[Pure fluff] [Girl pursues boy] [Urban fantasy] [Lighthearted comedy]
Good news: I transmigrated.
Bad news: I failed the mission.
Good news: Even if I failed, I could still return to the real world.
Chen Mo, who had transmigrated to a cultivation world, suffered a crushing defeat in the face of his final heavenly tribulation.
When he opened his eyes again, he found himself back in his original world.
It was a bit of a shame, but he quickly readjusted to his old life.
However, he soon realized that his life was starting to change.
“Wait, why does the company's new female CEO look exactly like my sworn enemy from that other world?”
“What do you mean the stray cat I picked up on the street is actually my boss?”
“What do you mean she can smash a wall in my house with one palm?”
“Hey, hey, hey! Why are you in my bed?”
“You... Help!”
A hopelessly macho straight guy and a lovesick romantic.
A beast-eared girl meets a cat-and-dog enthusiast.
How will Chen Mo deal with a Saintess who's crossed over from another world?
Brothers, trust me, if you prefer things to be straightforward, don't watch this. It's all just going in circles and dragging things out; it'll drive you crazy with frustration.
Don't be discouraged, author. Although there aren't many readers yet, and the only review you've received doesn't seem very good, I still really enjoy your writing. It's just that there aren't enough reviews yet. Please update more!
The writing is good, and the plot is novel, but I think the structure and pacing are not good. Structurally, the author intentionally glossed over the cultivation world in just nine chapters, but if that was going to happen, why not just use flashbacks? Nine chapters is fatally tedious for impatient readers attracted by the title. Then there's the pacing.
@I Want to Drink Yogurt, is this book a single-female-lead or dual-female-lead story? The synopsis suggests a single female lead, but given how detailed your description, it's a bit of a shame if it is. I feel like things have gotten worse and worse since Ning Shuyao came out; she just ran away.
A new female supporting character appears in chapters 50 to 66, a girl with a tragic past who develops feelings for the protagonist. Her personality isn't great, and her actions and motivations are often supported by her past trauma. I haven't read further, so I don't know how the author will handle the strange, seemingly contradictory endings of the female lead and supporting character.
Shennong is here. Overall, the flaws don't outweigh the merits. Some plot points are a bit clichéd, but the language isn't cheesy and the emotions are quite genuine. The story is quite interesting. I've read about 700-800 pages so far, and it's not bad. The first half alone would be considered above average. It's a good read to kill time when you're bored. I hope the author continues to maintain this level of quality.
To be fair, the premise is quite interesting, the plot is good, and it's engaging enough to keep you watching. There's nothing particularly bad about it, and the male lead's personality is also quite good.
Why have you stopped updating?
Okay, keep it up, xd! I love reading this type of book; so far, I haven't seen a bad one in this genre. I believe you can do it too! 🥰
Well, I still prefer reading stories with a touch of the extraordinary.