Unrivaled Tang: Beginning With the Taixu Sword Aura

😏Are day and night equal? ​​Are the righteous and the sinner equal? ​​If man is born weak, from which god shall the weak find peace? O soul with three faces! Hear my questions: If the power and wealth of the strong can cover up their sins, who can judge them? If the weak must pay any price to survive, who can vouch for them? If even the purest and kindest souls can err, who can comfort them? (Highly praised Tuner, Fantasy Class, so updates are faster.)

It's alright. There are two issues, though. First, the protagonist's combat power is unclear. The author needs to explain under what circumstances the protagonist possesses combat power comparable to a certain level of titled beast or a thousand-year-old ferocious beast. Second, regarding the Xuanyuan Sword's spirit rings, I don't agree with the nine-element style.

Hello readers, I am Han Yu Chunmeng, the author of this book. Thank you all for your support and recognition; I express my sincere gratitude. I have received your feedback and understand my many mistakes and shortcomings, for which I offer my deepest apologies. I haven't been writing for very long, although I have some prior writing experience, mostly in short stories or short serializations.

The writing style needs improvement. While this is a single-female-lead novel, there are too few scenes featuring the protagonist in important early plot points. I wouldn't recommend comparing this book to real-world moral standards, as such comparisons will reveal many flaws. After all, the original work already has many flaws. In summary: The character descriptions are vivid and the writing is detailed, but the plot needs improvement.

To be honest, among the fanfictions about Honkai Impact 3rd and Douluo Continent, this is the best I've read. Mainly, I personally think that for fanfiction like this, the plot shouldn't be drawn out, but it should be logical and drive the story forward within the framework of merging two worldviews, making the protagonist's current world's background feel relevant.

Comic book worldview or anime worldview

It looks nice, but I always feel like there's something wrong with it. This is a fanfiction combining Honkai Impact 3rd and Douluo Continent II: The Peerless Tang Sect. It features a single female protagonist, Ling Shuang (not Fu Hua). The character's combat power might have been a bit problematic in the early stages, but the author has genuinely worked on fixing it.

So the protagonist is a local from the Collapsed Era who goes to Douluo Continent.

Wait a minute, I just realized something! Where's Huo Yuhao's other cheat code, Yi Lao?

There are some issues, but they're not major (for me). I just hope for more frequent updates and consecutive updates! Da☆ze