Slay the Gods: I Hold the Script Outside the World

The fighting scenes, or battle scenes, are very well written, and I feel that it will be very interesting to make into an animation! The characters are so cute, hehe, even I want to tease Zhou Haha In terms of rhythm, I feel that the campus part could be removed or mentioned in one go. Putting it at the beginning would be a bit discouraging. Why not go straight up and fight Tutu? It might be more enjoyable?

In fact, we can speed up the pace a bit

Great, you are our ultimate protective heroine! It doesn't matter who you are as an external god or a powerful person, anyone who dares to touch her will be dismissed directly. In order to find advantageous weapons and opportunities for his men, he goes all the way to search for good things. This kind of blatant preference and double standards is so cool. The plot rhythm is very tight, there is no frustrating plot, and it is very interesting to watch!

I like this kind of love line that runs in both directions without any bloody misunderstandings. The heroine uses her strong strength to give the hero the greatest confidence. The hero also has unreserved trust in the heroine. It is so sweet but not greasy and super good-looking!

My good friends came to support me, and they voted unanimously to beat this stinky babe away. If he didn't fight me on the fifth day every day, he would stay in the dormitory and write something, and he would laugh weirdly all the time. It was so good to watch that all tickets were sold out

After reading it, I saw that the author said it was a high school manuscript. Now to show it out, few people can complete it with such perseverance. As a fan, I think the most important thing is that the original characters are not OOC. Of course, the relationship with the original characters cannot be groundless. But the author still has some processing and beautification in this part. In addition, as a novel, at least it is not tiring to read and the plot is smooth, which is quite good. Finally, I hope that the author can realize his dream, and never use a few internet memes. It will be embarrassing to look back in a few years! Hahaha [love] [love] [love] [love]

Zhou Ping and Si Xiaonan were really at odds with each other, and the heroine made up for the shortcomings of the original work with the script. There is a brand new story line, the emotional line is very sweet, the social fear and innocent Zhou Ping is so teased that the tips of his ears turn red, it is super cute, does anyone understand [Adoration]! ! !

It's so cool to tie it in one go! The author's writing style is good, the plot advancement is not sloppy at all, and there is no water-filled plot with a small number of words. What struck me the most was that all the difficulties in my heart were completely smoothed out. The whole process was high-energy and non-abusive, and everything that should be given to the point of enjoyment was in place. It looked good!

The author's idea is very good. I am following it and I support it.

Dimensional travel to find artifacts, the whole process is refreshing and enjoyable, reading it is a stress reliever, I support it.