A Commoner Rogue Cultivator: Starting at Baishan Market

7 Points, a reasonable mortal novel. The protagonist has no golden fingers and relies on various opportunities to develop. The acting style is steady and there is no pretentiousness or slap in the face, but the writing style is relatively bland and the overall appeal is not very strong. There are obvious traces of AI in this book, and there are some unreasonable phenomena in some details, but there are no inconsistencies in the general direction, and the prices are currently generally reasonable. Generally speaking, if it is a paid novel, it is probably not worth subscribing to, but as a free novel, it is reasonable and can be read.

If you like traditional fairy tales, you can read it. Overall, it is quite good. There are some minor issues, but the author is very obedient and active. There are many interactions like Batulu and the like [laughing], but the protagonist in the first 20 and more than 70 chapters seems to be online as if the original author himself is online, and he has obviously come through fast time. But it turns out that there are such deep feelings for the family that I haven't contacted for more than ten years and the master that the protagonist has never had contact with. It can be written that the protagonist time travels earlier, such as a few years after recognizing the master. But overall, this book is still very good. I hope the author will not stop updating, and challenge it to update three times a day [laughter] The characters are a bit dull, and a little intrigue could be added. In addition, I feel that the book's techniques are not very valuable. Other than that, it's okay. Good luck to the author.

The writing is good and the plot flows smoothly, but there are occasional omissions. If it is corrected, given time, it will definitely become a fire. You can refer more to Teacher Wangyu's writing style, A Mortal's Journey to Immortality. His new book, Inside the Tomato. I just love watching Teacher Wangyu. I want to find a novel about cultivating immortals to replace my writing style, because its updates are too slow. The author can learn from the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. After all, he is the originator of the Mortal stream. There must also be logical rigor in arranging opportunities for the protagonist, otherwise these opportunities will appear too cheap. The rigor of the article is undermined. Anyway, cheers to the author! This book still has a lot of room for improvement.

This is a rare prose novel, and there are no cheats. The most important thing is that the protagonist does not make elixirs. This is so rare! Looking for a novel about immortality on Tomato where the protagonist doesn't make elixirs is like looking for a needle in a haystack!

Traditional immortality novels have a slow pace and relatively smooth plot, but the shortcomings are also obvious. There are obvious flaws in the character design and behavioral logic, and the ambush plot is relatively blunt. Some of them are tasteless, but the author keeps writing and writing, and these shortcomings seem to be minor. I look forward to subsequent works.

It's okay, not too bad, but there are two plots that are repeated, and I feel that I haven't checked it out properly. It has a slight AI flavor, which may have been polished by AI. Some of the descriptions are artificially deep and mysterious, which is unique to AI, and then there is a section in the early stage where the protagonist returns home. I don't know if the author forgot the setting of the protagonist as a time traveler or there is a plot loophole in running AI. The protagonist has deep feelings for his family without any plot foreshadowing. The advantages are that the protagonist is relatively stable, there are no ambiguous plots, and the plot rhythm is well controlled. In short, it is a good way to pass the time during the book shortage.

The writing is good, not a novice. The protagonist has an IQ and is still a casual cultivator. It's good. Come on. I just like unsystematic essays, come on

It's good-looking, detailed yet not verbose, plain yet true, straightforward yet not procrastinating. The narration makes people feel comfortable reading, and the various settings are also very reasonable. For example, knowledge of the sea can be cultivated even in society...

Zhuran found that after reading this book, I haven't posted a review. It's quite good. In terms of plot, except for the part where the protagonist goes home, I haven't found any big problems in any part. Then there are some small mistakes, but the author will correct them in time, and the author is very active. I don't know about others. Anyway, he has replied to my comments quite a lot.

It's okay. I think the score can be higher. This one is a bit low. 7.5-8.2 Should be okay. It's not like there is no 7. The writing is much better than most. At least it's not that poisonous.