Doomsday Countdown: I’ve Set My Sights on My Boyfriend’s Dorm

Waiting for the update. The author is great. Don't leave. Stay alive and develop your career. Don't come and go with female rivals. Try to avoid female rivals. If there is a bad female partner, I hope it will be solved within three chapters. All members have IQ. I hope they can continue to be online. The male protagonists will continue to be clean physically and mentally. Do not have physical contact with other girls. [Send Hearts][Love][Send Hearts][Love][Love][Love][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Love][Love][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Love][Love][Love]

After reading Chapter 50, I tied it. Unlike other general favorability system novels, the heroine did not force herself to cater to or tolerate the male protagonists just because of her favorability. This is a good point. I have read too many similar novels in which the female protagonists compromise on the male characters for the sake of favorability and are annoyed by them. The heroine of this book is not particularly praised. In addition, I hope the author can avoid one thing, that is, in apocalyptic novels, women other than the heroine should not be inferior. This book is currently new and has not yet touched upon this point. So I hope I can advise the author in advance. You know, on the male channel, even if the male protagonist travels to a world where women are superior to men, the male protagonist will have to overthrow the female protagonist while collecting the harem. Therefore, on the female channel side, I hope female channel authors will also stand up, and not always think that women other than the heroine are weak or buffoons. In harem stories with male protagonists, there are many powerful younger men, and the male protagonist also dislikes strong women. Male videos really care about whether the "male" gender takes the upper hand. So when it comes to female channels, especially female channels' post-apocalyptic stories, we really should pay more attention.

I think it's good-looking. The heroine has brains and a system. She has no shortcomings except for a little low emotional intelligence. The man has been making trouble in private so as not to embarrass the heroine. This is good. The heroine hahaha, I didn't notice it at all, but our heroine should be like this. Well, it seems that the heroine's emotional intelligence is good, she just doesn't bother to care about it. Our heroine doesn't even bother to care about this.

I have read more than a dozen chapters. If you like big heroines, you can read it. But judging from these, the pace is very fast, which only refers to the emotional rhythm. There are also some descriptions. I personally prefer a slightly subtle way of writing. Because of a battle, several male protagonists saw the female protagonist's "terrible strength" and so on, the description was very exaggerated. I personally feel that in some stories, when the male protagonist leads the team, he will not deliberately describe the shock and surrender of others to him, but will use some details, such as executing it directly without any hesitation. It will not be exaggerated or deliberate, and it will show excellent leadership. Excessive description will be superfluous. Originally, I can feel the power of the heroine through the arranged words. At this time, a simple description may be just right, and the sense of substitution and experience may be just right. Too much description will be too dramatic and give me a feeling of exaggeration. I originally felt that the heroine was eight points powerful, but this emphasis only reduced it to three points. I felt, "Is the heroine really that powerful? A group of arrogant people were completely subdued by one command?" Don't talk about charming men, this is just a feeling. I personally prefer that a woman's power does not need to be deliberately emphasized. Just be convinced naturally, because just like the heroine of this article, she has many beautiful qualities. This is a fact. There is no need to deliberately emphasize it. To whom should I emphasize it? This is the only flaw I feel, and overall it's okay. Good guy, I scrolled through the comment area, and someone said it was an AI article, six. I heard that Tomato has been pushing a lot of AI articles recently.

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was similar to some junk book, but after reading it later, I was attracted by the storyline. The author's writing style is very good, and the character image created by the author also made me fall in love with the heroine. The heroine is cold and powerful, and she is not a locust flow heroine. Some of the supplies will be reserved for ordinary people. , Decisive in killing, but always has his own bottom line [full] calm and composed when encountering danger, and did not expose his systematic things, but used the explanation of rebirth to explain why he did not predict before the end of the world. It has been a long time since I saw such a smart heroine⁽⁽◝( •௰• )◜⁾⁾There is almost no female competition in the article. The female characters that appear are either strong or slowly getting stronger (*/ω*). There should be five male protagonists so far. They may be dull in the later period. The emotional line is a little bit less, but it is also very interesting. I hope you will work hard and write better and better. As long as the characters and plot do not collapse, this book will definitely become popular.

It looks really good so far [full] [full] After reading the back part, I wanted to slap myself to death. Why are you reading this stupid article? My IQ has been insulted [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

It's not the kind of mindless novel that relies on seducing men. The female protagonist in this book has an IQ, but sometimes the story is a bit cliche. Every time the female protagonist makes suggestions, the male protagonists will express their thoughts. There is a feeling of forcibly establishing a character for the female protagonist. Everyone gives her a chance to stand out. However, this problem does not have much impact. It would be better if we can improve it in the future. We are a team and to be honest, I and my licking dogs are not invincible [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's good to watch. What the male protagonist fears most is that the female protagonist is used as a tool for competition. The initiative of the female protagonist is always in his own hands. He can be coaxed or cooled or slapped when he wants, especially when he takes power later. Well done!

When I read it, why was it only 80,000 words? It was really too few... Why did Tomato recommend it to me, why should I order it? I'm really looking forward to the next plot. The author will do his best to update it. I'm really looking forward to what will happen when the favorability level is increased. Currently, each male protagonist has a distinct personality. It can be seen that the author is purely hand-crafted and describes the environment and other inner feelings to the point. The plot progress is also very natural. I just don't know how to develop it as there are fewer and fewer people in the future. At present, other supporting characters have not seen any special powers [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Overall, the detailed descriptions of the characters are pretty good, but they sometimes contradict each other. What I didn't understand the most was the part where I was looking for Xiao Ning in school. I said I was looking for her, but I only remembered that after I left. I found my brother at other times. From this sentence point on, I have been collecting supplies and killing people. There is no sign of looking for anyone at all. I will still comment objectively in the future.