The Heiress Arrives at the Immortal Sect

It's very interesting and exciting, but it doesn't have any traffic or ratings. I was attracted by the tweet, please give him traffic! ! ! ! Very interesting writing!

I feel that the writing style is a bit bland and childish, but the general concept of the novel is very new and a new direction. I hope the author can reduce the tone of voice and work hard to improve himself. You can read more articles by other big guys, learn some expression skills, and make your writing humorous and interesting! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's quite interesting, but I probably won't read it later because I saw something was wrong when Xie Shiyan appeared. I looked at the introduction and it turned out there was a male protagonist (I hated myself for not reading the introduction)

I really like the atmosphere of this book. It seems very healing and the body feels warm. But it feels a little boring after watching it for a long time

It's very interesting. I actually like having a male protagonist because I like having emotional lines. I personally like it. I'm curious about when the male protagonist will come back from the demon world. Will there be emotional lines between Qing Xi and Yu Han? It can be seen that the author loves his characters very much. Everyone loves the eldest lady. It's great because finally he is not the kind of person who abuses and tolerates the heroine.

So far, I think I like Shuangwen, but I still hope that the heroine has a big background, and I don't want the heroine's baby to suffer a little bit of injustice.

It's pretty good. I didn't read the introduction and there was a male protagonist. My problem is that the emotional line is very stiff and sudden. The male protagonist's behavior may also be a bit disgusting (personal opinion, I may not be able to express it well, sorry). The writing is jerky. The young lady is very handsome and a very nice person. The maids and guards are very nice and loyal. You can read more famous books and refer to the methods of many adults to deal with details. The interweaving of the emotional lines can also be improved. I believe it will get better and better!

In fact, the author's idea is quite good, but can the author write less "ah" when writing the book? ! ! It took my eyes a long time to read this short paragraph. There are four sentences in it, and three of them are followed by "ah". But overall it's pretty good.

Very nice! But there is CP? Is it Xie Shiyan?

I have just unfolded a little bit about the world view. It is probably a relatively long article. Rate it first to support it! I hope that I can get more readers and traffic for the author, and my writing will become better and better. The setting is very interesting. Come on✊