The Bullet Comments Call Me a Succubus, but I'm Actually Built Like Tomie

It's okay, mainly because I like this subject very much, but it's too wordy, and there's a long story that can be interpreted even with small actions. One action can be interpreted in several lines, but every tiny action, no matter whose action it is, will be interpreted into several lines. It's okay, but it's too wordy. I often interpret it like this, and I feel tired when I read it. It feels like the plot progresses very slowly, and I'm very confused. In some places, I even read it. I don't understand. It was quite novel at first. For a character, no matter who it is, as long as there is a small movement, it will be interpreted in several lines. The description is very detailed. I am so tired. Now I skip to read these long descriptions, and some places are very stiff, but it is still very interesting. [Shy] I really like this subject, and the introduction is also very attractive to me. I want to m the protagonist fiercely, I love it, and my children love to eat.

I really like this setting and plot. . But there are too many detailed descriptions, and it always smells like Teacher D. I hope the details can be reduced a bit. A lot can be explained in one movement, which is a bit tiring to watch.

There are too many descriptive words, and there is also a lot of nonsense just to make up the word count, but this Narcissus suits my taste, can it make them interact more? Although I didn't finish the first copy, Ye Yu was a bit annoying to me, and I didn't feel much interaction with the vest. I hope the author can take the time to change it. Too many descriptors will make my eyes tired. It can be said that after reading the first few chapters, I only summarized it in five words: too many descriptors! I hope the summary can be condensed and there is no need for so many descriptors. I hope the author can improve it. I am lucky to find a subject like yours. I am very selective. There are very few that match my taste. It is difficult to find. Please don't stop updating. I beg you (⸝⸝⸝>`ˊ<⸝⸝⸝) This is handwritten by me because I am not familiar with using 26 keys, so you can see that you can take my suggestions when I am struggling to write. Thank you, I will follow your book until the end o(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴

This unlimited flow of horse-drawings is novel in its imagination, and its reverse design is particularly eye-catching. The protagonist Zhang Chumo accidentally acquired the Rich River Physique, which was supposed to be a special talent that attracted everyone's admiration. However, due to being in a supernatural copy, it became a life-threatening shackle. Others only saw that he was favored by the strong everywhere. The barrage uniformly ridiculed him as a seductive succubus. No one knew that he had been troubled by the paranoid obsession brought about by his physique. The most interesting setting is the foreshadowing of multiple vests. The various bosses who are pursued by the entire network and vying to protect him are all the splintered clones of the protagonist himself. While others are trying their best to survive, he can only rely on constantly creating new identities to protect himself and bear all risks alone. On the outside, everyone is watching, but on the inside, he is alone. There is a strong contrast between the God's perspective of the reader's barrage and the protagonist's hiding of the truth alone. On one side is the lively drama of group favor among netizens, and on the other side is the fatigue and helplessness of the protagonist hiding under the halo. The new author perfectly combines supernatural horror, comedy and exquisite loneliness, and the plot of misunderstandings and misunderstandings becomes more and more interesting as you read. All I can say is that it's so beautiful! ! ! I've read so many novels! This is one of the few novels that I have followed to the end! ! ! Strongly recommend everyone to come and see it! ! It's really pretty! ! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people! ! !

Although some of the details are indeed too detailed and a bit wordy, there is no way to deny the readability of this novel. To be honest, author, I really like your writing style. Even if it is occasionally lengthy, I enjoy it more. I don't understand why your book hasn't been rated yet? But the rating of this book in my mind is already tied with the 9 points of some novels. Really, I have to create a separate bookshelf category for you. The bookshelf category I usually open is a few books written by authors I like. Generally, only when those authors have written more than three books, and all of them are in line with my appetite, I will create a separate book list for them, but you are different. After reading five chapters, I think you are qualified. I don't have any gorgeous words to praise you, but I really want to use the only actions I can do to express my affirmation of your novel writing style. Finally, this review is a bit AI, so, the author, you must not stop updating because there are few people, otherwise I will cry in a whirlwind [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful. I think the best thing is that although the protagonist is said to be the most charming, and still like Tomie, he doesn't describe too much about beautiful lips, charming eyes, or delicate little face. It looks very smooth.

It looks good. It can be seen that the author has greatly reduced the details in the later chapters and the writing is getting better and better. Shura Field is very fragrant. Hehe, this subject matter is really great and I like it very much. I actually gave up on it for a while, but I really like this subject matter and picked it up again. Some people may be like me and can't stand it at first, but in the end it will become much better. The more I read, the better. I really have to stick to it and the rest of the writing will be much better. It's beautiful [Sending Hearts]

This subject matter is really awesome! The writing is also good, and the writing feels very immersive. Super super pretty. It's just that I feel vaguely that there may be a big pitfall in the future. That is to say, love may fall, but love will not fall, so what should the protagonist do? The protagonist is probably going to explode.

It's nice [Admiration] but the progress is a bit slow

Please update more, it's super nice, but the progress is so slow.