Reborn Before the College Entrance Exam: AI in My Left Hand, the Campus Belle in My Right

After reading the plot, the overall feeling is very real, full of details and a sense of immersion. The plot is not brainless, it has analysis, plans and principles. The family line and the plot of the parents are very well written. My brother's writing is just passable and I can read it, but I don't have any special memories. The sequence of emotional lines is gradual, which is not bad, especially the passionate scenes, 666, the author is really good at it, and the key is the accompanying pictures, which is a plus. The career line is very hard-core and real. The shortcoming is that it is too hard-core. However, those hard-core contents are independent chapters and can be read selectively. There are some counter-intuitive but very true contents, and it can be seen that the author is very careful.

So far, the setting is not bad, the details are in place, the character analysis and description are in place, and the professionalism is also good. The only small flaw (a small flaw in my opinion, but it may be a highlight in others) is that in the description of the emotional scenes between the protagonist and the heroine, they basically use the same template. It was good at the beginning, but it was a bit boring later. I hope that the author can change the description of the emotional drama a little more in the future, and can add the description of the heroine's studies and career, which may be more perfect. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The above are some of my personal opinions [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's good, but it's written too realistically, especially the coin mining is written in such detail that it makes me feel like I'm reading popular science. There are no ups and downs in daily life. It looks like writing a diary. It is systematic and it is OK to write the protagonist in a humane way. After being reborn, it is too indifferent. No, buddy, you are really here to write a novel. Why is it all about popular science [face covering], and a female star has appeared. The protagonist has also evolved, and the character has become a robot, right? The plot can be said to have no ups and downs. How is this different from a diary?

The front is very good, the combination of AI and system is quite good, the writing is not bad, I hope the author will work hard and work hard! If you continue writing as it is now, the rating should go up (provided the author writes more, it's too short!) I hope the author will update it as soon as possible! [Bookshelf plus one][Please update]

Although the introduction says it is about daily life in the city, it feels a bit too "everyday" for my roommates in the dormitory to repeat a few sentences for most of the chapter. Overall, it is quite good-looking, and it would be better if it was less verbose. Author, don't forget to add updates [laughter]

It's super good-looking, and there's no embarrassing plot that's pretentious. Don't go to sleep, please get up and update. I stayed up until three in the morning reading novels. Look at you, you're still sleeping at three in the morning.

Get up and code quickly!

It's well written and worth reading. Cheers to the author!

Very good, well written, the story progresses layer by layer, please update more, come on!

Love is so sweetly written, Shen Wantang likes it so much! ! !