Abandoning the Male Lead? I Did It Without a Second Thought!

It's very interesting. There are no flaws so far, but there is one thing. Ayue's death will have a great impact on an ordinary person like the heroine. It's difficult to write this because it's too heartless. If it's written too much, it will look artificial, so balancing is a difficult thing. I hope the teacher can work hard.

The daily emotional lines are written in a long and thin way. Judging from the current more than 80,000 words, the money-making channels and other things seem like playing house, but as a sweet book before going to bed, it is just right. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very vivid. In terms of writing, I gave it a simple and light style, which is very suitable for the narrative content of the article (actually this is very good, I like this very much). It can be seen that the author worked hard and wrote it himself. To sum up, you can buy some sweet articles before going to bed.

Why do I have to arrange for the original protagonist to kill his friend? I want to torture the kind-hearted heroine, who can make Ah Yue lose her memory. The interaction between the two is very good, but the poor heroine was beaten and injured, but she has no strength to come forward to save people.

It's very beautiful. It feels very comfortable to look at. The logic doesn't make any sense. The heroine also has a very good character.

A charming heroine, she is beautiful but she is still an orphan. It feels like there will be a family recognition process in the later stage.

Many novel types are similar, but that doesn't stop me from seeing what I like [Thinking]

It's a very, very good time-travel farming novel. The author's names are very catchy, especially the name of the male protagonist Lou Guanxue. The plot settings are very good, and it is not the kind of novel that has room to upgrade the plot of land and water. The plot mainly relies on the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and the rhythm is well controlled. The author's writing style is also very good, with appropriate white space, making it look very relaxed.

Nice! Why is it so beautiful?

Really beautiful

Very well written, looking forward to the follow-up