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The writing is very good, the plot is well arranged, the excitement is spot on, and the writing style is also good. A pure-blood wizard novel. It is still in the early stages, and we have reached a small breaking point, which will test the author's skills later. As a bookworm who has been on multiple platforms for more than 10 years, this review After the protagonist's sister appeared on the scene, the solid foundation laid by this book was completely destroyed. This role was completely added temporarily. Her power made the protagonist look like a clown. After a long time, she was still a caged bird.

It's delicious😋, yes, but can the author develop the emotional line of the male and female protagonists more? I always feel that the emotional line is advancing too slowly now. I want to eat sweets. Also, I can stab the male protagonist [laughing evilly] to let the female protagonist know, hahaha [laughing evilly], I can't help but think about it. I want to see the reaction of the male protagonist being stabbed by the female protagonist [Like] [Like] [Like], and there can be more barrage during the movie. As long as it does not affect the progress of the plot, it is not a masterpiece. Can the barrage be less human-machine? It feels like a human-machine. Finally, the author, please give it a big boost! [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love]

It's a good read, with an excellent world view and good writing. I haven't found such a good-looking novel in a long time! ! The shortcoming is that the introduction and cover are not done well, and it doesn't feel attractive at all. If I hadn't come here to dig for gold, I wouldn't have clicked in to see it! ! No, no, that's the right name. This title completely fails to express the excellent setting and other strengths of this book. Instead, it behaves like a low-quality novel

No problem, Shennong has already tried it. The character of the Liangcao-level protagonist reminds me of Victor in "The Evil God", but it is more humane and the male and female protagonists are easy to relate to. The appearance of the male protagonist's sister was quite unexpected at first, but later I thought it was pretty good. After reading it patiently, I felt that it was top-notch. Now as long as the subsequent plot is not too boring, it will be perfect. Victor's book was a bit boring in the later stages. In short, it is very important to remember to do this when changing the sugar distribution! ! ! ! !

Very good, quite novel wizard novel, I look forward to seeing Vivian severely punish the protagonist [angry]

So far, the world view construction and plot are very good. I am still curious whether it is a single female protagonist or a harem story. The switching of perspectives is not abrupt. The perspective ratio of the two is probably 55 or 64. However, it is worth mentioning that the system inside is basically a tool for providing spell equipment, so don't worry, too many barrages will affect the look and feel. Also, at the moment, it's like the invincible flow. I think there is currently no opponent at the same level, and the strength is very high. But I don't know what it will be like in the later stage. In short, I love watching Pure Love, which is a bit invincible. Both of them have improved their IQs.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋

①The interaction between the male and female protagonists and the subsequent plot are attractive to me; but in the original work, Cavendish was connected by the minions into something (forgot), but later it was added that the background was very big, and his sister was very powerful (although she seemed to be a demon or something, so she didn't care about him that much), but it just felt like such a person was directly refined, which is very strange. I'm looking forward to the subsequent fake death plot. ②The worldview is not fully developed yet. It looks like the world of immortality. The big world is set in the middle ages, the middle world is set in the small world, and the small world is set in the small world. I don't know if the combat power will be compromised later. ③I feel like Cavendish's sister is a bit difficult to evaluate. ④The author interacts with the readers. If there are any questions, there is a high probability that they will receive timely feedback after @. It would be nice to send an emoticon from time to time ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧. ⑤The update time is a bit shady (stuck before midnight, have you seen it?) [Face covering] [face covering] [face covering] However, considering that the author is not a full-timer, the results of this book are not very good, which is understandable (why do you feel that I am superior) ⑥ Overall, I personally think it's pretty good. Those who are interested in this subject can take a look. ⑦After reading other comments, I really feel that the cover and the title of the book would be better if they were beautified.

It's better than I thought. It's not a simple exposure article. The two writing methods of occupying a dominant position and increasing friendship give a sense of refreshment. Moreover, this 1V1 mode makes the plot more compact. The camera always only rotates between the two of them. The early impression is very good. Come on.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... Xiao Zhi Han Han The soul returns, drives the long whip and sets up the six bridles... Tongde XTW The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back Return… fish wedding association light The soul is back... Singing high and triumphant... The same robe And the end... Thanks W The soul is back... The soul is back. One update, and the flaws are revealed. A flash of light, a wave of ridicule; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; When the time comes, the Confucian scholars will invigorate the Duo, and the sound of praise will fill the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine of the hundred difficulties, the disadvantage lies in the later stage; just press the key Like rain, it can clog a group of beaks. May your ink flow like a long river, without any regrets in the starry night, so that you can read Those who forget to eat Metaphysics, I believe you, please let the author update it! ! ! [Cry]