Offering Honkai: Star Rail to the Marvelous Marvel

I would like to apologize for the slow update speed. Because I am still studying, I try to update it every day. If there is no update on any day, I will remember it and find time to make up for it later. If there are any problems, I will accept your criticism.

It's not bad. Since you're acting, you should act thoroughly. No matter how you think about your former identity as a boy, you won't be able to use it later. The characters don't have OCs or anything like that, and they fit the image quite well. The author also knows Marvel well. At least the logic of the writing is reasonable, unlike some reliance. There are relatively few people of the same type, so I'd better support them.

It's too slow to update every two days, and this is a new book, it's very short, and it doesn't even break your heart.

The plot is reasonable, the sentences are fluent, the story is interesting, and the characters are not OOC. It's a rare and good book, but it's a pity that it came early and the number of words is too few.

I was originally worried that there would be too many scenes after the body is restored and too few transformation scenes, because we are here to see the characters, not to see Bai Luo. So far, this is good. In addition, when calling the protagonist's name, use whatever name he has changed. He is called Bai Luo when he is in his original form. This way it is clear and distinct. It is distinguished at the beginning, but there seems to be no distinction later.

Nice! Nice! Although there is only a little bit, it still looks good! The author must continue to work hard! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

In fact, the writing is quite interesting. The author should consider letting Ontology organize the entire Opener organization, maybe organize something like a tavern, and then send a location to the rich Marvel heroes to let them know. Then when Marvel's heroes encounter a problem that they can't solve, they go to the main character in the tavern and hire helpers. The main character can play a new role to help the hero complete the task. Afterwards, the hero feels that the role played by the main character is mysterious and curious, and the main character can also teach them science in the tavern. Their background stories, Ompharos and the like, will shock them again, and in this way, you only need to push the main plot while arranging inserted plots for the Iron Vest. For example, Deadpool fights a copy of Loki, takes the gold coins he just stole to the tavern to find help, and then the enemy chooses to take the mission. Wan En showed Deadpool the dictionary in Hanging City. Deadpool felt that his dictionary was not enough for him to wipe his ass.

It's not bad, you can see it but it's a bit poisonous

The early chapters are obviously a little immature, but the author's rhythm gets better and better later on, and the writing is also very interesting. It is worth reading.

A little girl appears out of nowhere