
The Comeback System: The 300-Pound National Server Ma Chao Is Reborn
逆袭系统三百斤国服马超重生了
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- Completed
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- 406k Words
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- Unknown
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- Updated
- 1mo ago
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- Fanqie
Synopsis
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I am now the most direct, the truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least inked, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the most No turning around, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most energetic, the most enjoyable, The roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top-notch, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the dryest, the least pretentious, the least cliché, the least formal, the least arrogant, and the least superficial. It talks about practical information, only talks about the key points, only gives results, only talks about the truth, only talks about the core, and most only highlights the key points. It tells you: it is good-looking, the three views are very positive, the protagonist is also slightly cute, and the system is also good. My mother is here, and it is very smooth and comfortable to read [full]^⎚˕⎚^
At first, I originally came in because of the label of dual male protagonists. When I saw the back part, I wished Yanyan was alone and beautiful. She was so cute. But if it didn't work out, I would keep a distance from those boys. Be more defensive and prick more. The most special thing is the feeling of ordinary people, which is very easy to resonate with. It doesn't mean that the protagonist should be immersed in the sadness of the past. But after his life starts to get better, I hope to see him enjoy a rich and colorful life. Do those things with your dog. I wish it had more space, and Love could also be shortened. Finally, I would like to say that the author's writing is really good, in my opinion. It is very resonant and can penetrate people's hearts. And very down to earth. It feels a bit close to life. The article about Yao Zu that I wrote before is also very good. It's just too short. Please update it, author! [Please update]
It's a very interesting article. The writing style is light and warm, and the protagonist is very cute. At first, I felt that the protagonist's personality is similar to mine. He lives in confusion day by day, but the protagonist has upward motivation. When the outside world gives a push, the protagonist stumbles forward. He is very hard-working and well-behaved. I feel that I have also developed with the system cloud. It doesn't matter if I have no motivation or hope to live, so I won't have the motivation to change the status quo. Reading this book has made me want to change my mind. The author must continue to create, and don't be a eunuch. When I clicked on the author's homepage, I discovered that I have read every book by the author.
It is a very surprising book. After reading the introduction and the beginning, I thought it was another assembly-line novel that highlights the contrast between the early and late stages and magnifies the shortcomings of the protagonist. But no, the writing is very delicate and will not be too boring because of its delicateness. I'm a little ashamed. In fact, I did worse than the protagonist. I couldn't be as persistent as him. The protagonist is still very gentle. To me, his shortcomings are only the sensitivity and low self-esteem caused by being fat. The system repair dog and the subject brother all made my eyes warm when they saw it. They are really very good repair dogs, a very good system and very good people! In fact, there are some small details that I particularly like. The subject brother fell in love with the protagonist because of his personality and not because of his appearance. Xiu Gou is also a very good repair dog. The author did not deliberately let Xiu Gou get close to the subject brother for the so-called enhancement of feelings. Xiu Gou perfectly did the best thing that a repair dog can do! The protagonist also perfectly does and goes beyond what an ordinary owner should do for the happiness of repairing the dog🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
It's very interesting to read. When you are confused and at a loss, if you read this book, you will regain the motivation to keep going. This world is indeed difficult to deal with, but we can walk slowly step by step. I feel that the author is a very serious person, who lives seriously, writes seriously, and looks for information when he doesn't know where to look (Wangzhe's teachings are very pertinent, and he is not the kind of author who just issues a disclaimer and then brushes it off if he doesn't know it, but maybe the author is just a big brother of Wangzhe [laughing] [laughing]), but it is rare to see such a down-to-earth book. Write slowly, your words are very powerful.
