I Maxed Out the Saintess's Affection in the Third Beta, Then Dominated the Official Launch

How should I put it? The writing technique is not very good and the description of the battle scenes is not good, but this is the author's first book and I can understand it. However, in my opinion, this book should be a romance novel. If you want to read the battle, you can read it. Of course, if you have ideas, you can read it. Some of the content in the book can be improved. There should also be patches for closed beta players. Come on, author.

I saw Chapter 33 [Sending Hearts]. This book gives people a very intuitive feeling that the description is particularly delicate, the text is gorgeous, and the text is full of pictures. It is already to the point where it can be adapted into an anime without modification. The first two chapters of "Apotheosis of the Gods" aroused my interest in reading, and the story felt very interesting (it felt like a book was published after a short paragraph of wonderful ideas in my mind) The characteristics of this book are that it is delicate and beautiful. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is established quickly. The male protagonist reaches the critical point and meets the female protagonist early. The main plot line is still very clear. There are not so many redundant plots. The content is closer to the world of cultivating immortals. The author is also quite rigorous in writing the cultivation plot. However, all book friends, please note [salute]: If you have read several chapters and still do not have a sense of immersion and comfort in reading, you should give up this book as soon as possible. The overly detailed writing style is indeed not suitable for everyone. Come on, author, this book is well written [laughs][like] Finally, this paragraph is purely a personal opinion and thought: When reading this book, I personally think that after watching the plot between Wang Lin and Li Muwan in the anime "The Immortal Rebellion", I have a particularly good sense of immersion and picture. Several plots in the book are similar to the anime. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it [Send Heart][Eat Melon]

[Thinking] The pace of this book is slow. Online games and pure love are a good subject matter, but the most important figures of online games (damage data, skill introduction, etc.) Are omitted. Of course, writing these in a fairy tale is a bit cumbersome and difficult to write. I think we can write more about the growth between players as an interlude, so that it won't feel too abrupt when it appears later. In short, it can be seen that the author wrote it carefully, although the current condition of the book is not very good. Who would take the trouble to code words if not for the sake of living? . . I haven't been crowned, and although I don't have the money to help, I'm still willing to see the advertisement and thank you [face covering]

The emotions are delicate and the writing is good, but the introduction didn't say whether it will come to reality, so I assumed that it won't happen. Although it is very cliché, it would feel a bit weird to fall in love with a virtual character if it doesn't happen, so I deducted one star.

Second, the flow rate of game time in the exclusive game cabin is 3:1 (three days in the game = one day in real life). The flow rate of ordinary game cabins, helmets, and rings is 1:1. How do we calculate this? Time passes differently. Should exclusive and ordinary games be played separately? [Laughing and crying]

I saw Chapter 25 and the description was quite good. I am curious whether the heroine will suddenly appear in reality later? Or does the male protagonist really enter that world?

It felt good after reading it, but I hope the author can pay more attention to the details. There are some contradictions in some places. Why didn't the counter-spiritual cutting pulse that was set for each segment not be triggered the first time? [What] The rules in the ring feel useless. It is recommended to use one name for the same thing. Using multiple names over and over again can easily lead to overreaction. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes [Like]

Sweet article, an alternative online article, not like the traditional fusion of reality, but not bad at all. The intertwining of fate, I am willing to be a guest in this world, not to be a ruthless immortal forever.

I feel like I finished it in less than half an hour

Don't ask why it's five stars, because the upper limit is only five stars