Apocalypse Stories Where the Protagonist Doesn't Go It Alone: Betrayals and Backstabbing Are Fair Game
Apocalypse stories, but don't make everyone stupid just to make the protagonist stand out. Give them some brains. Let the protagonist act alone. Don't save people either. If someone messes with you, go all out and kill them quickly instead of standing around yapping. And don't spend ages explaining every little thing. What kind of incoherent garbage is this? It's like playing house, with an instruction manual.
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The pacing is a bit fast, but it's very exciting. It lacks Senzu Beans and some minor villains, and there are too many parallel worlds, which can be confusing. It would be better if there were fewer drawn-out romance scenes and more satisfying moments of characters showing off their abilities.
Not bad, but it's a bit like being invincible in the world, and then an enemy comes from the sky 😏😏
The first part is a bit boring, like other Dragon Ball fanfics. Chapter 7 is the first thing I've seen, so I'll see how it goes. Dragon Ball isn't a good subject for writing novels; it's hard to write a very engaging story that won't get high scores.
It's not bad so far; I hope the author's writing gets better and better.
Well written, keep it up!
I'll give it four stars for now, and see how it goes. Why are these transmigrators Saiyans who, without needing the Namekian Dragon's wish, eat the same amount as normal people?
Author, keep trying to write three million words!