You’re a Saintess! Why Are You Studying Romance Instead of Cultivation?

Brothers, believe me, if you like to be straightforward, you must not watch it. It keeps pulling people in circles and can make people anxious to death.

Don't be discouraged, author. Although there aren't many people at the moment, and the only review I have is not very good, at least I like what you wrote. It's just too little. Please write more.

The writing is good and the plot is novel, but I don't think the structure and rhythm are good. Structurally, the author deliberately skipped over the world of cultivating immortals quickly, using only nine chapters, but since they are all skipped, why not just use interludes? Nine chapters are a fatal drag for impatient readers attracted by the title. Then let's talk about the rhythm. After the protagonist returns to the real world, ten to twenty chapters are spent sketching the supporting characters and the heroine. Let me give you the most direct example. The protagonist's roommate can be described as a bitch, a bit worshipper of money but good to his brothers. The author used a separate chapter to describe him. I can quickly conclude that it is not because the author's description is so good, but because the character setting of "the protagonist's brother" is so classic. What the author outlines in one chapter can actually be roughly completed in about one-third of the chapter. The low information density results in a large number of chapters, which is why the book is "wandering around". Finally, it is not difficult to detect that the author is in the trial and error stage of transformation. We should all express our opinions reasonably. I hope this book will get better and better.

@ Drink Yogurt Is this book a single heroine or a dual heroine? According to the introduction, it is single, but Ning Shuyao has written it in such detail. It would be a pity if it is single. I feel like Ning Shuyao has become worse and worse since she came out, and she just ran away.

A new female supporting character appears in Chapters 50 to 66, a girl who has a tragic experience but is in love with the protagonist. The character is not very good, and his actions and motivations are supported by certain shadows from the past. I haven't watched the back part yet, so I don't know how the author will deal with the ending of the strange female rivalry between the heroine and the heroine, each with their own reasons. However, the conflict rhythm of this book is clear and clear, and the characters and IQs are suitable for the characters' status and status. It is a book that can be read casually at a time.

Shennong is Coming, overall, its shortcomings are not hidden. Some of the plots are a bit cliche, but the language is not greasy, and the emotions are more sincere. The plot is quite interesting. I have read seven or eight hundred pages so far, which is pretty good. The first half can be rated as above average. It is good to read when you are bored to kill time. I hope the author will continue to keep up.

One thing to say, the setting is quite interesting, the plot is good, and it makes people want to watch it. There's nothing poisonous about it, and the hero's character is pretty good too.

Why not update it?

Good job xd Come on, I love reading this type of books. None of the books of this type I have seen so far are poorly written. I believe you can do the same [Adore]

How can I put it, I still like to read a little extraordinary literature