High Martial: Why Do My Disciples Always Want to Bully Their Master?

The plot of King Red vs. Ultraman in this book is very exciting, especially the scenes of Snow White vs. Belial are very beautiful and worth watching😍😍😍😍

As proud as I am! Sure enough, the emotions were mobilized in place. Many babies have gone out of their way to give negative reviews after watching it for so long. I also saw some people tell me that they were withdrawing their negative reviews and even promoted the book in panic... It proves that this book is actually good. I came here at a certain point and am still getting used to it. In short, I used to write paid books, but now I write free books, so be loyal!

Code! A classic is still a classic! I love watching it. There is no extraneous content. The plot is stable, but it is too slow and not enough to watch. It is high-level but has a sense of daily life. It has a natural motivation to continue watching.

After looking at the comments section, the most toxic point is probably the part where the male protagonist's two apprentices were snatched away. I think it can be rounded off. The male protagonist was weak at the time, and the previous plot stated that S-level geniuses were not protected and had a high mortality rate, so the female protagonist was taken away, which led to the subsequent main plot. But the description in the comment area gives people the feeling that the two wives who were finally raised were snatched away. The female protagonist was taken away by the military zone and other schools without doing anything. The male protagonist can be snatched back if his growth rate is less than a hundred pictures. I think the transition period in the middle is quite refreshing (the two female protagonists just sent the male protagonist away and then arrived at the new school, and then accepted the new female protagonist, and began to exercise their own strength. The growth rate is very fast and there is no feeling of embarrassment) At present, it seems that there is only one poisonous point. I have high poison resistance. People with low poison resistance may leave immediately after seeing the comments. It will also affect the score. The author can revise it and add some daily life of the two heroines going to the military zone and other schools. It means that the heroine was taken away because the country can better protect them and put in some patches. But there is another point I feel that as a novel with multiple female protagonists, there is too little description of the female protagonist's appearance and clothing. I can't imagine the appearance of the female protagonist in my mind, which leads to a bias in the sense of substitution. The description of the heroine's personality is still relatively clear. After that, the heroine should be as few and precise as possible. The male protagonist has grown to the fifth level in less than a hundred photos. According to this progress, he will probably reach the ninth level by chapter 250. I wonder if he will enter a new stage after the ninth level like Swallowing the Starry Sky (in this way, some parts of this novel are a bit like Swallowing the Starry Sky) The author seems to have come from a starting point, and his writing skills are still guaranteed. He can withstand the poisonous points, and it will be very comfortable to read without thinking.

It's okay. Although the two apprentices were snatched away in the early stage, they came back later, and they didn't count the later stage (they came back in 3 months). "The same kind of plot is considered good. Other beginnings were taken away, and the middle stage or late stage is about to end, and then they come back to show off their faces. It's really poisonous." Although the return We are here but the main character is gone [face-palming] I hope we don't include too many (or some supporting roles) [palming-face] In this kind of plot, if there are too many women, we have to use various reasons to get out of the protagonist's side to let other female protagonists take the plot position next to the protagonist. If it is not written well, it will easily lead to poisonous points [face-palming]

Let me go, the author, I came here to read a cool article, but you only let your apprentice be snatched away after only ten or twenty chapters (dagger, knife, knife). Full of anger, the protagonist also vowed to defy heaven and surpass the inspector. Oh My God! ! ! It feels like I just read a Hongguo novel. The main character is lost in the mortal world and the heroine is found only in the fairy world. The plot is very cliched and annoying.

I really like this novel. I really want to read the chapter where the male protagonist and his apprentice reunite after a long separation. I hope the author can keep reading more. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

There is a funny thing. The protagonist called and said, I am back. Come back again and again I brought some junior sisters to play with him. And by the way, let that person be fought by those monsters Li low was beaten back, and he made a place to play on his own. The author came back with just one sentence: Those, bah, abandoned the land, but I also established a country, and that place is my territory. The main character eats really well. Also, those foreign lands that are not Chinese have been returned. They are all abandoned apprentices, but they go out and have fun.

So far it seems pretty good. As the plot unfolds, there are not many exciting points. Generally speaking, I feel more frustrated than happy. If it were more than ten years ago, like the era of Dou Po, it might be a good novel. But nowadays, when people read novels, they often read them for fun.

Why is Shuangwen not happy at all_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__