It feels so good to be tied. Men see their menstruation, and women see their nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and become the Qiantang River tide. It is so beautiful. It is God is my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😭😭😭 Personally, I think it's very nice. Yan Yan's image is well written and not procrastinating. It's not like he lost weight and became a handsome guy at the speed of light. It's normal to hesitate, give up and shrink in the weight loss process. With Gun Gun and Qian Qian, and Xun Mo's company, Yan Yan can finally get out of that wet rainy day. Yan Yan's innocence is not silly and sweet, he just hasn't experienced the beatings of society and is a bit autistic. He is indeed getting better. Come on, author! Don't abandon the trap
Very healing article! He didn't suddenly change into a male god, but gradually. The protagonist is not the kind of person with a strong core and clear goals, but an ordinary person with many shortcomings. But I feel particularly gratified to see him change and accept himself physically and mentally! And the character of the protagonist is also very cute. Although he was very sensitive and had low self-esteem at the beginning, he became cheerful later on, like the grass in the corner slowly turned into a sunflower. Everything is developing in a good direction! (๑´∀`๑)♡
Without further ado, this novel is great. I am a rather picky reader, and when I encounter a book that is not good to read, I will always comment on it and get a little angry (but not the book, not the author). The brainless plot, brainless characters, certain details, and certain highlights would make me unable to stand it and give up the book. There are a lot of books in my bookshelf, but 90% of them are barely readable in the front part, but they have flaws, so it is a pity to throw them away if they are tasteless. If there are 100 books in my bookshelf, then there must be only a single-digit number of books that really touch my heart, probably 3-5. Today, I am very happy to have another book. When I was reading the previous chapter, I was always worried whether this book would be a big hit, because I have seen several books on this subject that collapsed at the end, and the ratings of this book were not too high. I was frightened and read the latest chapter, and solemnly announced - no problem, a good book. If the follow-up maintains this level, it will be in the top three on my bookshelf. Let me tell you why: 1. In this subject, the system helps the protagonist to change his appearance. It is easy to write that the protagonist gets something for nothing. A protagonist who is not good enough (not just in appearance, but more in character) has a good skin, and then enjoys being sought after and playing with emotions (I know some people think that It's fun to read this kind of book, but sometimes the portrayal is very low. Both evaluations depend on whether the protagonist described by the author has real charm). Many books fail to describe the personality charm of the protagonist, so the protagonist becomes a slave in the skin, and everyone who loves the protagonist is a puppet. ——But this book is an excellent example. The protagonist is very charming. Falling in love with someone who is a good person is natural. Instead of relying on the aura of a heartthrob protagonist. 2. The author probably has some experience. I recommend people who are a bit nervous to read this book. Some of the principles are really helpful. It doesn't mean that after reading some books about cherishing time, we can immediately get up and work hard. But give us some insights. These insights accumulate little by little, and one day when you think of them again, you may naturally change yourself. In short, after reading this book, I agree with some of the principles in it. It took me a long time to figure it out on my own. No one taught me this, and I grew up very unhappy. The author interspersed and wrote it out. (Actually, I don't know whether a person who has not actually experienced these will agree with them, but it should be helpful. Literature has a delayed effect. It may be many years before people can truly understand what they read before) 3. The author's great handling of the plot gave me some impact. I always thought that Yanyan would have to complete his weight loss before appearing in front of people outside. Later I discovered that I had read too many perfectionistic books, which made me unable to accept the protagonist's flaws being exposed. Even if Yanyan will become more beautiful in the future, I am afraid that his previous photos or videos will have an impact on him in the future. But this is life. No one can prepare until they are perfect before entering and leaving society, and others do not have that much free time to see whether the people passing by are fat or thin. They are all passers-by. Live your own thing well and don't care too much about other people's opinions. I understand this, but I still need more time and experience to fill myself up before I can truly accept it. (Yanyan is really good, the system is also very loving, the puppy is very cute, and the protagonist's attack is also quite good) All in all, great 👍🏻
It's good to read. I read everyone's non-star reviews before and thought that the male NPCs in this book have a very toxic personality, so that's why everyone said this. Now I can tell you responsibly that none of our characters are poisonous. Xiao Lu is a bit venomous, but he is just a small NPC and has very few roles, so there is no need to worry about it. The two male protagonists in this book and everyone they know are very nice people. They are very gentle and heartwarming. The protagonist grows up quickly and is determined. The writing is also very good. I highly recommend reading it.
This is the second system reform article written by the author that I have read. The protagonists in the author's works all have a gentle, kind and tough background. Sometimes you are very lucky to have someone or the system to help you when you are in the most helpless and collapsed stage. The system here is more like a family. There is no so-called punishment. It just scares the protagonist. He will only provide some help. The rest depends on the protagonist's own efforts and perseverance. I think it is very good. Super invincible and good-looking [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]