The Bullet Comments Call Me a Succubus, but I'm Actually Built Like Tomie

It's alright. I mainly like the genre, but it's too verbose. Even the smallest gesture is analyzed in lengthy explanations, with several lines describing each action. It's tiring to read, and the plot feels slow. I get confused and don't understand some parts. At first, it was quite novel; every tiny action of a character, regardless of who it is, is analyzed in great detail.

There are too many descriptive words, it feels like they're just padding the word count, and there's a lot of unnecessary dialogue. However, I like the character of Narcissus, could you please increase their interaction? Although I haven't finished the first chapter, Ye Yu is getting a bit annoying, and the interaction with the alternate characters doesn't feel very frequent.

I quite like the setting and plot. However, there's just too much detail, giving it a bit of a "D-style" feel. I hope you can reduce the details a bit; interpreting so much from just one action is a bit tiring to read.

This novel, a story of multiple identities within an infinite flow universe, boasts a fresh and imaginative premise, with captivating plot twists. The protagonist, Zhang Chumo, unexpectedly acquires the Tomie physique, a special talent that should attract everyone's admiration. However, due to his location in a supernatural dungeon, it becomes a deadly shackle.

While some details are indeed overly detailed and a bit verbose, this doesn't negate the novel's overall readability. Honestly, author, I really love your writing style. Even the occasional lengthiness is enjoyable. I don't understand why your book hasn't been rated yet? But in my opinion, this book already deserves a rating comparable to some novels with scores in the 9s.

It's really good. I think the best part is that although the main character is incredibly charming, like Tomie, there's not much description of her beautiful lips, alluring eyes, or delicate face. It makes the reading experience very smooth.

It's great! You can tell the author reduced the amount of detail later on, and it gets better and better. The love triangle scenes are really enjoyable, hehe. This theme is fantastic, I love it. I actually gave up on it for a while, but then I really loved the genre and picked it up again. Maybe some people are like me, finding it hard to get into at first, but it gets so much better as you read on. You really have to persevere, the later parts are so much better, it's really good! 💕

This premise is amazing! And the writing is excellent, very immersive. It's super, super good. However, I have a feeling there might be a major plot hole later on. Like, the romance might falter, but that other thing won't—what will happen to the protagonist then? The protagonist will probably explode.

It's great. I really like the combination of pseudonyms and the infinite flow genre, plus the Tomie physique. I absolutely love it. However, I hope you can change the cover. I noticed this book a long time ago. The cover made me hesitate for a long time, wondering whether to read it or not. Several times I skipped the book because of the cover.

It looks good 🥰 but the pace is a bit slow.