Sunshine Puppy. It's so delicious. I'm the first person to fall in love with Xu Yi. How come you, a handsome dog, fell in love with an ordinary-looking passerby? (The protagonist has changed his appearance.) The plot is not cliché, the rhythm is tight, and the God of transitions comes👍 Xu Yi, the last person in the world who doesn't like eating strawberry cakes Xie Yu, the last person in the world who dislikes busy work Jiang Xu, the last person in the world who doesn't like to test When I see the stars, I am the most honest and heartless person in the world.

It's very delicious, and the interaction between the protagonists is also very interesting, but 1v1 is 1v1, don't be aIl, okay? The protagonist needs friendship, needs love, love is not the only friendship, it is very, very beautiful, and for comics like this, there are really 1v bul It's very rare. The author's writing really moved my heart. If you want to read All Xiang's article, can you read All Xiang's article? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] In short, the author wrote that my Simba is in trouble. Author, I want to express my love to you [Blow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss]

Tianguo's writing style is really comforting!!! Highly recommended!!! Tianguo's choice of words and sentences reminds me of the comfort I felt when reading Mr. Lao She's works. Lines of simple text contain humor and philosophy. It gives people a sense of plainness mixed with excitement, but without the accumulation of gorgeous words. From time to time, a paragraph of thinking and reasoning will appear, so that your reading will not be too boring or too tiring. This book is both friendly and harsh for a book-hungry person like me. Tianguo's writing style is really suitable for my taste, and the subject matter of this book is also right in my heart. But! Why are there only more than thirty chapters? (T▽T) It's not enough to read! Closer to home, this book is too short to boast about it, so it can only be based on the current situation. The plot is now smooth, and the emotional line between the protagonists has also been slightly revealed. Everything unfolds with Xu Yi as the center. It is probably a 50/50 split between warm daily life and combat (?). Those who are afraid of being frustrated don't have to be afraid anymore. This is one of the most cool protagonists I have ever seen. OK, let me talk about my own understanding of the characters. The three original protagonists all have their own shortcomings and have their own logic in doing things. They even have some minor conflicts sometimes due to family environment (abbreviation: children, have you ever seen people communicate with each other) (bs) It depends on the individual's understanding of what he means. I think he should be kind and neutral. He will not change his initial plan (retire after graduation, yes, it is really cool) because of what he sees and hears. He will not be too ruthless (? Forgive me for not describing it) and sometimes he will have his own little bad taste (hehehe) Personally I want to ask: 1. Tianguo Tianguo, can we write more, maybe two chapters a day?

Please, how can you be so beautiful? [Send my heart][Send my heart] I am still more accepting of a large number of psychological descriptions. This method is equivalent to writing the analysis process of the characters and taking us readers to experience it personally. [Blowing Kiss] The characters are all smart, their IQs are online, the descriptions are very delicate, and the rhythm is also very good. The process analysis is really well written. [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] It feels so good to wear a vest [Note] The only thing is that sometimes I will be given a long section that is connected together, especially the analysis process, which makes me a little dizzy. But for now, I can still accept it. Everything else is pretty good. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Write quickly! ! Produce food quickly! ! Love you author [][][][][][][][][][][][][] Hey, hey, brother Dao, when will they discover all the vests? I'm really looking forward to this 1v1~~

The plot is good, the writing is good, the rhythm is well grasped, the vest is covered well, and it falls off a little when it is time to fall off, without being too hanging on me. I like Xiaoyi's character design very much. The protagonist has his own thoughts, and in terms of dealing with people, you will feel that he is really a gentle and elegant person, with a stable mood, and he also enlightens the protagonist group. As a passerby, he is also helping the protagonist group and promoting the plot in his own way. Xiaoyi has a pair of loving parents, and his life is very human. When you read it, you will feel very friendly and you will like him more and more. Reading between the lines of this book, you sometimes feel like reading prose. This feeling is a plus, and it feels very comfortable to describe a peaceful campus life. In fact, as the protagonist grows up, I also understand something. The author's writing style is really good. Love, friendship, and family relationships are all described, and it is full of various aspects of life. I'm really looking forward to Xiaoyi's true appearance [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Absolutely divine, a bit biased toward group portraits. What surprised me was the description of the characters. The protagonist's heart-throb characteristic is not his appearance but his words and deeds. The supporting characters are also very successful in shaping. They are not like the emotional promoters between the protagonists. Their personalities are very distinct. The writing is quite good. Rather than knowing the emotional development between the characters through the writing, you can better feel the spirit of the characters and the thoughts the author wants to express (to put it simply, at first glance, it is not much different from other books, but the writing is very distinctive)

The author has been updating a chapter every day, so far it is full time. The writing is delicate and calm but also touching. There are just too few people and the ratings are too low. Xu Yi's character is also in line with my xp. He has a strong personality and brings a sense of security.

It's a nice plot with smooth flow and good writing. It's more of a group portrait. I like the characters. You can actually mark the main attack. If you don't read a few times, you won't know who it is. I want to know when the horse will fall off and the true appearance will be restored. It would be great if they met in JJ. This book is really well written.

The subject matter is very novel and quite good-looking. However, I don't really like the part after Jiang Xu, which gave me an uncomfortable feeling. I can't describe where this dislike comes from. I always feel that Xu Yi's CP is Xie Yu [Thinking]