After transmigrating into The Return of the Condor Heroes, I made an enemy of Li Mochou, and now my death is imminent!
I sneak into Shaolin to secretly learn the Nine Yang Manual, become Guo Jing's disciple and receive Huang Rong's true teachings, then befriend Yang Guo and secretly learn the Toad Skill.
I follow Li Mochou all the way to the Western Regions, acquiring the White Camel techniques and the Life-and-Death Talisman of the Mount Heaven Sect.
The Vajra Sect is running rampant?
One move with the Life-and-Death Command makes the whole sect bow its head and turn its monastery into a temple.
With the Nine Yang Manual and the Mount Heaven Sect's techniques, who could stand against me in The Return of the Condor Heroes?
The world curses the Scarlet Serpent Fairy, but I alone will protect her for life, roaming the Central Plains and the Western Regions and rewriting the fate of The Return of the Condor Heroes!
Li Mochou: Tell me, what is love?
Su Yan: I would betray Buddha, but never you!
Li Mochou: You lecher, prepare to die!
Su Yan: This humble monk is doomed…
PS: This is neither a harem novel nor an invincible-protagonist story. The original plot and martial arts are developed in a reasonable way!
To be fair, this novel is well-written. The plot, with its twist of teasing Li Mochou at the beginning, is quite novel. The character portrayals are also quite vivid. Here's a suggestion for the author: Please don't randomly add female leads later on; just add Li Mochou. Otherwise, it's easy to lose focus and turn into a harem novel.
I've been reading it for a few days now, and it's pretty good. You've only written a few dozen chapters so far. I'll offer some suggestions to the author, which should be of some help to your future writing. First, don't burden the protagonist with too many unique skills, otherwise he'll have to carry around secret manuals everywhere, making the story just a monotonous chronicle.
The book is quite good, and the author is very active, so I don't know why the rating is so low?
Let's take Li Mochou as our concubine. The author is incredibly stubborn; Yang Guo seems like the main character in this book.
The plot is full of twists and turns, making it a very enjoyable novel.
So beautiful! So beautiful! So beautiful!
How can an author make money if they don't update 10,000 words a day? More traffic and more readers mean even more updates! 😳
Okay, it looks good, it's really good. ...
A decent martial arts fanfiction
Excellent. The writing is detailed, the plot is tightly connected, and it has depth; it's worth reading.