Quick Transmigration: A White Moonlight’s Work Diary

The story in the first world is very classic. The ex-girlfriend returns to China and renews her relationship. The second world is similar to the escape world and she actually falls in love with her enemy. The plot is very interesting, but I am a heroine, and the heroine's life is too bad. In the first world, her mother died early and her father didn't care about her. He only thought of her when he was about to die. I'm here to confess. The second world is also quite miserable. I'm halfway through watching it and commenting. The male protagonist in the second world has no humanity and his emotions towards the female protagonist are a bit distorted. However, the plot is really novel. I felt strange after reading it again. There may be some shortcomings in the setting, but the plot and character setting are very unique and I feel that it will be popular. Come on, author. Although the heroine is a bit miserable, the characters and plot make up for it. It's super good-looking. I haven't seen such a new Kuai Chuan article in a long time. It's delicious.

The first world is still a bit confusing, and the ending is a bit rushed. However, the author's writing style is good and his emotions are very delicate, making it readable. The second world is so beautiful. I haven't seen such an interesting horror copy for a long time. The sense of immersion is so strong that the pig-headed man made me a little scared. The scene where the male and female protagonists are fighting each other (but not falling in love) is quite interesting. The male protagonist refuses to save him in the first scene, and the female protagonist in the latter part also deliberately refuses to save the male protagonist. The female protagonist is able to bend and stretch, never letting go of the male protagonist when she should, and kicking him away immediately when she doesn't need it. The female protagonist is really great and brave. She saves herself almost every time in critical situations. She doesn't rely on the male protagonist or trust him. I feel very happy to watch her. She allows herself to break down emotionally and be weak, but she can't be defeated by anyone. The growth-type female protagonist is really charming [she almost cried]. That's all for now, I'll add more comments when it's finished. I hope the author will finish it soon, I really want to read the follow-up [cry][cry][cry][cry]

How can I put it, although there are some flaws in all aspects (a lot of places are a bit confusing, a bit too rushed for the plot?), But the emotional resonance can be improved. I am a highly sensitive and empathic person. The face of the heroine's father in the first world and the heroine's situation made me burst into tears. The sour secret love of the heroine in the second world also made me feel tight. Sure enough, sad colors can make people remember them hard.

The first world is really amazing. Compared to the love line, the heroine's family line attracts me more. In the early stage, the heroine has been searching for a father's love, but her father did not give it to her. Because of her career and the death of her ex-wife, she ignored the heroine's request for father's love. The heroine was completely disappointed and stayed abroad for year after year. She didn't start to make up for it until she got old. The heroine must have been moved in the end. Many Chinese-style families are like this. I hate you, but I love you more. I hate you for not caring about me. I hate you even more for not loving me. The second world is also more attracted by the emotional drama between the heroine and the original hero. The brother who has been with the heroine since she was born, the original hero does not blame the heroine in the end. He blames himself. He blames himself for not taking good care of the heroine and for indulging the heroine too much. The sentence in the copy of "The Sea of Bitterness" is that the sea of suffering is boundless, and you can only look back. The moment you look back, you see no one else but yourself. This part really surprised me. The author did a good job in writing the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, but the female protagonist's subplot is even more amazing. Whether it's family affection or secret love, it's all very good. Keep up the good work!

As of now, this is not a cool article, nor is it a purely sweet article! ! ! The author's writing skills are very good, the characters are well created, the rhythm is good, and the plot is OK. But this one is very immersive... So immersive that you can't feel whether it is the heroine who comes to do the task or the entire experience line of the original owner... The changes in the first world can't even tell whether the heroine's arrival has a good ending or what should have been originally. The second world makes people love and hate the heroine, the original owner is pitiful and hateful, and the heroine continues the entire character immersively. The emotional portrayal of the entire story so far is very profound, and the heroine's emotions are not even under control. The whole book has a feeling of grievance, depression and dullness. Most of the characters in the book have a background of pain. I wanted to cry when I saw it, and I was very aggrieved. Not to mention the heroine, a little sweetness can't cover the discomfort caused by the whole story. Moreover, the heroine is not strong, she is always weak and fierce, which is very helpless. The author's writing is very good. Those who like to read sweet and refreshing articles can consider it. (The above are all my humble opinions)

The first world is well written, but the second world is not finished. I am afraid of seeing him (it is normal for strangers to refuse to save themselves to save themselves, but it must not be CP [fear]), I hope it will be

The memes are all very interesting to my liking, and the characters are also very well developed. I just hope that the baby heroine in the second world will continue to be uniquely beautiful, and not suddenly fall in love with the enemy who will really kill me [blowing kiss]

I can't figure out why so many people give you bad reviews and say you abuse women. I feel so sad. Reading books is undoubtedly a happy time. I want to say that female videos can also have youth pain literature. I believe they did not understand your article, nor did they understand the cat (Miao Miao) you wrote. She has always been the most sober and the one who loves herself the most. It is the first time I like a female protagonist so much. The female protagonist is so charismatic and real, and the male protagonist is charming. , The heroine can also be smart, take revenge when hurt, have her own emotions, have a crush on a boy, she will also work hard to accept her life without father's love, and become a female boss, a family heir, and an alpha with an unruly but affectionate personality. She will feel sorry for herself and endure the pain but will never give in to life. I really like this kind of heroine! On the contrary, I think you are the one who truly loves the heroine! How could such a charming person say that about you [crying]

The first world of youth pain literature, I guess the author has read this type of article a lot [Thinking], the writing is very good, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very delicate, it is my favorite type [Shy]

The first world is very interesting. I have the same attitude towards family relationships as the heroine. If I don't understand human nature, I will have inexplicable expectations. I hope that my family will turn around and see my injuries. However, once I understand the moral bottom line, I will slowly let it go. I will occasionally complain and will not invest too much in true feelings. Therefore, the heroine's father has no sense of existence in the heroine's heart later on, which makes me like it very much, and I don't think about it repeatedly to hurt myself. Compared with the second world, I like Meng's character very much. It can be said that the relationship with the heroine develops naturally. In World 2, I really don't hope or understand that Yan will be together in the end, maybe because I only saw the part where the heroine was killed by Yan and refused to save her. In fact, I really can't figure out what the heroine did to directly hurt and stimulate Yan to do this. Well, actually I am a serious female protagonist, and I don't want the female protagonist who relies on her own efforts to survive in another world to be with Yan who threatens her life. So let's wait until the second world is finished before coming back.